My Failed Naruto Predictions 641

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Not much to say bout this one...But thank you for a support, dont forget to leave your coment on the chapter.

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Chapter 641: Unmatchable Speed




*Suigetsu, Karin and Juugo are watching the show from a nearby mountain*


Suigetsu: WOW, those guys are INASANE!!!

Juugo: Sasuke doesn’t seem eager with his susanoo…

Karin: Its because they are both holding back…

Suigetsu: You’ve got to be kidding! Both of them? After that gigantic lightning dragon thing and that exploding wind shuriken?

Karin: No, unfortunately I’m not…once they are both full power we will really have to get out of here. You guys have seen what they can do holding back…I wouldn’t like to see it all out.





Sasuke: So thats your true Power then, huh Naruto?

Naruto (thinking): He thinks that’s my full power? Let’s see his reaction once I reach Bijuu mode…it’ll be fun…

Sasuke: *Gets up* Dosent seem like much of a deal...*Tries to stab Naruto with a chidori but fails miserably as the boy holds the Uchiha’s arm*Let…it…GO! *Naruto releases his grip only to see an angry Sasuke massaging his arm*


Naruto: Are you hurt….Sasuke teme?


Sasuke: Don’t you mock me!! *Uses chidori spear to try and slash Naruto but before the spear even reaches Naruto is already in the middle of the river*

Naruto: You’re too slow… *Sasuke grabs his sword and jumps after Naruto trying to land multiple strikes on the Jinchuriki, but being unsuccessful*

Sasuke (thinking): What speed…its unlike anything I’ve ever seen…even faster than the raikage….could it be….could it be that he escaped my Kirin only with that speed of his…?

Naruto: *Appears some meters away from Sasuke and lifts his index finger as two tiny hands that start making a little rasenshuriken in his finger*Mini Rasenshuriken!

Sasuke: *Looks at Naruto’s new attack with an unimpressed expression in his face*Is this a joke? I don’t find it funny.

Naruto: Lets see if you find THAT funny! *Throws the wind shuriken rasengan towards Sasuke*

Sasuke (thinking): He’s got to be joking…*His sharingan analyses the mini Rasenshuriken just in time, surprising Sasuke and causing him to dodge the attack just in time, the Mini Rasenshuriken cuts off a whole tree of the nearby forest upon hitting it* I see… he used the size of the attack to make me underestimate it, and not see its powers…if it wasn’t for my sharingan I would be dead now…

Sasuke: Nice attack, Naruto! But only that isn’t enough to get past my sharingan!

Naruto: I thought so…but lets see if it can get this *Disapears in an orange flash and attacks Sasuke with various punches and kicks coming from all directions before launching him skyward and appearing before him with a giant chakra hand* Tailed Beast Flare!!!*Lands the punch on Sasuke throwing him down the waterfall between the two statues and into the lake.*

Sasuke(thinking): *Lands roughly on the water, causing him to sink down* That idiot…his power…*Floats up to the surface only to meet with a no longer tailed beast mode Naruto*

Naruto: We don’t need to do that, Sasuke. I’ll give you the chance to think it out.

Sasuke:…to think it out?

(Flashback)

*Sasuke looks at Naruto as he enters his Initial Jinchuriki Mode at their previous battle at the valley of the end*

Sasuke: What the hell are you?

Naruto: I’m your friend! That’s why I’m not letting you go to Orochimaru! That’s why I said I’d break your arms and legs if I had to!

*A small timeskip happens and Naruto is seen pressing Sasuke’s neck against a rock*

Naruto: Have you come to your senses yet?! If not, Im going to beat you until you can no longer move and then I’ll’ drag you back, Sasuke!!

Sasuke : Shut up…What do you know about me, you’ve got no parents and no brothers! You were alone from the start!

(flashback pause)

Sasuke (thinking): That idiot…

(now, continuing…)

*Naruto and Sasuke face each other in the rock wall*

Naruto: I may not have real brothers or sisters, or even parents…but when im with Iruka Sensei I wonder…is this how it is to have a dad? And when I’m with you…I think that’s what it feels like to have a brother.

(Flashback end)

Sasuke (thinking):…does he think he’s better than me?! *Activates his Susanoo ribcage and grabs Naruto, raising him up above his head*

Sasuke: DO YOU THINK YOU CAN GO AGAINST ME THAT EASILY?! DO YOU?!

Naruto (With Pain): Sasu…ke…

Sasuke: Burn Alive! *Uses Amateratsu on Naruto but he disappears with a poof* Shadow clone…?

*Tailed Beast Mode Naruto comes out of Water behind Sasuke with a Planetary Rasengan in his hand*

Naruto(thinking): I didn’t want to do this, Sasuke…but…you forced me to…

Naruto: Take a taste of my PLANETARY RASENGAN!!! *The Planetary Rasengan clashes against Sasuke’s Susanoo ribcage and throws Sasuke towards the Waterfall cracking the wall around him and letting the water fall on Sasuke’s shoulders*

Sasuke(thinking): What a powerful attack…If it wasn’t my Susanoo’s ribcage I’d be dead…

Naruto: *Raises his right hand as two other chakra hands reach to it and start making a Rasenshuriken* You left me with no choice Sasuke

Sasuke (thinking): He is taking pity on me…

*Naruto’s Rasenshuriken is thrown at Sasuke

Sasuke (thinking): He thinks im inferior to him?!

*Naruto’s Rasenshuriken is about to hit Sasuke*

Sasuke: I TAKE PITY FROM NOBODY!!!* His complete Susanoo appears around him and destroys the Rasenshuriken with one swipe from his arrow/sword*

Naruto: So this is his Susanoo…

Sasuke: You wont survive today, Naruto! That is a promise!


Extra Note: I really love the Naruto Video games, that must explain why there are so many attack i take from them.
 
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I usually never post, its been about 3 years and this "predication" made me. Its really funny how you let sauske think that if he didnt have a sharingan he would be dead and how if he didnt have "rib cages" he would be dead, while Naruto doesn't think if i didn't have kyubi mode i would be dead. To me it makes the battle sound bias. Overall Nice read. Good job.
 

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I loved it it's what I want to happen but I think Kishi intends to have them be equals when they fight
Well... i wont say much but...wait till next chapter

I usually never post, its been about 3 years and this "predication" made me. Its really funny how you let sauske think that if he didnt have a sharingan he would be dead and how if he didnt have "rib cages" he would be dead, while Naruto doesn't think if i didn't have kyubi mode i would be dead. To me it makes the battle sound bias. Overall Nice read. Good job.
Sasuke is preety arrogant, if he saw somebody like Naruto surpessing him he'd be preety surprised...Naruto on the other side just wants to bring him back. Besides that im honored that my fanfiction motivated you to post after three whole years, thank you.

This was great. Naruto doesn't have this much control over his speed, but it's good. I'll have to see the other parts.
You know what they say...practice makes perfect...:cool:

Nice job with these, I hope you keep writing them :p
I will, i intend to go till the final battle and a little beyond.

it's really good but repetitive at some points xd nice job overall
Well you cant make a long battle such as this without repeating SOME ellements...
 
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