Very good for a first attempt but to practice the proportions and to get more detail I suggest you do a larger version and maybe look up a tutorial on you-tube, by doing it larger you can add more detail
Other than that it looks good, I like the varying tones in the iris : )
Wow, that's actually pretty good. Even better, since it's your first try. I would recommend making the pupil a tad bit smaller and the iris looks a little too large as well. But those are things anyone can bypass, excellent job.
thanks for the feedback everyone=D..yea I know that the pupil and iris are a little big but that just something im gonna have to work on in the future lol
Not too bad kid. Piece of advice - Don't ever use a ruler thingy type of notebook. Always use a blank one. And no eraser's either. And who know's - You might be the next Da Vinci. Keep it up!!