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Chapter 652: Minato`s life
*Naruto is seen leaned against a tree, sleeping*
Minato: Naruto!! *Naruto wakes up to see his dead dad in front of him*
Naruto: Huh? Dad?
Minato: Were you…sleeping? In the middle of a world war?
Naruto: Kind of…
Minato: *Laughs* Oh, Naruto…you are still a child!
Naruto:*Getting up* What is that supposed to mean?
Minato: Nothing…*Slowly stops laughing* But I didnt come here just to talk, Naruto…
Naruto: No? Then why are you here?
Minato: Because I have a gift for you.
Naruto: a gift?
Minato: Yes, Naruto. A gift.
Naruto: Wait, but what happened in the battlefield? Are my friends ok?
Minato: Yes, they`re ok, I told Kakashi and your girlfriend to lead the Army out of the battlefield.
Naruto: My girlfriend?
Minato: Yes, the pink haired girl, she reminds me of your mother. You made a good choice, Naruto.
Naruto: Dad…Sakura`s not my girlfriend…
Minato: Oh, I get it. Then it’s the Hyuuga one. Thinking about it now she reminds me a bit of my younger self…but shyer… she`s also a nice and-
Naruto: Dad!
Minato: What?
Naruto Hinata`s not my girlfriend either! In fact: I don’t have a girlfriend!
Minato: Oh really? But both seem very nice you should make one of them your girlfriend.
Naruto (Whispering): Yeah, but which one…?
Minato: What? Did you say something?
Naruto: Umm, no. Nothing. Anyway what are you doing here? Tell me, what happened in the battlefield?!
Minato: I`ll tell you, just calm down…*Starts telling the events that happened in the battlefield*
…
*The shinobi alliance is seen running through a field, with Darui, Kakashi, Mifune and Kitsuchi in the lead*
Kitsuchi: We are nearing the Land Of Hot Water`s Border with the Land of Fire, Kakashi. Are you certain we have access granted in the Hidden Leaf?
Kakashi: *Nods* Yes, the Hidden Leaf is too far from the battlefield to suffer an attack from the Juubi, but it’s the closest Hidden Village within the battlefield`s reach.
Darui: *Sighs* this whole war forced us to run away from home, its so-
Kakashi: Dull?
Darui: Yes, exactly.
Kitsuchi: Well, I only hope the Kages are Ok.
Darui: Don’t worry. Raikage Sama wouldn’t die like that.
Mifune: Maybe so, but what about the others?
Kakashi: We`ll have to have faith in them as well…
…
Minato: And that’s what happened.
Naruto: What?! You mean the Juubi reached full form!?
*Inside Naruto`s head*
Naruto: Did you know about that?!
Kurama: Oopsie.
*Back to the talk*
Naruto: And here I was! Sleeping!
Minato (thinking): Maybe he did grow up…
Minato: Calm down Naruto, its day yet, Obito needs the moon for his plan to work. He will probably wait till night to go into battle.
Naruto: Yes…I know that…
Minato: So don’t worry Naruto, things will be Ok.
Naruto: Dad…I think we have to wait so…I never meet you, I know nothing about you! Can you tell me a bit about yourself?
Minato: Well, that’s a strange request…
Naruto: Yeah but… I know mom well, but I know nothing about you! Tell me something!
Minato: *Smiles* I see…then well…My name Minato Namikaze.
(Flashback)
Minato (Narrator): I am a war orphan, I never met my mother nor my father, the only thing I know about them is that one of them had the surname Namikaze. The Namikaze were not from the leaf, they are a big clan, but we don’t have any special Jutsu or a Kekkei Genkai. In other words: Just a bunch of normal people. I entered the academy at age seven and there I met your mother. I took certain interest to her, as I was a smart kid (Modesty aside) I recognized her surname: Uzumaki. A wealthy clan from the land of whirlpools “What is someone like her doing here?” I asked myself. I would discover that later. Anyway, I became a Genin at the age of nine and so I met my future teacher: Jiraiya.
*Team Jiraiya is seen standing on a forest*
Jiraiya: Hello, as for now I`ll be your teacher. So…I think we should introduce ourselves: Im Jiraiya, My likes are…*Makes a pervy face* Well, you wouldn’t be interested in that now would you? My hobbies are writing and…well researching. What about you guys?
Boy 1 (the brown haired one): My name is Takemaru Nohara, My likes are spicy Curry Pilaf and hanging out with my friends, I dislike fighting…My hobbies…well, I don’t have much hobbies and my dream is to be the greatest Medic Shinobi in all Konoha!
Jiraiya: Well nobody said anything about dreams and dislikes but we might as well add it to the list so you there, you with the short hair *Points to the boy at the middle* What`s your name?
Boy 2: I’m called Kagai. I’m not from the leaf but…I like meeting new people I can fight with and learning new jutsu! I dislike people who disrespect me. My hoobies are training and I hope to be as strong as you one day Sensei!
Jiraiya: Well…very nice, Kagai! What about you, huh Blondie?
Minato: Huh, me? Well…im Minato, Minato Namikaze. I like many things and I dislike anyone who abandon their friends. My hobbies are reading and my hopes to the future…I want to be the Fourth Hokage!
Jiraiya: Now, as we`re all introduced I have test I want you to take a test. *Gets up and opens his hand to reveal two bells* Your squad has three boys instead of the usual formation of two boys and one girl. As a team of boys. I wont give you no slack! Now…let me explain the test.
…
*Minato is seen hiding on top of a tree*
Minato:…
(Flashback)
Jiraiya: This test`s objective is that each one of you needs to take one of this two bells from me within a set time limit in order to pass. Since there are three students, it would seem that one of you will be sent back to the Academy no matter what. You have until sundown to capture the bells. GO!! *Disapears reveling to be a shadow clone*
*Each of the students looks at each other for a second before they disperse*
(Flashback End)
Minato (thinking): That’s what he said…but there`s something wrong…
*Jiraiya is walking on the forest down as Minato watches it*
Minato (thinking): Lets watch and see…
*Kagai lands near Jiraiya and dashes at him*
Jiraiya: Don’t try to use clones against him…*The clone tries to punch Jiraiya but disappears as he does so*
Kagai: *Lands on top of Jiraiya with a kick but Jiraiya blocks it*Im the one taking that bell, sensei!
Jiraiya: I don’t think so…*He blocks all of Kagai`s attacks before landing an open palm on Kagai`s chest and throwing him back* You cant go against me alone…ill give you that… *Walks away*
Minato (thinking): Alone…that’s it! *Jumps off the tree and lands near Kagai`s side*
Kagai: What do you want, Blondie? I’m really busy now, you know?
Minato: Relax…I`ve got a plan…
Extra Note: So…Minato`s life, we`ve seen Jiraiya`s, Obito`s, Kakashi`s, Hashirama`s…but we know nothing about Minato….so…here it is…oh, also... Minato`s team:
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Chapter 652: Minato`s life
*Naruto is seen leaned against a tree, sleeping*
Minato: Naruto!! *Naruto wakes up to see his dead dad in front of him*
Naruto: Huh? Dad?
Minato: Were you…sleeping? In the middle of a world war?
Naruto: Kind of…
Minato: *Laughs* Oh, Naruto…you are still a child!
Naruto:*Getting up* What is that supposed to mean?
Minato: Nothing…*Slowly stops laughing* But I didnt come here just to talk, Naruto…
Naruto: No? Then why are you here?
Minato: Because I have a gift for you.
Naruto: a gift?
Minato: Yes, Naruto. A gift.
Naruto: Wait, but what happened in the battlefield? Are my friends ok?
Minato: Yes, they`re ok, I told Kakashi and your girlfriend to lead the Army out of the battlefield.
Naruto: My girlfriend?
Minato: Yes, the pink haired girl, she reminds me of your mother. You made a good choice, Naruto.
Naruto: Dad…Sakura`s not my girlfriend…
Minato: Oh, I get it. Then it’s the Hyuuga one. Thinking about it now she reminds me a bit of my younger self…but shyer… she`s also a nice and-
Naruto: Dad!
Minato: What?
Naruto Hinata`s not my girlfriend either! In fact: I don’t have a girlfriend!
Minato: Oh really? But both seem very nice you should make one of them your girlfriend.
Naruto (Whispering): Yeah, but which one…?
Minato: What? Did you say something?
Naruto: Umm, no. Nothing. Anyway what are you doing here? Tell me, what happened in the battlefield?!
Minato: I`ll tell you, just calm down…*Starts telling the events that happened in the battlefield*
…
*The shinobi alliance is seen running through a field, with Darui, Kakashi, Mifune and Kitsuchi in the lead*
Kitsuchi: We are nearing the Land Of Hot Water`s Border with the Land of Fire, Kakashi. Are you certain we have access granted in the Hidden Leaf?
Kakashi: *Nods* Yes, the Hidden Leaf is too far from the battlefield to suffer an attack from the Juubi, but it’s the closest Hidden Village within the battlefield`s reach.
Darui: *Sighs* this whole war forced us to run away from home, its so-
Kakashi: Dull?
Darui: Yes, exactly.
Kitsuchi: Well, I only hope the Kages are Ok.
Darui: Don’t worry. Raikage Sama wouldn’t die like that.
Mifune: Maybe so, but what about the others?
Kakashi: We`ll have to have faith in them as well…
…
Minato: And that’s what happened.
Naruto: What?! You mean the Juubi reached full form!?
*Inside Naruto`s head*
Naruto: Did you know about that?!
Kurama: Oopsie.
*Back to the talk*
Naruto: And here I was! Sleeping!
Minato (thinking): Maybe he did grow up…
Minato: Calm down Naruto, its day yet, Obito needs the moon for his plan to work. He will probably wait till night to go into battle.
Naruto: Yes…I know that…
Minato: So don’t worry Naruto, things will be Ok.
Naruto: Dad…I think we have to wait so…I never meet you, I know nothing about you! Can you tell me a bit about yourself?
Minato: Well, that’s a strange request…
Naruto: Yeah but… I know mom well, but I know nothing about you! Tell me something!
Minato: *Smiles* I see…then well…My name Minato Namikaze.
(Flashback)
Minato (Narrator): I am a war orphan, I never met my mother nor my father, the only thing I know about them is that one of them had the surname Namikaze. The Namikaze were not from the leaf, they are a big clan, but we don’t have any special Jutsu or a Kekkei Genkai. In other words: Just a bunch of normal people. I entered the academy at age seven and there I met your mother. I took certain interest to her, as I was a smart kid (Modesty aside) I recognized her surname: Uzumaki. A wealthy clan from the land of whirlpools “What is someone like her doing here?” I asked myself. I would discover that later. Anyway, I became a Genin at the age of nine and so I met my future teacher: Jiraiya.
*Team Jiraiya is seen standing on a forest*
Jiraiya: Hello, as for now I`ll be your teacher. So…I think we should introduce ourselves: Im Jiraiya, My likes are…*Makes a pervy face* Well, you wouldn’t be interested in that now would you? My hobbies are writing and…well researching. What about you guys?
Boy 1 (the brown haired one): My name is Takemaru Nohara, My likes are spicy Curry Pilaf and hanging out with my friends, I dislike fighting…My hobbies…well, I don’t have much hobbies and my dream is to be the greatest Medic Shinobi in all Konoha!
Jiraiya: Well nobody said anything about dreams and dislikes but we might as well add it to the list so you there, you with the short hair *Points to the boy at the middle* What`s your name?
Boy 2: I’m called Kagai. I’m not from the leaf but…I like meeting new people I can fight with and learning new jutsu! I dislike people who disrespect me. My hoobies are training and I hope to be as strong as you one day Sensei!
Jiraiya: Well…very nice, Kagai! What about you, huh Blondie?
Minato: Huh, me? Well…im Minato, Minato Namikaze. I like many things and I dislike anyone who abandon their friends. My hobbies are reading and my hopes to the future…I want to be the Fourth Hokage!
Jiraiya: Now, as we`re all introduced I have test I want you to take a test. *Gets up and opens his hand to reveal two bells* Your squad has three boys instead of the usual formation of two boys and one girl. As a team of boys. I wont give you no slack! Now…let me explain the test.
…
*Minato is seen hiding on top of a tree*
Minato:…
(Flashback)
Jiraiya: This test`s objective is that each one of you needs to take one of this two bells from me within a set time limit in order to pass. Since there are three students, it would seem that one of you will be sent back to the Academy no matter what. You have until sundown to capture the bells. GO!! *Disapears reveling to be a shadow clone*
*Each of the students looks at each other for a second before they disperse*
(Flashback End)
Minato (thinking): That’s what he said…but there`s something wrong…
*Jiraiya is walking on the forest down as Minato watches it*
Minato (thinking): Lets watch and see…
*Kagai lands near Jiraiya and dashes at him*
Jiraiya: Don’t try to use clones against him…*The clone tries to punch Jiraiya but disappears as he does so*
Kagai: *Lands on top of Jiraiya with a kick but Jiraiya blocks it*Im the one taking that bell, sensei!
Jiraiya: I don’t think so…*He blocks all of Kagai`s attacks before landing an open palm on Kagai`s chest and throwing him back* You cant go against me alone…ill give you that… *Walks away*
Minato (thinking): Alone…that’s it! *Jumps off the tree and lands near Kagai`s side*
Kagai: What do you want, Blondie? I’m really busy now, you know?
Minato: Relax…I`ve got a plan…
Extra Note: So…Minato`s life, we`ve seen Jiraiya`s, Obito`s, Kakashi`s, Hashirama`s…but we know nothing about Minato….so…here it is…oh, also... Minato`s team:
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As much as I like Minato I think my assessment is to be fully objective =D 4 isn't bad at all in my books, to be honest, it's just that the chapter didn't have much action, and as such I don't think I can give it the full 5 and manage to sleep with a clean conscience