My finished bio!

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I already posted an unfinished really crappy version of my bio so after some feedback it is finally complete (this is my first bio).
Basic Information

Name: Phantom Malpense
Nickname: The Mad Demon
Gender: Male
Age: 27
Clan: --
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Looks: tall, about 6'3'' with light grey, almost silver hair that is mid length but covers his right eye. He wears a sleeveless blue shirt with crimson red tattoos depicting dragons cover his arms. He has deep purple eyes. He has red bands going up his arm. He seems to have a permanent smirk. He wears long black pants and red sandals. when committing a murder or planing on doing so he wears a mask made out of human bones.


Personality: most people think death isn’t funny, unless you’re Phantom that is. Then it becomes hilarious. Most people think of him as completely insane, kind of like Jugo with his bloodlust but Phantoms urge to kill doesn’t go away, and unlike Jugo he doesn’t want it to.

Village Info: born in kirigakure, banished to suna, moved to konoha.

Village of Birth: kirigakure.
Village of Alliance: sunagakure and iwagakure(all has been forgiven)

Rank//Chakra Info

Ninja Rank: Chunin.
Specialty: N/A
Elements: suiton (needs training)
Your ninjutsu:

Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique
Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)





Background Info/history: Phantom was born, well completely insane. By the time he was six he had been accused of 479 cases of murder in kirigakure. Soon, he was banished to the deserts surrounding suna. One day while wandering around, close to starving to death, a Konoha Shinobi named Minato found him. Minato wasn’t much help…. But he did give him a map to show him how to get back to kirigakure. Problem was Minato gave him the wrong map, this was one directed to Konoha. Finally he reached Konoha. After 2 years of working he got a reputation in Konoha. “That one really insane dude” was what they called him, and he liked it. He is now a genin in konoha and has only been accused of 17 cases of murder, the prosecutors always failed, probably because they ended up dead. famous quote of phantom- "i used to be crazy... really crazy! they put me in a room. a round room. there were rats... round rats..... on wheels.... they drove me CRAAAAZY..... speaking of crazy.....i used to be crazy... really crazy! they put me in a room. a round room. there were rats... round rats..... on wheels.... they drove me CRAAAAZY..... speaking of crazy.....i used to be crazy... really crazy! they put me in a room. a round room. there were rats... round rats..... on wheels.... they drove me CRAAAAZY..... speaking of crazy.....



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Theme Song and Background Music: theme song, not afraid by Eminem.

Battles

Won: ----
Lost: -----


~Approved~ have fun RPing ^^
 
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Artemis81

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Meh. Most first biographies lack pictures, so it would be wise to scatter them about.
 

sky4life

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Nice For a First One,Try to add more pictures.
 

Sonnelion

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Nice job for a first bio although as eveyone else said needs at least one or two more pictures.
 

Kung Fro

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Neat job on yo first one.
 

Drāgy

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Everything is well written and well done, nice bio
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