My First Manga Coloring..

xSeraphim

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Here is my first manga coloring and im not that good yet, im still confused on how using photoshop but i still want to share it even its not that good :p

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What do you think??

Any tips on how to improve???
 

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It's not bad, but ya need to use more colors...ya know? More shading...Play with opacity...try other brushes...
Just hope ya keep improving.
 

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respect bro. really nice :D
 

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I like it, very good job.

My only criticism would be the color of the background--it looks like they are in space. Perhaps a more realistic "sky". It's up to you to determine what it should be. Perhaps a sunny sky blue, or an ominous dark and cloudy setting? Your choice of color would set the tone of the manga page.

As it is right now, it feels like they are in a void. Other than that, very well done.
 

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Nice didn't know you were into colouring, keep on improving!
 

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8 tails is brown ithink but it looks good really good
 

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Atleast black robes look better than purple
 

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Definitely more colors and shades, but other than that you're on the right track:)
 

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That's impressive, even I can't do that. ;) Do you mind telling me how you did this? I've never used Photoshop in my life, you mind teaching me how to use it? :eek:
 

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his neck to to gray makes the ehad look photo hope on lighten it up a bit more tan
 

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Good jobs, although, the rock at that battle field are meant to be grey.
 

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Very nice for your first try! But I daresay that you do have some art expertise. Plus rep :)
 
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