So heres third, a bit of humor and a bit of pairing....did i make Tobirama too OOC?
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Extra note: Kishi`s explanation about rin`s death and my theory on it were very alike, but he was better than me, thats why i put it (I thought Rin had some special thing that would allow her to controll the three tails, not that she already was the three tails Jinchuriki)
Chapter 629 The Substitution
Kakashi: It cant be…sensei!
Naruto: …Dad? But…how…I thought…
Minato: That I had been sealed away, inside the reaper? Yes but…
*Orochimaru lands by Minato`s side*
Orochimaru: I intervened.
Naruto: Orochimaru! *Goes bijuu mode*
*Naruto disappears and appears again in front of Orochimaru but is stopped right in time by Minato who teleports between them.*
Minato: Naruto, I know Orochimaru has done horrible things in the past but he is in our side now!
Hashirama (thinking): Such power…its seems like hes on fire…I see now why the Sasuke kid wanted all the four of us to take his place…
Tobirama (thinking): He has potential, his speed is already enourmous…but something is not right about the nine tails chakra…
Sarutobi (thinking): Is that really Naruto? That kid who always pranked the village and vandalized the Hokage monument…?
Minato (thinking): To think he has grown so much in such a short time…
Naruto: But dad, Orochimaru- *Gasps in pain and falls to the ground before the bijuu mode fades, the kyuubi cloak on the alliance also fades.*
*Naruto appears inside his head*
Naruto: What the hell Kurama?!
Kurama: I told you not to overuse my chakra, but nevermind, now that the hokages are here you got enough manpower, I will recharge for now.
Naruto: *Gets up* Dad…Old Man Third…* Looks at the Senju brothers* and who the hell are you?
Tobirama: Really? You wake up and look at our giant stone faces everyday and you don’t recognize us?
Naruto:…no.
Hashirama: They call me the first!
Naruto:WOW, the first Hokage, that’s right! So cool, did you know im gonna be the sixth?
Hashirama: WOW, and I was amazed by a fourth when we already have a sixth!
Tobirama (thinking): They’re so alike its disturbing…
Minato: Naruto, we didn’t come here to chat.
Naruto: Oh! That’s right…Why are you here Dad?
Minato: We are here on a request from a friend of yours.
Naruto: A friend…?
Orochimaru: Yes *Does an Orochimaru laugh (Ya know, the kukukukuku thing he does)* Sasuke kun asked us to help you.
Naruto: Sasuke…? Why would he do that?
Sarutobi: Because he wants to talk to you.
Naruto: Him…? Talk to me?...ok, but I cant leave the alliance alone.
Hashirama: And that is why he send us, we will fight while you are gone .
Naruto: But what if Orochimaru turns you guys against the alliance?
Tobirama: We would resist his control, this time we came back full power unlike last time, I would never let him use us to harm our fellow shinobi, be them from other village or not they are on our side.
Naruto: Then…I think ill leave it to you guys from here. * Starts walking out the cratter*
Minato: Naruto. *Naruto turns to face Minato* Take this. * Flying Thunder God kunai appears on his hand and he throws it at Naruto, who catches.* This wont be the last time we meet, don’t worry.
Naruto: * Smiles* Good luck, dad. * Walks away*
Sarutobi: Are you sure we should let him go, Minato? We might need him later…
Minato: We are Hokages for a reason, maybe we will need Naruto`s help, yes…but for now…he`s got his own business to attend to…
Orochimaru:...i think my job is done...for now... * disappears leaving some leaves behind*
...
Naruto: Kakashi! *pulls Kakashi close to him*
Kakashi: Naruto? What is it?
Naruto: I have business to attend with Sasuke, the Hokages will take care of the alliance while im gone. I need a favor of you.
Kakashi: … of course…what is it?
Naruto: Watch Hinata for me?
Kakashi: Hinata? Why?
Naruto: Obito is targeting her to affect me, when he tries to make a move get him, and please don’t let her get hurt.
Kakashi: …you can count on me, I promise ill take care of her for you, Naruto.
Naruto: Thanks Kakashi Sensei, and don’t worry, I’ll be back before you even notice! *Runs off*
Kakashi (Thinking): Naruto…you’ve grown.
...
Hashirama: So…That’s the Juubi of legends…
Sarutobi: Yes, but we have been informed of two other enemies besides that, were are those two?
Madara: HERE!! *Falls off the sky and tries to land a kick on Hashirama, who blocks it.*
Hashirama: Madara! How have you been?
Madara: That’s not how you should treat an enemy! *tries another Kick on Hashirama but he uses a Body Flicker to get out of the way fast*
Hashirama (Depresed): Don’t talk to me like that…
Madara: Unbelievable, you ARE still the same idiot! * Pursues Hashirama*
Minato: But then where is the other one?
???: Here…sensei…
Minato: This voice…wait, sensei? *Looks at Obito who is standing at the edge of the crater*
Minato: No…that’s…imposible…
Sarutobi: Obito…
Tobirama: Seems like those two have unfinished business…we should get going Saru, lets join the alliance against the Juubi.
Sarutobi: …Yes, sensei. *Heads off with Tobirama towards the alliance*
Minato: So…you were him…the man in the mask…you were him all along… even that night…
Obito: Yes, that night, the night with the nine tails, that was me…
Minato: Why, Obito? Is it because of Rin? She died for a noble cause…
Obito: SHE DIED BECAUSE OF THE MIST, SHE HAD BEEN CAPTURED AND TURNED INTO THE THREE TAILS JINCHURIKI BY THEM! THEY PLANNED ON RELEASING THE BIJUU ON THE MIDDLE OF THE VILLAGE!
Minato:…
Obito: And then she asked Kakashi to kill her, when he didn’t, she jumped in front of his chidori…it wouldn’t have happened if you were there…it wouldn’t have happened if you had stoped the mist…
Minato: Im so sorry I couldn’t protect her, Obito…When I arrived it was already too late…im so sorry.
Obito:…*raises opened hand towards Minato* Its indeed too late, sensei. Allmighty Push! *Throws Minato out of the cratter and into the middle of the battlefield*
...
*Tobirama and Sarutobi arrive in the front of the alliance*
Tobirama: My name is Tobirama Senju, also known as the Second Hokage, and this is Hiruzen Sarutobi, Third Hokage. We will lead you in battle against the beast known as the Ten Tails! *Cheers are heard from the alliance*
…
*Naruto is seen jumping from tree to tree*
Naruto(thinking):Sasuke…wait for me…im coming…
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Extra note: Kishi`s explanation about rin`s death and my theory on it were very alike, but he was better than me, thats why i put it (I thought Rin had some special thing that would allow her to controll the three tails, not that she already was the three tails Jinchuriki)
Chapter 629 The Substitution
Kakashi: It cant be…sensei!
Naruto: …Dad? But…how…I thought…
Minato: That I had been sealed away, inside the reaper? Yes but…
*Orochimaru lands by Minato`s side*
Orochimaru: I intervened.
Naruto: Orochimaru! *Goes bijuu mode*
*Naruto disappears and appears again in front of Orochimaru but is stopped right in time by Minato who teleports between them.*
Minato: Naruto, I know Orochimaru has done horrible things in the past but he is in our side now!
Hashirama (thinking): Such power…its seems like hes on fire…I see now why the Sasuke kid wanted all the four of us to take his place…
Tobirama (thinking): He has potential, his speed is already enourmous…but something is not right about the nine tails chakra…
Sarutobi (thinking): Is that really Naruto? That kid who always pranked the village and vandalized the Hokage monument…?
Minato (thinking): To think he has grown so much in such a short time…
Naruto: But dad, Orochimaru- *Gasps in pain and falls to the ground before the bijuu mode fades, the kyuubi cloak on the alliance also fades.*
*Naruto appears inside his head*
Naruto: What the hell Kurama?!
Kurama: I told you not to overuse my chakra, but nevermind, now that the hokages are here you got enough manpower, I will recharge for now.
Naruto: *Gets up* Dad…Old Man Third…* Looks at the Senju brothers* and who the hell are you?
Tobirama: Really? You wake up and look at our giant stone faces everyday and you don’t recognize us?
Naruto:…no.
Hashirama: They call me the first!
Naruto:WOW, the first Hokage, that’s right! So cool, did you know im gonna be the sixth?
Hashirama: WOW, and I was amazed by a fourth when we already have a sixth!
Tobirama (thinking): They’re so alike its disturbing…
Minato: Naruto, we didn’t come here to chat.
Naruto: Oh! That’s right…Why are you here Dad?
Minato: We are here on a request from a friend of yours.
Naruto: A friend…?
Orochimaru: Yes *Does an Orochimaru laugh (Ya know, the kukukukuku thing he does)* Sasuke kun asked us to help you.
Naruto: Sasuke…? Why would he do that?
Sarutobi: Because he wants to talk to you.
Naruto: Him…? Talk to me?...ok, but I cant leave the alliance alone.
Hashirama: And that is why he send us, we will fight while you are gone .
Naruto: But what if Orochimaru turns you guys against the alliance?
Tobirama: We would resist his control, this time we came back full power unlike last time, I would never let him use us to harm our fellow shinobi, be them from other village or not they are on our side.
Naruto: Then…I think ill leave it to you guys from here. * Starts walking out the cratter*
Minato: Naruto. *Naruto turns to face Minato* Take this. * Flying Thunder God kunai appears on his hand and he throws it at Naruto, who catches.* This wont be the last time we meet, don’t worry.
Naruto: * Smiles* Good luck, dad. * Walks away*
Sarutobi: Are you sure we should let him go, Minato? We might need him later…
Minato: We are Hokages for a reason, maybe we will need Naruto`s help, yes…but for now…he`s got his own business to attend to…
Orochimaru:...i think my job is done...for now... * disappears leaving some leaves behind*
...
Naruto: Kakashi! *pulls Kakashi close to him*
Kakashi: Naruto? What is it?
Naruto: I have business to attend with Sasuke, the Hokages will take care of the alliance while im gone. I need a favor of you.
Kakashi: … of course…what is it?
Naruto: Watch Hinata for me?
Kakashi: Hinata? Why?
Naruto: Obito is targeting her to affect me, when he tries to make a move get him, and please don’t let her get hurt.
Kakashi: …you can count on me, I promise ill take care of her for you, Naruto.
Naruto: Thanks Kakashi Sensei, and don’t worry, I’ll be back before you even notice! *Runs off*
Kakashi (Thinking): Naruto…you’ve grown.
...
Hashirama: So…That’s the Juubi of legends…
Sarutobi: Yes, but we have been informed of two other enemies besides that, were are those two?
Madara: HERE!! *Falls off the sky and tries to land a kick on Hashirama, who blocks it.*
Hashirama: Madara! How have you been?
Madara: That’s not how you should treat an enemy! *tries another Kick on Hashirama but he uses a Body Flicker to get out of the way fast*
Hashirama (Depresed): Don’t talk to me like that…
Madara: Unbelievable, you ARE still the same idiot! * Pursues Hashirama*
Minato: But then where is the other one?
???: Here…sensei…
Minato: This voice…wait, sensei? *Looks at Obito who is standing at the edge of the crater*
Minato: No…that’s…imposible…
Sarutobi: Obito…
Tobirama: Seems like those two have unfinished business…we should get going Saru, lets join the alliance against the Juubi.
Sarutobi: …Yes, sensei. *Heads off with Tobirama towards the alliance*
Minato: So…you were him…the man in the mask…you were him all along… even that night…
Obito: Yes, that night, the night with the nine tails, that was me…
Minato: Why, Obito? Is it because of Rin? She died for a noble cause…
Obito: SHE DIED BECAUSE OF THE MIST, SHE HAD BEEN CAPTURED AND TURNED INTO THE THREE TAILS JINCHURIKI BY THEM! THEY PLANNED ON RELEASING THE BIJUU ON THE MIDDLE OF THE VILLAGE!
Minato:…
Obito: And then she asked Kakashi to kill her, when he didn’t, she jumped in front of his chidori…it wouldn’t have happened if you were there…it wouldn’t have happened if you had stoped the mist…
Minato: Im so sorry I couldn’t protect her, Obito…When I arrived it was already too late…im so sorry.
Obito:…*raises opened hand towards Minato* Its indeed too late, sensei. Allmighty Push! *Throws Minato out of the cratter and into the middle of the battlefield*
...
*Tobirama and Sarutobi arrive in the front of the alliance*
Tobirama: My name is Tobirama Senju, also known as the Second Hokage, and this is Hiruzen Sarutobi, Third Hokage. We will lead you in battle against the beast known as the Ten Tails! *Cheers are heard from the alliance*
…
*Naruto is seen jumping from tree to tree*
Naruto(thinking):Sasuke…wait for me…im coming…
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