My Failed Naruto Predictions 660

Rate The Chapter 1-5

  • 1. Horrible...

    Votes: 1 9.1%
  • 2. Bad.

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • 3. Average.

    Votes: 0 0.0%
  • 4. Good.

    Votes: 4 36.4%
  • 5. Awesome!

    Votes: 6 54.5%

  • Total voters
    11

Guntah

Active member
Elite
Joined
Feb 20, 2013
Messages
9,753
Kin
148💸
Kumi
78💴
Trait Points
0⚔️
I know I promised this would be the last flashback chapter, however It was too much content for one chapter only. Not much to say about this one so…please leave a comment review on the chapter, please vote on the pool and if you are new and interested in the fanfiction the first link is just down there. Oh, and THIS IS A FANFICTION!!! NOT A 660 PREDICTION!!!

Previous:

Next:

First:


Chapter 660: A dream come true


*From where we left, Minato is still there, with his Rasengan*

A: What can you expect with that, a spinning ball of chakra?

Minato: You shouldn’t judge a book by its cover….

A: *Smirks* Well, well… then show me what this attack is capable of…*Goes into his lightning armor mode* If you can catch me, that is…

Minato (thinking): He’s going full speed against me…and my Rasengan isn’t ready yet…damnit, ill have to hold him a bit…

A: Here I go!! *A Dashes at Minato and jumps in the air, trying to lend in him with a kick but right before he hits Minato telleports* Drop Kick!! *Looks at Minato, who has suddenly appeared at a nearby tree and dashes towards him* Lightning Chop!!*Lands a Karate Chop in the tree, breaking it in half, Minato jumps seconds before the attack hits the tree right before A goes after him again*

Minato (thinking): Damnit…I wont be able to escape this one…

A: Thunder Meteor Smash!! *He does the normal Meteor Smash but this time he focus all the lightning in his hands, not only throwing Minato in the ground, but burning his flak jacket too* Now you will learn not to mess with the cloud!!

Minato (thinking): Its ready….

A: Guilotine Drop!!! *Falls with his leg aiming for Minato`s head, the Yellow Flash however disapears with his FTG right before the kick hits*

A (thinking): Damn… if this one had hit it would be over for him.

*Minato reappears on the tree A destroyed with his chop*

Minato: Its ready…

A: Don’t think you won just yet, I`ll-

Minato: Lightning Contain Seal…*Makes the tiger handseal with one of his hands and A`s lightning armor disapears*

A: What the-

Minato: Did you think the seal I placed on you back there with my clone was a Flying Thunder God Seal? No… I am smarter than that. This seal was made especially for Nintaijutsu fighters with Lightning Chakra Nature. It seals yout lightning armor for a limited time.

A: You have a seal for everything….

Minato: *Smirks* Dating an Uzumaki has its bright sides…But anyway…its time for you to feel the wrath of my strongest Rasengan!! I call it the Super Final Spiraling Sky Sphere Rasengan!! *The Rasengan he was charging is revealed to have acquired a bigger size than normal and a Cyan color*

A (thinking): Spiraling what?

Minato: Now…*Teleports a kunai to his hand and jumps towards A*Here I go!!

A: *Smirks* You wont be able to touch me! You`re going straight against my fist! *Prepares a punch*

Minato: That’s what you think…*Minato throws his kunai against A and right after doing so, he teleports a second kunai to his same hand and throws it against the first powered by wind chakra, the second kunai changes the position of the first, launching it towards A`s chest* Now.*Minato escapes the punch that was about to hit his face and teleports to the kunai that was going towards A, appearing right in front of him, with his Rasengan ready* RASENGAN!!!

A (thinking): Crap…

*Minato Shoves the cyan ball on A`s abdomen, causing the ground around them to break and a wind with the collour of the Rasengan starts blowing around both oponents before the spiraling sphere explodes, launching A back against the higher part part of a tree and making him loose consciousness *

Minato: Yes…i…did it…! *Falls to the ground, panting heavily* I…really did it…

*Sudenly, out of nowhere a black lightning bolt falls on Minato, however he teleports right before the bolt touches the ground*

Minato (thinking): What the hell?! That cant be…

*The Third Raikage lands where Minato previously was*

Third Raikage: Minato Namikaze…

Minato: The Third Raikage…

Third Raikage: I see why you couldn’t defeat the enemy, A…this man is quite the opponent.

A: Father…*Gets up with dificulty*I disgraced the tittle of A that you gave me…

Minato (thinking): He is still counscious…even after

Third Raikage: Don’t worry my son, its not like you went down without a fight as I see…

*Minato gets up, tired, but still able to fight*

Minato (thinking): Crap…this is bad

Third Raikage: To dodge my Dark Demon Bolt….quite the achievement…But lets see you dodge this…*Makes the Ram handseal* Lightning Style: Black Panther!! *A panther made of lightning comes out of his black lightning enfused hands and dashes towards Minato*

Minato (thinking): Damnit… I wont be able to dodge this one…

???: Earth Style: Hiding Mole!!*Someone comes out of the ground but we arent able to see who it is because of the dust raised when he comes out of the earth* Earth Style: Mud Wall!! *A mud wall raises between Minato and the Black Panther, the Black Panther explodes against the wall, leaving nothing behind*

Minato: Damnit…I told you not to come….

Third Raikage: Well, well…for you to appear…

*The dust is blown off by the wind and the person standing between Minato and the Third is revealed to be Kakashi*

A: Kakashi of the Sharingan…

Minato: KAKASHI!! WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING HERE?!

Kakashi: I won’t let anyone touch my comrades, sensei!

Minato: Don’t do this…that man…he is out of your league…

Kakashi: Don’t worry…*Reveals his Sharingan*I will only hold him back a bit….only until the reinforcements arrive…

Minato (thinking): Reinforcements…who would that be?

*Kakashi dashes towards the third, Kunai ready*

Third Raikage: IRON CLAW!!!*Dashes towards Kakshi and grabs his head before shoving him down in the ground, with that Kakashi disapears with in a poof*

Third Raikage (thinking): Shadow Clone…

*Kakashi appears behind the Raikage, running with lightning in his hand*

Kakashi: Lightning Blade!!*Thrusts his hand into the Raikage, but the man simply grabs Kakashi`s arm and throws him back*

Third Raikage: This will finish you!!!*An armor appears around him and he uses the hell stab with four of his fingers aiming at Kakashi`s chest* Hell Stab!!

Kakashi(thinking): F*ck...

Minato: NO!!!*Apears at Kakashi`s left and pushes him away, receiving the hell stab head on to his chest, the impact of the attack throws him against a nearby tree*

Kakashi: SENSEI!!

Third Raikage:…

Kakashi: *Runs towards Minato* Sensei!! You`ll be okay! Don’t worry, Rin and the others will arrive here soon enough!!

Minato (with difficulty): Ugh…*Spits blood* Good thing you kept that kunai i gave you with you Kakashi! Otherwise...

Kakashi: Dont talk, sensei...just rest...

Third Raikage: Its not use…Without treatment he will die in only a few minutes…*His four fingered blade turns into a three fingered one* Ill put him out of his misery now… *Dashes towards Minato* This is it…

???: Fire Style: Fireball Jutsu!!*A wall of fire is raised between Minato and the Raikage*

Third Raikage (thinking):What the-

*Out of the fire then comes Jiraiya with a Rasengan in his hand*

Jiraiya: Rasengan!! *Lands the blue sphere in the man`s abdomen, however, all it does is throwing the Raikage back*

Third Raikage: Jiraiya of the Sannin…

Jiraiya: Don’t you dare lay a finger on my student A…

Third Raikage: A? That’s my old title…call me the Third Raikage. And if you wanted me to stay away from your student he should have arrived earlier…

Jiraiya: Bastard…

*Meanwhile, Rin lands near Minato*

Rin: Sensei!! Are you ok?

Kakashi: Rin! He is very wounded!! Try to threat that wound of his…

Jiraiya: Let’s not do this, Raikage…it would benefit neither of us…

Third Raikage: That is true…if we fought our strength would be equally matched…we would both be severily hurt, if not dead…A! Grab your brother and lets get going!

A: Yes, father!*Walks towards B and grabs his unconscious body*

Minato (with difficulty): Hey A!

*A turns to look at the Yellow flash*

A: What is it?

Minato (with difficulty): *Smiles* Don’t forget what I told you about B!

*A seems surprised and Minato laughs it off*

Kakashi: Sensei…

Jiraiya (thinking): Minato…*Smiles*you surpassed me already!

A: *Lightly laughs* I will want a rematch, Yellow Flash!

Minato (with difficulty): Don’t worry….bout it…*Closes his eyes*

Kakashi: Sensei!! Hey Sensei!! Rin! Do something!

Rin: Im trying, but it seems like he fainted!!

Third Raikage: A! Lets go!

A: Im following Father.

*The Cloud Nin dash off*

Jiraiya: Well, well…we should be going too now…



*Minato wakes up in a hospital room, siting next to his bed is Hiruzen Sarutobi, the THrid Hokage*

Sarutobi: Oh, so you woke up? About time. *Smiles*

Minato: Lord…Third?

Sarutobi: Please, call me Hiruzen.

Minato: If you insist Lord-…Hiruzen.

Sarutobi: I was waiting for you to wake up…Im here for a reason.

Minato: What reason?

Hiruzen: Im getting old, Minato…too old for my job…since the end of the third ninja war I have been looking for a replacement. My first thought was Jiraiya, but he doesn’t want the position.

Minato: Did you try the other two sannin?

Hiruzen: Orochimaru….hes not fit for the job and I couldn’t find Tsunade. But Jiraiya gave me another option.

Minato: Who would be that?

Sarutobi (thinking): He still hasn’t realized it? Maybe I should have waited more…he just woke up after all…

Sarutobi: Well, I’ve been watching this candidate in special. He`s been proving himself several times and even made a name for himself in the third ninja world war. A one of a kind man, the prodigy of a generation. I was almost certain of my choice but I only needed a small confirmation of his true intentions, a confirmation he gave me about a week ago by risking his life to save one of his students. The only thing is that I had to wait for his awakening so I could talk to him…

Minato: You cant be talking about…

Sarutobi: Finaly you realized…Fourth Hokage.

Extra Note: So I saw this thread if who would win in a battle between the Third Raikage and Jiraiya…interesting thread, I think they`re equals so…
 
Last edited:
  • Like
Reactions: Skywardsword

danivass

Member
Joined
Dec 11, 2009
Messages
393
Kin
0💸
Kumi
0💴
Trait Points
0⚔️
Thanks for linking me, I probably would have missed this one :p I liked this chapter a lot, Minato's moves and the reinforcements to both sides were a good move in my opinion. Keep up the awesome work =D
 
Top