Thirty chapters…WOW. I am in a good humor and in a mood for writing, yesterday I found out that one of my loyal readers, one of those who read this fanfic from chapter 1 to now, maybe that’s it maybe its just that I am currently writing chapter 30… And for those who do not like the flashback, this will be a little reminder of the war. Please leave a comment, vote on the poll and last but not least if you are new to the fanfiction, link to the first is just below.
Previous:
Next:
First:
Chapter 657: Saved By The Enemy
*Minato opens his eyes while laid down on a bed and looks around to see a small room*
Minato: What…? Where am I?
Jiraiya: You are in the inn room of a nearby town from where we were training.
Minato: What….? *Looks at his right to see Jiraiya sited next to the bed*…how long was I asleep
Jiraiya: Three days.
Minato: Wow…that explains why I’m so starving…but…the test…did…did I pass the test?
Jiraiya: Well...you couldn’t do it in time…actually… three minutes late…
Minato (Disappointed): Oh…
Jiraiya: But…since you mastered the Flying Thunder God Technique I guess…I will give you a small bonus time…five minutes, how about that?
Minato: Really? But, that would mean-
Jiraiya: Yup…you pass!
Minato: Sweet! That means that we will go back home and that I can sign the summoning contract!
Jiraiya: Yeah…and I have a present to you. *Reaches for his Kunai pocket and pulls out a three bladed Kunai with the Thunder God Seal* I asked for the blacksmith to design one of those for you. Its more fit to your fighting style, it’s good for close combat, it’s a bit heavier but you`ll get used to it…*Handles it to Minato*
Minato (thinking): Wow…the way it’s designed is fit for close combat and for a short range Kunai launch…but if I enhance it with wind chakra…
Jiraiya: What do you think? Do you like it?
Minato: It’s awesome, Sensei!
Jiraiya: *Smiles* I knew you`d like it! Now…are you still hungry? I saw a ramen stand while walking through the city. Maybe we could go there to commemorate your
Minato: Yeah, sounds good to me. Tell your original self I will be ready in a few minutes.
Jiraiya (thinking): Well, well…he can actually see I’m a shadow clone…this boy never ceases to amaze me… *Disappears in a poof*
Minato (thinking): I passed…*Looks to the table near his bed and grabs his forehead protector from it* Kushina…I can’t wait to meet you again…
…
Minato (Narrator): Two days after that we arrived back in Konoha, without a team…i…without a team I couldn’t really be a normal Genin…to say the truth the first thing I wanted to do when I arrived was to see your mother…but I needed to get a rank before doing so…
*The third Hokage is on his room, with his paperwork when suddenly the door knocks*
Sarutobi: You may enter
*The door opens and Jiraiya and Minato enter through It (Minato is wearing a white and blue jacket and black pants, Jiraiya is in the Jonin attire)*
Jiraiya: Lord third.
Sarutobi: I see…you arrived early, Jiraiya…from your last report you were far south in the land of fire, and that arrived only five hours ago.
Jiraiya: *Smiles* Minato helped a bit, he’s faster than me, you know?
Sarutobi: *Raises an eyebrow* How is that?
*Minato smiles and shows his kunai in his classic Minato way (hanging by the index finger)*
Sarutobi: But that’s-
Minato: Yup! *Throws the kunai to the ceiling and teleports and catches it before it touches the ceiling* The Flying Thunder God Technique!
Sarutobi (thinking): Amazing! The advanced technique developed by the Second Hokage mastered by such a young boy…
*That moment the doors opens in the room to reveal an infuriated Kushina*
Kushina: Minato!!!*Starts walking towards the boy *
Minato: *Falls from the ceiling and lands in the ground on his feet* Hey there Kushina!
Sarutobi: Young girl you shouldn’t burst in the Hokage`s office-
Kushina: YOU!! *Punches Minato in the back of his head*
Minato: OW! Why did you do that?!
Kushina: The day you left you promised me that once you returned I would be the first one you would go see!
Minato: I wanted to keep that promise but-
Kushina: Too late for buts, Minato! Suffer the consequences! *Prepares to punch Minato but before the punch touches the boy`s face, he disappears* Huh? Where did he go?
Jiraiya: I intended to keep my promise, one of the best. That boy is Jonin level at least.
Sarutobi: *Smiles* I will assign Minato to the Anbu Black Ops, we shall see what he does…
Kushina: What?! The Anbu?! Are you crazy?! He might get hurt!
Sarutobi: Kushina, I know that you are worried about him but please trust us…and also…please don’t enter in my office without permission…
Kushina: Well…*Laughs nervously* I…I will be going...*Slowly walks away out of the room*
Jiraiya: You may come out, Minato. * Minato jumps in the enters the office by the window*
Minato: Kushina…I swear…
Sarutobi: Don’t worry, she is just angry…let time wash away her bitterness. You will be starting your work at the Anbu black Ops tomorrow morning, ok Minato?
Minato: *Smiles* Yes, lord third.
Sarutobi: Be here tomorrow Morning, you will receive your first asgnment and your uniform then.
Minato: Yes, lord third.
Sarutobi: Minato Namikaze, you are dismissed.
* Nods before disappearing midair*
…
Minato(Narrator): If I were to tell you all that has happened in those years, Naruto… well, we would be here for some time… the time we don’t have. So I`ll just skip five years. Tired of the Anbu black Ops regime, I decided to try having my own team of Genin. Those were called Kakashi Hatake…
Naruto: That’s Kakashi sensei…
Minato: Rin Nohara…
Naruto: Wait, were have I heard this name before…?
Minato: And…
Naruto: And?
Minato: …*Takes a deep breath* And Obito Uchiha…
Naruto: But…no...
Minato: Yes…he is out there, killing people…this is all my fault, this whole war
Naruto: Don’t think like that, dad…it wasn’t your fault…
Minato: Naruto…just please let me continue my story.
Naruto: If it makes you feel better, dad…
Minato: Then let’s continue…
…
*The three Hokage bodyguards are seen in a triangle formation around the 4 kages and Tsunade`s body, who is wrapped around the Raikage`s cloak, all of them doing the tiger handseal*
A: Is it ready yet? This is taking quite the time…
Genma: I am sorry, Lord Raikage…trying to teleport three people simultaneously is not easy…
Mei: Don’t worry Raikage, we will be able to reach the alliance in time. They are almost crossing borders with the Land of Fire by now…
Gaara: How would you know?
Mei: I have sensor abilities, so many shinobi together…it’s difficult not to-!!*Looks at the top of a nearby mountain* Show yourself…
*Out of the top of a nearby mountain the Black Zetsu emerges*
Zetsu: Hello there, my dear kages! *Points his arm to them, the arm turns into a wood spike.*
A: YOU!!*Enters his lightning armor but falls to the ground as he does so, the armor then deactivates itself*
Zetsu: No, no, no…you all need to rest…you may have been healed but you are in no condition to fight, neither of you move, I will decide who I kill first now…
Mei: Chojuro was supposed to deal with you!! What happened to him?!
Zetsu: The boy? Well…one thing I can tell you… he will have his hands full for a while…
…
*Chojuro is seen with his Hiramekarei defending himself from a small army of Zetsu*
Chojuro (thinking): Damnit…
(Flashback)
*Chojuro is pressing the Hiramekarei against the Black Zetsu`s neck when suddenly the Hashirama clone starts laughing*
Chojuro: Why are you laughing?
Black Zetsu: You fell for it…
*Suddenly, out of the ground an army of White Zetsu come out*
Zetsu Army: Hellooooo!
*The Zetsu army starts attacking the smaller army of Shinobi*
(Flashback end)
Chojuro (thinking): They killed every single ninja around me…I’m the only one left and I’m almost out of chakra…
*A Zetsu jumps towards Chojuro ready to attack*
???: Water Style: Water Dragon Jutsu!! *A Water Dragon comes out of nowhere and swipes the Zetsu away*
Chojuro: What…?
*Team Taka (Minus Sasuke) lands on front of Chojuro*
Suigetsu: Hey there, Chojuro...long time no see.
Chojuro: Suigetsu…?*Looks at Karin* You! You are Sasuke Uchiha`s underling!
Karin: Underling?! Who are you are you calling underling?
Suigetsu: Karin…just heal the guy.
Karin: What makes you think you can give me orders?
Suigetsu: Because Sasuke put me in command, not you.
Karin: Humph…ok then…I’ll do it.
Suigetsu: Good, hey Juugo! Are you ready?
Juugo: *Enters his cursed seal form*HAHAHAHAHA!!! IM GONNA KILL YOU ALL!!
Suigetsu: I’ll take that as a yes. And Chojuro…
Chojuro: What?
Suigetsu: May I take a look at your sword?
Chojuro: Not a chance!!
Suigetsu: *Sighs* It was worth a shot…*Grabs a kunai from his pocket and holds it with his teeth (Zabuza Style) * Juugo! Let’s go!
Juugo: HAHAHAHAHA!! *Uses his arm to hurl around a Zetsu, using it as a weapon to hit the others*
Suigetsu: Hey! Leave some for me! *Dashes off after Juugo*
…
*Back to Black Zetsu and the Kages…*
Black Zetsu: Now, now, now…who should I kill first…*Looks at the Mizukage* You…you tried to stop me earlier…You go first…now….Die!!* Prepares his wood spike to be launched when suddenly a sword goes through his chest* What the-
A: No way…
Mei: It’s him…
Black Zetsu: Why…*The sword is revealed to be Sasuke`s* Why did you betray us…?
Ohnoki: Teleport us out of here! Now!
Raido: Genma! Keitaro!
Gemna: Yeah, I know.
Keitaro: Let’s do this…
Hokage Bodyguards (Simultaneously): Here we go!! *The three simultaneously make the tiger handseal* Flying Thunder God Technique!! *The four Kages, Tsunade`s body and the three bodyguards disappear leaving nothing behind*
Black Zetsu: Sasuke…you bastard…
Sasuke: You are pretty informed, huh Zetsu? *Uses lightning enhancement on his sword to cut Zetsu`s body to his shoulder before pressing it against his neck* So tell me…where is Madara?
Extra Note: I didnt add Minato`s Narrative on the adventures of the old team 7 because it was already told. Just look at chapter 599 (The real one, not on the fanfic) if you want to know what Minato told Naruto.
Previous:
You must be registered for see links
Next:
You must be registered for see links
First:
You must be registered for see links
Chapter 657: Saved By The Enemy
*Minato opens his eyes while laid down on a bed and looks around to see a small room*
Minato: What…? Where am I?
Jiraiya: You are in the inn room of a nearby town from where we were training.
Minato: What….? *Looks at his right to see Jiraiya sited next to the bed*…how long was I asleep
Jiraiya: Three days.
Minato: Wow…that explains why I’m so starving…but…the test…did…did I pass the test?
Jiraiya: Well...you couldn’t do it in time…actually… three minutes late…
Minato (Disappointed): Oh…
Jiraiya: But…since you mastered the Flying Thunder God Technique I guess…I will give you a small bonus time…five minutes, how about that?
Minato: Really? But, that would mean-
Jiraiya: Yup…you pass!
Minato: Sweet! That means that we will go back home and that I can sign the summoning contract!
Jiraiya: Yeah…and I have a present to you. *Reaches for his Kunai pocket and pulls out a three bladed Kunai with the Thunder God Seal* I asked for the blacksmith to design one of those for you. Its more fit to your fighting style, it’s good for close combat, it’s a bit heavier but you`ll get used to it…*Handles it to Minato*
Minato (thinking): Wow…the way it’s designed is fit for close combat and for a short range Kunai launch…but if I enhance it with wind chakra…
Jiraiya: What do you think? Do you like it?
Minato: It’s awesome, Sensei!
Jiraiya: *Smiles* I knew you`d like it! Now…are you still hungry? I saw a ramen stand while walking through the city. Maybe we could go there to commemorate your
Minato: Yeah, sounds good to me. Tell your original self I will be ready in a few minutes.
Jiraiya (thinking): Well, well…he can actually see I’m a shadow clone…this boy never ceases to amaze me… *Disappears in a poof*
Minato (thinking): I passed…*Looks to the table near his bed and grabs his forehead protector from it* Kushina…I can’t wait to meet you again…
…
Minato (Narrator): Two days after that we arrived back in Konoha, without a team…i…without a team I couldn’t really be a normal Genin…to say the truth the first thing I wanted to do when I arrived was to see your mother…but I needed to get a rank before doing so…
*The third Hokage is on his room, with his paperwork when suddenly the door knocks*
Sarutobi: You may enter
*The door opens and Jiraiya and Minato enter through It (Minato is wearing a white and blue jacket and black pants, Jiraiya is in the Jonin attire)*
Jiraiya: Lord third.
Sarutobi: I see…you arrived early, Jiraiya…from your last report you were far south in the land of fire, and that arrived only five hours ago.
Jiraiya: *Smiles* Minato helped a bit, he’s faster than me, you know?
Sarutobi: *Raises an eyebrow* How is that?
*Minato smiles and shows his kunai in his classic Minato way (hanging by the index finger)*
Sarutobi: But that’s-
Minato: Yup! *Throws the kunai to the ceiling and teleports and catches it before it touches the ceiling* The Flying Thunder God Technique!
Sarutobi (thinking): Amazing! The advanced technique developed by the Second Hokage mastered by such a young boy…
*That moment the doors opens in the room to reveal an infuriated Kushina*
Kushina: Minato!!!*Starts walking towards the boy *
Minato: *Falls from the ceiling and lands in the ground on his feet* Hey there Kushina!
Sarutobi: Young girl you shouldn’t burst in the Hokage`s office-
Kushina: YOU!! *Punches Minato in the back of his head*
Minato: OW! Why did you do that?!
Kushina: The day you left you promised me that once you returned I would be the first one you would go see!
Minato: I wanted to keep that promise but-
Kushina: Too late for buts, Minato! Suffer the consequences! *Prepares to punch Minato but before the punch touches the boy`s face, he disappears* Huh? Where did he go?
Jiraiya: I intended to keep my promise, one of the best. That boy is Jonin level at least.
Sarutobi: *Smiles* I will assign Minato to the Anbu Black Ops, we shall see what he does…
Kushina: What?! The Anbu?! Are you crazy?! He might get hurt!
Sarutobi: Kushina, I know that you are worried about him but please trust us…and also…please don’t enter in my office without permission…
Kushina: Well…*Laughs nervously* I…I will be going...*Slowly walks away out of the room*
Jiraiya: You may come out, Minato. * Minato jumps in the enters the office by the window*
Minato: Kushina…I swear…
Sarutobi: Don’t worry, she is just angry…let time wash away her bitterness. You will be starting your work at the Anbu black Ops tomorrow morning, ok Minato?
Minato: *Smiles* Yes, lord third.
Sarutobi: Be here tomorrow Morning, you will receive your first asgnment and your uniform then.
Minato: Yes, lord third.
Sarutobi: Minato Namikaze, you are dismissed.
* Nods before disappearing midair*
…
Minato(Narrator): If I were to tell you all that has happened in those years, Naruto… well, we would be here for some time… the time we don’t have. So I`ll just skip five years. Tired of the Anbu black Ops regime, I decided to try having my own team of Genin. Those were called Kakashi Hatake…
Naruto: That’s Kakashi sensei…
Minato: Rin Nohara…
Naruto: Wait, were have I heard this name before…?
Minato: And…
Naruto: And?
Minato: …*Takes a deep breath* And Obito Uchiha…
Naruto: But…no...
Minato: Yes…he is out there, killing people…this is all my fault, this whole war
Naruto: Don’t think like that, dad…it wasn’t your fault…
Minato: Naruto…just please let me continue my story.
Naruto: If it makes you feel better, dad…
Minato: Then let’s continue…
…
*The three Hokage bodyguards are seen in a triangle formation around the 4 kages and Tsunade`s body, who is wrapped around the Raikage`s cloak, all of them doing the tiger handseal*
A: Is it ready yet? This is taking quite the time…
Genma: I am sorry, Lord Raikage…trying to teleport three people simultaneously is not easy…
Mei: Don’t worry Raikage, we will be able to reach the alliance in time. They are almost crossing borders with the Land of Fire by now…
Gaara: How would you know?
Mei: I have sensor abilities, so many shinobi together…it’s difficult not to-!!*Looks at the top of a nearby mountain* Show yourself…
*Out of the top of a nearby mountain the Black Zetsu emerges*
Zetsu: Hello there, my dear kages! *Points his arm to them, the arm turns into a wood spike.*
A: YOU!!*Enters his lightning armor but falls to the ground as he does so, the armor then deactivates itself*
Zetsu: No, no, no…you all need to rest…you may have been healed but you are in no condition to fight, neither of you move, I will decide who I kill first now…
Mei: Chojuro was supposed to deal with you!! What happened to him?!
Zetsu: The boy? Well…one thing I can tell you… he will have his hands full for a while…
…
*Chojuro is seen with his Hiramekarei defending himself from a small army of Zetsu*
Chojuro (thinking): Damnit…
(Flashback)
*Chojuro is pressing the Hiramekarei against the Black Zetsu`s neck when suddenly the Hashirama clone starts laughing*
Chojuro: Why are you laughing?
Black Zetsu: You fell for it…
*Suddenly, out of the ground an army of White Zetsu come out*
Zetsu Army: Hellooooo!
*The Zetsu army starts attacking the smaller army of Shinobi*
(Flashback end)
Chojuro (thinking): They killed every single ninja around me…I’m the only one left and I’m almost out of chakra…
*A Zetsu jumps towards Chojuro ready to attack*
???: Water Style: Water Dragon Jutsu!! *A Water Dragon comes out of nowhere and swipes the Zetsu away*
Chojuro: What…?
*Team Taka (Minus Sasuke) lands on front of Chojuro*
Suigetsu: Hey there, Chojuro...long time no see.
Chojuro: Suigetsu…?*Looks at Karin* You! You are Sasuke Uchiha`s underling!
Karin: Underling?! Who are you are you calling underling?
Suigetsu: Karin…just heal the guy.
Karin: What makes you think you can give me orders?
Suigetsu: Because Sasuke put me in command, not you.
Karin: Humph…ok then…I’ll do it.
Suigetsu: Good, hey Juugo! Are you ready?
Juugo: *Enters his cursed seal form*HAHAHAHAHA!!! IM GONNA KILL YOU ALL!!
Suigetsu: I’ll take that as a yes. And Chojuro…
Chojuro: What?
Suigetsu: May I take a look at your sword?
Chojuro: Not a chance!!
Suigetsu: *Sighs* It was worth a shot…*Grabs a kunai from his pocket and holds it with his teeth (Zabuza Style) * Juugo! Let’s go!
Juugo: HAHAHAHAHA!! *Uses his arm to hurl around a Zetsu, using it as a weapon to hit the others*
Suigetsu: Hey! Leave some for me! *Dashes off after Juugo*
…
*Back to Black Zetsu and the Kages…*
Black Zetsu: Now, now, now…who should I kill first…*Looks at the Mizukage* You…you tried to stop me earlier…You go first…now….Die!!* Prepares his wood spike to be launched when suddenly a sword goes through his chest* What the-
A: No way…
Mei: It’s him…
Black Zetsu: Why…*The sword is revealed to be Sasuke`s* Why did you betray us…?
Ohnoki: Teleport us out of here! Now!
Raido: Genma! Keitaro!
Gemna: Yeah, I know.
Keitaro: Let’s do this…
Hokage Bodyguards (Simultaneously): Here we go!! *The three simultaneously make the tiger handseal* Flying Thunder God Technique!! *The four Kages, Tsunade`s body and the three bodyguards disappear leaving nothing behind*
Black Zetsu: Sasuke…you bastard…
Sasuke: You are pretty informed, huh Zetsu? *Uses lightning enhancement on his sword to cut Zetsu`s body to his shoulder before pressing it against his neck* So tell me…where is Madara?
Extra Note: I didnt add Minato`s Narrative on the adventures of the old team 7 because it was already told. Just look at chapter 599 (The real one, not on the fanfic) if you want to know what Minato told Naruto.
Last edited:
