My first bio

Rougeninja91

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Name: Kuro Mizawa
Age:19
Village affiliation:Hidden Mist village

Bio-Born into a family of ninja, Kuro had hoped to follow in his fathers footsteps. However, when his father is killed during an uprising, Kuro's view of the shinobi life sours. He rose through the ranks quickly, but all the while he questioned why he remained alive while his father, who was twice the warrior he was, died. But in the end, he knew as long as his mother needed him, he would do his best to stay that way.

Then came the day that broke him entirely. A group of ninja, unhappy with the way the village was run, attempted a coup to overthrow the Mizukage. Eventually, they were beaten back and fled the village, but not before Kuro's mother was killed.

Now, he finds himself just going through the motions of his life now as a Mist Jounin. He knows his parents would want him to continue, but he wonders what the point is by now.

Okay, that was my first bio. Please don't be too harsh. I tried
 

Erzo

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You need 50 posts to make a biography.
Also next time use this template :
 

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There's a template for you to follow bro.
 

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It's alright, I suggest you visit the Forum games and get 50 posts (Without spamming.)
Once you've done that use the template I've linked you to try again.
Also read the global rules :

If you need any further help after that, feel free to message me.
 

Rougeninja91

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You shouldn't, my first biography was crappy as well. O_O

Well, i just needed to know if that was an okay start, or if it was just all together bad.
 

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Well, i just needed to know if that was an okay start, or if it was just all together bad.

It's alright, you just missed out a lot of essential stuff needed for it to get approved. Look at my post above about the forum games and filling in the template >.<
 

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It's alright, you just missed out a lot of essential stuff needed for it to get approved. Look at my post above about the forum games and filling in the template >.<

I actually appreciate you pointing it out.
 

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I actually appreciate you pointing it out.

It's fine. Now you got like 8 posts you can get to 50 easily in forum games. Re-make your biography then. I'll help you out if you need anything.
 
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