[Approved] My first ever character bio

[Marcuss]

Basic Information
Name:Aion Masaki
Nickname:The Prodigy
Gender:Male
Age:16
Clan: /


Looks:
Blond hair, with Blue eyes. He's not too tall, also not very muscular and Also is very slim.

Personality:
Aion tends to keep to himself and train alone. He doesnt have many friends being that hes in the son of an akatsuki member so he is close to wildlife (animals) that he has meat threw out his quests and spend much of his time training his senses.

Village Info.None
Village of Birth: Iwagakure
Village of Alliance: /

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank:Gennin
Specialty:None
Elements:Wind - needs training
Your ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: A clone made of the user that can move (but cannot use any jutsu) This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note: The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element (Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads through the air. This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it. This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


Background Info.

History:
Aion father is a park of the Akatsuki. Aion trains very hard in the hopes of becoming a fully pledged member of the Akatsuki one day, but at the moment all he does is help his dad out with all the crappy jobs no one would want to undertake.
Aion is an only child his mother died while giving birth to him, his dad as stated above is a member of the Akatsuki. His dad has high expectations for him to become the worlds greatest ninja. As his mother died while giving birth to him hes never had a mother figure in his life which is why he is with drawn from the world around him.

Picture:

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Theme Song and Background Music:


Battles

Won:0
Lost: 0

~Approved~ edited stuff, you always need a village of alliance and/or village of birth

 

[BusinessManTeno]

that pic looks likea gay deidara.
also you are a genin
your speciality is none
the elements is the first element you want to learn

 

[Marcuss]

that pic looks likea gay deidara.
also you are a genin
your speciality is none
the elements is the first element you want to learn

ok changed the gennin part and the specialty as for the element part not sure what to do their as this is my first time doing any of this battle ground/rollplaying stuff

 

[~Anubis~]

1.Remove than clan part, Akatsuki isn't any clan it's an organization.
2.choose one of the 5 elements you want to learn first.you can't leave unknown on that part.

3. a bit more history and Background info... and remove the part of akatsuki there too cause i don't think there's any akatsuki member having a child

 

[Vision]

Get rid of organization. Your not part of the akatsuki. If you ever were part of it, it would go under village of alliance, but since your not just get rid of that part.

Where it says village info and none next to it. Get rid of the none as thats not what it's for.

 

[November 11]

Get rid of it all! Everything! Its trash! Burn it all! >^</

Spoiler

Nah I kid, not bad for a first. xd
I do suggest a bit more history added on. Another paragraph or so. ^-^

 

[-Sky-]

Awesome!