My Failed Naruto Predictions 655

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Hum…this chapter sounded kinda weird after I read it for the second time…well, whats done is done…I dunno If I did something wrong with this on...eh, dosent matter, i only request the usual: Vote on the Poll and Leave a Comment. That is all I ask of you, my dear reader. Thank you.

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Chapter 655: The Three Year Training



*Minato and Jiraiya are seen standing in a small green forest with a lake next to it*

Jiraiya: Here is the place we start your intensive training. *Removes a giant blue scroll from his back* And you will need this.

Minato: This scroll…? I have been meaning to ask you Sensei…since we left Konoha you have been carrying it, so tell me…what is it for?

Jiraiya: Good question, Minato. Remember the small paper I gave you before we came?

Minato: Well…

(Flashback)

*Minato and Jiraiya are talking in the training field*

Minato: So we`re going today, Sensei?

Jiraiya: Yes, we are leaving at sunset…but first… *Pulls a small piece of paper out of his pocket* Try holding this piece of paper while adding chakra to it.

Minato: What will that do?

Jiraiya: Just… look, it’s part of the training you will be doing.

Minato: Well…*Takes the piece of paper from Jiraiya*…if you say so…*Minato holds the paper for some seconds before it slices itself in two.

Jiraiya (thinking): Wind, huh?

Minato: Wait…there’s more…*Suddenly the paper gets wet*

Jiraiya (thinking): Unbelievable…he can touch into his second chakra nature so easily…this kid has got some crazy talent…

Minato: So… what now?

Jiraiya: You should get your things ready, I will get mine.

(Flashback end)

Jiraiya: From that piece of paper I was able to identify your chakra`s affinity. You also showed me a second Nature, which helped. Based on that…*Puts the scroll on the ground revealing various seals on it* I will train you on certain techniques. I also plan to teach you Taijutsu, but that is just side training. Only when you learn every single technique on this scroll is that we are coming back home

Minato: But…that will take…

Jiraiya: A long time, yes. If you wanna see your little girlfriend soon you should start now. *Puts the hand on the top of the first seal of the scroll and in a small poof of smoke a smaller scroll appears* The first technique is…*Opens the scroll* Well, well…the Shadow Clone Jutsu.*Makes the shadow clone jutsu handseal and next to him a clone appears*

Minato: Awesome…

Jiraiya: It takes a high amount of chakra to do it, but is very useful. *The clone disappears and Jiraiya throws the scroll at Minato* I will go for a walk…see if there is any “research spots” in the nearby town…you stay here training, I will come back later to check your development. *starts walking away*

Minato: This…*Looks at the scroll in his hand and thinks back to the time he saved Kushina from the Kumo shionobi* If it helps me defend my loved ones…*Opens the scroll* I will become the best Shinobi Konoha has ever seen!



Minato (Narrator): For the next three years I trained like there was no tomorrow…I got the chance to learn many things: some water techniques, a lot of wind techniques, I mastered the Kunai, being able to use it as the lethal weapon it is to the full extent and perfected my Taijutsu…I could continue my story at any point of these three years…but it think I will continue it from the very end

*A 14 year old Minato and Jiraiya are seen sparing near a lake, Jiraiya kicks Minato but the boy lands on the water, using chakra to walk on it*

Jiraiya: *Makes five handseals* Fire Style: Flying Flame!*Inhales a lot of air and spits out a faster but smaller version of the Fireball Jutsu*

Minato: *Makes three handseals* Water Style: Ripping Torrent! *Water accumulates in Minato`s palm and he launches it against Jiraiya`s fireball only to raise a lot of steam around the two oponents, creating a fog like ambient*

Jiraiya (thinking): He did that on purpose so he could hide on the fog…clever…

Minato: *Comes out of nowhere with a Kunai in hand, attacking Jiraiya, who is forced to block with his own kunai as the steam clears away* Im the one who will win today, sensei…

Jiraiya: *Smiles* There is only one way to discover that…* Both start clashing Kunai and trading blows until Jiraiya jumps back and throws his Kunai that he attached with a paper bomb, the Kunai hits the water, exploding and giving Jiraiya a chance to escape*

Minato (Thinking): Where is he now…? Well, he should know better than to hide from me…*Kneels with his eyes closed and with his index finger, slowly touches the lake water, creating ripples across the lake*

Jiraiya(thinking): Well, well…*Hiding behind a nearby tree* What is he doing now… could it be…

Minato: *Opens his eyes and slowly gets up*…found you. *Disapears with a poof*

Jiraiya (thinking): A shadow clone? How...

Minato: *Appears behind Jiraiya with a Kunai placed on his neck* Game over, Sensei.

Jiraiya: *Smiles* Yes, it seems like so. *Disappears in a poof of smoke as the real Jiraiya walks around the lake shore * Hey, Minato! Come Here!

Jiraiya (Thinking): This boy… he was able to out smart my shadow clone… he could get rid of that kunai of course, but still… its quite impressive… he has learned everything I teached him until now…maybe I really should…put him under “the test”…

Minato: What will we do now, sensei?

Jiraiya: Well… *Takes his scroll out of his back and opens it, revealing an empty scroll*

Minato: Its empty…but that means-

Jiraiya: No, its not empty… *Opens all the scroll until in its very end, a small seal apears* I was in doubt if I should teach you this or not… *Grabs the scroll and opens it revealing a complicated seal formula* You are in no doubt special, Minato…this training you did would have taken six years for the a average genin to complete…that’s why I will teach you this jutsu… This is known as the flying thunder god technique, a technique that if you succeed in learning, will become your main weapon… It consists of a simple jutsu… a reverse summoning will you call it. I will leave this to you to this scroll, it will tell the details and the formula of the seal. *Hands the scroll over to Minato* But one thing you are right…this is the last jutsu. I have one final test for you. It will be held in one week, so you better be prepared.



Minato (Narrator): That week I studied the jutsu like none other that I had ever studied… I replicated seals based on the Original formula and manage to attach them to my Kunai, like in a paper bomb. It seemed that I had to have some kind of connection with the Kunai so that when I launched the kunai, I could teleport to it at will. But it was easier said than done…and trust me…saying it was not easy at all, what I just gave you, Naruto…was the resumed version. Yes, it was that complicated. Finally the day of the test arrived and I was confident that I would pass…

*Minato and Jiraiya are standing in front of each other in the middle of a forest*

Jiraiya: Are you ready Minato?

Minato: Yeah, I`ll pass this test easy and we can go back home!

Minato (Narrator): However…There was no need to say…

Jiraiya: Great…*Bites His thumb* Then let the final test…

Minato (Narrator): …I wasn’t ready at all…

Jiraiya: Summoning Jutsu!!! *Slams his palm on the ground, causing smoke to rise out of the ground*

Minato: What the-

*Out of the smoke Gamabunta, the toad boss comes out*

Gamabunta: Jiraiya! I told you not to summon me again!!!

Jiraiya: Begin!

Extra Note: I HAD to add Gamabunta to Minato`s story…I just had…
 
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ahmher

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great predication
 

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I really love these flashback chapters! And Gamabunta? Amaziiing!
 

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Gamabunta Vs Minato? Is that it?

That is it...well kind of...ill explain it next chapter...

how long this flash back gonna end??

We are halfway through, i believe...yes, four or three more chapters, i guess

great predication

Thanks again, mate.

I really love these flashback chapters! And Gamabunta? Amaziiing!

Thanks, I was worried about how the readers would react to the flashbacks...that relieved me a bit.

I like all ur prediction. Can't wait for next one. Minato history. Lovd it

Thank you, please keep reading

Its not too bad

Is that a 3, a 4 or a 5...I will consider it a 3...
 
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