[Gimp] My first attempt at lineart

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Well, the title says all. This was my first attempt at a Naruto lineart. I would appreciate some constructive criticism so I can get better at this

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Well, I'm not quite finished with this coloring yet since I have to add the shading and whatnot (even though I kinda suck at that Lol)

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Well I added this since I don't wanna be accused of "stealing" someones work so here it is Lol

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[Anonn]

It looks good, but bro.. darken the blue.. it is wayyyy to bright. it also brings an overkill in the image and it doesn't make it look like everything is whole.. (you know what i mean) Adding shades is not thatttt hard just add a light source (optimal) and make a shade! Overal it's looking great just some minor points.

 

[Cfighter]

It looks amazing. Great job! If I had to tell you something to fix, the only thing I can see is maybe to darken the blue just a tiny bit. But that is of course only a personal opinion. It looks great either way.

 

[XMorpheus]

It looks pretty good for me.

 

[Parrish]

Look at dat Manga proof.

 

[Child Of The Great Empire]

Looks good. I think you should just do the skin better.

 

[Blinkie Uchiha]

Looks really colourful and awesome

 

[Vegeta]

Great work