My Failed Naruto Predictions 637

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WOW, Ten chapters, fell proud of myself, new chapter is coming early, why? Because I was in the writing mood, that’s why! Enjoy and please leave a comment, opinions are what keep us fanfiction writers going.

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Chapter 637: The Edo Tensei`s Weakness



*Four hokages are seen holding up the barrier*

Minato(thinking): Its starting to break free….we cant let it happen!

Minato: Lord First, Lord Hiruzen, Don’t let it evolve!

Sarutobi: We wont!

Hashirama: We will hold it down as much as we can!





*An armless Obito and Tobirama stare at each other*

Tobirama: *Disapears and appears behind Obito bringing down his sword* Get this!

Obito: *Jumps right, dodging the the attack before raising his hand* Allmighty Push.* Tobirama is thrown into the air as Obito jumps and follows him* Don’t think im incapacitated just because of an arm. *Makes a Canon with his right hand and uses it to attack Tobirama with a small blast, but before the blast reaches the second, he disappears midair*

Tobirama: No, but I had to be certain…* Appears behind Obito and brings down his blade aiming for the Uchiha`s head but Obito holds Tobirama`s arm with his hand before throwing the second away*

Obito: *Lands with his hand on the ground* Summoning Jutsu! * A giant rinnegan eyed bull appears and dashes at Tobirama, who does a series of fast handseals*

Tobirama: Water Prison Jutsu! *Traps the bull with water that comes out of the ground* Ninja Art: Summon dismiss*Claps his hands togheter making the bull Disapear*

Obito: *Apears on top of Tobirama bringing down a kunai on his head but TObirama disappears and appears some metters away* Damnit….

Obito: *Tobirama advances against him but the Uchiha blocks the attack with the aid of his Sharingan and his wind chakra enhanced kunai before jumping back and throwing it before using the Almighty Push on the kunai so its speed is tripled but Tobirama disappears right before the kunai reaches him* Crap…

Tobirama: Now ive got you! Water Prison Jutsu! *Surrounds Obito with a water sphere*

Obito(thinking): I see…so that’s how he does it! *Tobirama gets ready to bring down his blade on Obito but is thrown back by Allmighty Push.*

Obito: *Lands on the ground.* So that’s how you do it huh?

Tobirama:*Also lands on the ground* What are you talking about?

Obito: People always said the second Hokage could do Water Style jutsus even when there wasn’t water to do it, normally you got the water from the underground, but when youre not on the ground you condensate the water molecules on the air and use them on your jutsus…cleaver, I must admit…

Tobirama:…you’re the first person to ever discover this…I guess I shouldn’t underestimate that eye of yours….

Obito: Do not underestimate the sharingan or you will regret it.

Tobirama: I will try to keep that in mind… *Does another series of handseals* Water Style: Water Dragon Jutsu! *A giant Dragon appears out of thin air and dashes towards Obito, who almighty pushes it*

Obito: Its useless, if you keep using the same- * Tobirama appears on his front trying to hit him with his sword, but Obito simply jumps back and dodges it.* Allmighty Pull! *Pulls Tobirama and grabs his neck before shoving him down on the ground right before Tobirama disappears turning into water.* A water clone…?

Tobirama: *Apears behind Obito before making the tiger handseal* Water Style: Water Fang Bullet *A drill shaped mass of water comes out of the ground fusing with the water left by Tobirama`s clone and throwing Obito high in the sky* NOW! *Makes fifty fast handseals* Water Style: Twin Water Dragons! *Two dragons come out of the ground and grow bigger and bigger until they clash against each other with Obito being in the center of the clash.

Obito (thinking): He is fast….

Tobirama: *Appears in front of Obito* Giant Water Prison! *Makes a giant (About the size of a rasensuriken exploding) water sphere around Obito traping him inside it*

Obito(thinking): IF he thinks he can trap me here hes very wrong…ALLMIGHTY PUSH! *Gravity throws explodes the water sphere, seting Obito free*

Tobirama(thinking): Its now or never…


Tobirama: *Apears in front of Obito making a series of handseals, the uchiha tries to punch him, but he holds Obito`s arm. He then uses his thumb and index finger to force open Obito`s left eye (rinnegen).*This is an forbidn jutsu teachen me and my brother by the first kazekage…* A small (the size of grape) black orb appears on Tobirama`s hand* Ninja Art: Blinding Darkness!*Shoves the black sphere into Obito`s eye before kicking him back to the ground*

Obito: *Lands on the ground next to his giant shuriken.* You…*Opens left eye to reveal a pure white eye* You blinded me…

Tobirama: *Lands on the ground too, not far away from Obito* This is as good as over…

Obito: Do not underestimate-

Tobirama: You are blind of one eye, the rinnegan, so you cant use its techniques anymore, you lost an arm, that means you cant do handseals anymore, your body is tired and your sharingan`s Kamui stopped working, if it was you wouldn’t bother dodging my attacks.

Obito:…

Tobirama: Wont you say anything?

Obito: *Forces his right eye open* this eye…

Tobirama: You won’t….

Obito: *Rips his right eye off* This eye is not worthy of an Uchiha!

Tobirama: You’re mad…

Obito: I won’t lose to you.

Tobirama: I told you already, this is over.

Obito: SHUT UP! *Grabs the Shuriken next to him and throws it at Tobirama, who simply lets the shuriken impale itself on his chest*

Tobirama: Even if you managed to hit me…*Pulls the shuriken off his chest before it starts closing off again* You would still have to find a way around the Edo Tensei.

Obito: …

Tobirama: Do you understand, you never stood a chance.

Obito: This is not over…*Dashes towards Tobirama.* IT ENDS NOW!!

Tobirama: If that’s the way you want…* Dashes towards Obito with his sword ready* I will be happy to oblige!

*Madara lands nearby*

Madara(Thinking): Obito!? Oh crap…. *Dashes towards Obito and Tobirama!

*Tobirama and Obito are running towards each other*

Tobirama: Flying Thunder God Slash!* Disapears and appears infront of Obito with his blade ready to stab him*

Tobirama(Thinking): This ends here…

Madara(Thinking): Damnit…im too late!

*Tobirama tries to stab Obito but for his and Madara`s surprise the blade passes right through Obito, who is seen with his Magenkyo Sharingan activated, crying blood*

Obito: Ive warned you before... *Reaches for Tobirama`s neck* DO NOT UNDERESTIMATE THIS EYE!!*Both stumble as their clash ends.* …I guess I have to thank Minato Sensei…

Tobirama(thinking): *Looks at his hand that is deforming as small pieces of paper fly away* But that’s imposible…

Obito:…after all, he was the one who told me to see underneath the underneath…everyone considers your Edo Tensei an advantage to your side, but there is a failure in the jutsu everyone seems to forget.*Opens his hand as a kunai with a seal is seen hanging on his finger by the kunai`s handle* The amulet that bonds your body to your soul, this is your big weakness.

Tobirama(thinking): I couldn’t stop him…I am sorry brother…

Obito: You shouldn’t have underestimated me…I will stop at none so I reach my objective, no Hokage and no Jinchuriki will stop me, I said it once, and I will repeat it. The Eye Of The Moon Plan will not fail!


Extra Note: The idea of how Obito finishes off Tobirama is not really mine, a friend said she saw a doujin were Obito fights Madara and that’s how he defeats him.
 
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