[Approved] My First BIOGRAPHY

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Noba Uzumaki

Basic Information

Name:Noba Uzumaki
Nickname:Blue lightning
Gender:Male
Age:20
Clan:Uzumaki clan

Looks:Noba is a young and muscular. He has blonde hair and blue-ish green eyes. He has thin eyebrows but
he has a scar on one of his eye brows. He wears a black shirt full sleeves with a white trouser
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Personality:He has a cool attitude he makes friends with everyone but he is hot tempered. He is merciful towards his enemies but he gives no mercy to ones who hurt his family. He is very loyal to his village and his clan.

Village Info

Village of Birth:Konohagakure
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Village of Alliance:
Konohagakure
Rank//Chakra Info

Ninja Rank:Genin
Specialty:
Elements:Wind still in training
Your ninjutsu:E rank and above

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info

History:His parents were from Uzushiogakure and they were captured and killed by the sound ninjas.He and his brother were adopted by a family living in konoha but their step parents died 2 years after adoption. He had a smaller brother. Everyone picked on his little brother. They both lived and trained near konoha in a forest. They were very slow but eventually became genin. They were rivals both of them wanted to become Hokages. They helped everyone around the village most of the people liked them. One day when they were on a mission they were captured but Noba ecaped but his little brother was captured and killed. From that day on Noba has been seeking revenge.

Other

Picture:
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Theme Song and Background Music:

Battles

Won:0
Lost:
0

~Approved~
 
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Man you have to fix that. And your title is wrong,you have to put the name of the character in the title.

Make a new one,and ask someone to delete this.

You have to write more details about your character and put some picture him


You have to ask someone,who is expirienced in these stuff to help you
 
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Okay I am really happy to note that you made that biography yourself. I really appreciate your effort.U_U
So just few things, that I would like to tell you,
-You can't have specialty at this moment.
-Since you are Genin by post, you can only learn one element and hence choose either wind or lightning.
-I think you need to mention that his parents were from Uzushiogakure, just add that there were from Uzhushiogakure in history.
-Add Pictures and background music, template generally needs to be complete. It also looks good you know.:p
Man you have to fix that. And your title is wrong,you have to put the name of the character in the title.
Title doesn't matter I think.:p
 
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Just edit it a little bit and it'll be great.

By the way it's a lot easier and more fun if you make a bio based on an actual anime character.

Just make sure that character isn't taken already.
 
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Just look through of some of the other bios around here and adapt yours a little more. Add pictures etc. You got enough time until this will be either be approved or declined.

Btw you can take every character you want to you don't need to invent one.

You can take everybody from Naruto you want and Non-naruto characters only if they aren't taken (use the search bar)
 
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Just look through of some of the other bios around here and adapt yours a little more. Add pictures etc. You got enough time until this will be either be approved or declined.

Btw you can take every character you want to you don't need to invent one.

You can take everybody from Naruto you want and Non-naruto characters only if they aren't taken (use the search bar)
Not ANYONE. For example u cant just pick up sasuke with a genin post rank. Also you cant just pick up nagato, that requires a test.
 

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Glad to see people helping new guys instead of the usual crap
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As for my contribution, Refer to my signature and take a browse through the Training Grounds and Special Biography rules to learn more about the RP and how to get started on your training, welcome to the RP you poor wonderful soul.
 

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Glad to see people helping new guys instead of the usual crap
_____

As for my contribution, Refer to my signature and take a browse through the Training Grounds and Special Biography rules to learn more about the RP and how to get started on your training, welcome to the RP you poor wonderful soul.
lol.

OT: Nothing to say that hasn't been said already, so nice bio.
 

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Glad to see people helping new guys instead of the usual crap
_____

As for my contribution, Refer to my signature and take a browse through the Training Grounds and Special Biography rules to learn more about the RP and how to get started on your training, welcome to the RP you poor wonderful soul.
I got a rep from Reborn! ^^
 
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