My first Bio

White Fang18

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Basic Info
Name: Hatake, Leo
Nickname: White Fang Jr.
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Clan: The Hatake Family

Looks
He is a short haired ninja, with black yellowish hair, honey brown- greenish eye color, no skinny nor fact, something in between, 5 feet 9 inches tall, somewhat muscular.

Personality
People like to be around him, he is a very friendly and kind ninja. He rathers be in calm and happy, otherwise, when he gets angry, he losses control and rational thinking and becomes somewhat, reckless toward other people, when angered, his other teammates jump in at the same time to calm him down, not because they can't beat him, but to avoid injuries toward the people around him, and avoid any casualties that might happen, he doesn't loss counsieness however, he is always aware of what's happening, and what his teammates are doing. When in battle, he fights defensively for a while, to study and develop a counter strategy against his opponent, and for when counter attacks, his counter attack is devastating, being this said, sometimes his teammates call him the brains of the group. When it comes to making critical desisions he makes the best choices for the mission, and the safety for his teammates as well.

Rank// Chakra info
Ninja Rank: Chuunin
Specialty: Taijutsu, close and mid range, training to use Lighting Style and Fire Style Jutsu, currently training to use Summoning Jutsu as well, strategy comes when Leo is in a pinch
Elements: Lighting and Fire
Your Ninjutsu: (Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)




Background Info
Hatake Leo was born into the Hatake Family, being his uncle the White Fang of the Leaf, Hatake, Sakumo and his cousin The Copy Ninja Hatake, Kakashi. His parents were very ables ninjas, both of them being full fledge Jonnins. Short after Leo started the Ninja Academy, his parents were in a S-rank Mission, the mission was a success but at a heavy cost. 3 out of the 4 ninjas performing the mission didn't make it back, in those three, Leo's parents were in. The success of the mission brought prosperity, wealth and stability to the Hidden Leaf Village. After learning this, the village gave Leo a great deal of respect and sympathy toward the boy because of his parents. Because of what his parents had done, this motivated Leo to graduate with high scores from the Ninja Academy to become a Genin. As time passed, Leo trained hard in his skills, many times avoiding the Chuunin Exams to train become a stronger Genin, and when the time come he would be ready to Take the Chuunin Exams. Because he was a really strong Genin, he usually challenged fellow Chuunin ninjas from the village to spar with him for a while, and because he was training most of the time, he was able to keep up and sometimes beat his Chuunin opponents. When in time of training, his uncle Sakumo use to drop in from time, to time to check on Leo, without Leo even realizing it, and when Sakumo was gone, it was Kakashi turn to do what his father used to do towards Leo. Originately, the nickname The White Fang Jr. was reserved for Kakashi, but since Kakashi became The Copy Ninja, that nickname was given to Leo. Because Leo had the skills of a Chuunin yet he was still a Genin, the Hokage decided to test him by giving him a B-Rank mission, which could give prosperity to the village, which he performed with flying colors. Leo once however, asked the Hokage a very important request, to never let him make a mission with his cousin Hatake, Kakashi, although, Kakashi was his only family left and he didn't want to lose him on a mission the same way he lost his parents, knowing that Kakashi would feel the same, and none of them would worry towards each other during the mission, Leo later became a Chuunin at age 16, being of the strongest Genin in the village before going into the Chuunin stage.

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aradmehr

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Tree climbing is not a jutsu,its training,and put some pics and information about your jutsues as well.
 

Kryptiic

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It's ok for first but remove 3 last jutsu
 

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Needs a facelift. O___O

What you need

-Pictures (the more the better)
-Fix youtube vids (if you notice in the yt url there is a V=somerandom numbers&letters You only copy after the = sign. Then put it into the yt thing.

PHP:
[YOUTUBE]Whgyxiasdh[/YOUTUBE]

And you cant specialize in anything yet unless you have had training.
 
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JojocIaw

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Done. by the way don't be so hard on me this is the first time doing one bio and somebody said pictures were optional :shrug:

Who told you that lie?

The more pictures you have the better off your bio will look.

But if you want it to look like crap don't put any. Besides its your choice. U_U
 

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i think it was good for a first time :) but needs a little fixing ...
 

White Fang18

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Who told you that lie?

The more pictures you have the better off your bio will look.

But if you want it to look like crap don't put any. Besides its your choice. U_U

Ok fix chill dude U_U
 

hawaiianmike

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Done. by the way don't be so hard on me this is the first time doing one bio and somebody said pictures were optional :shrug:

Thau shall not talk like that to Norwegian. He's just trying to help you out.
Trust it may sound like they are being mean, but thats just constructive criticism.
Besides how hard is it to google some random pic of a dude you like? We don't expect you to draw out everything and make it super badass. It's just that Cali like to see something with effort put into it.
Trust we all went through the same thing when we made our first. Nobody makes a perfect first bio.
But good luck getting approved dude.
 

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Remove all those specialties, all of them. You have none.

Also remove one element, only place the first one you want to learn and add these jutsu's instead of just their names:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)
 

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Put the jutsu inside spoiler tags. Looks a little nicer.
 

White Fang18

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Put the jutsu inside spoiler tags. Looks a little nicer.

Yeah, about that.... I'm not so good with stuff like that, here at the Base, so far I'm able to put pics and links :eek:, my Sig took me an eternity to put it on and, my You Tube videos are a fail, I don't know how to post them or the spoiler tags as you say, you think I didn't think about it :shrug:
 

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the info is good for a first timer but you need some pictures. nice job.
 
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