[Predictions] My epic 601-602 and more soon predictions:)

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601 chapter please read below:

601 - Madara arrival
The first scene shows Uchiha Madara and Uchiha Obito standing in front of Naruto, Killer Bee, Kakashi and Gai. As Uchiha Madara look at them without emotions his long hair are moving by blows of winds. Obito is standing with for moment but move his Rinnengan eye to Madara side while showing suprise and fear in face.
Kakashi is schocked: *He is this man?*
Gai is schocked: *Wow, this man arrived from nowhere, who the hell is this man?*
Killer bee: who are you, you appeared so cool
Naruto with suprise on face changes to schock: *This man...?!, He is Uchiha Madara, but how* ?!
Kurama: You!, grrr....
Obito turns his face to Madara : Ma?!
Naruto: You!
Madara:?!
Obito:?!
Naruto points his finger at Madara: You, how can you be still existing?!
Gai and Kakashi with confused face: *Naruto know this man?!*
Madara: What do you mean, jinchurki of Kyuubi?!
Kakashi and Gai:*What?!, he knows who Naruto is, how?!*
Killer Bee: ...
Naruto: I left you to 5 kages to care about you, besides Itachi Uchiha made Kabuto stop Edo Tensei ****ing jutsu?!, so you shouldn't exist anymore!
Madara: shut up kid, so this was Itachi Uchiha..., my own student who almost broke my plan, *Damn, you Itachi, I taught you a lot and that was your payback....*
Naruto shouting broke Madara from thinking
Naruto: So answer me!
Madara: Ok, chill out kid. About 5 kages, I killed all of them and now I am here.
Naruto, Kakashi, Gai and Killer Bee: What?!!!
Obito looking at Madara with little fear: *He really killed all of them, indeed terrifying*
Kakashi scared and mad: Hey, Naruto who is this man who said that he killed 5 Kages...
Gai confused: Tell us
Killer Bee: Naruto boy tell me or roll...
Naruto is mad: He is Uchiha Madara, real one who was ressurected by Kabuto Yakushi via Edo Tensei....., but I don't understand. Itachi made Kabuto release Edo Tensei so how?!
Obito looking in Madara direction: Master, How can you be there after Release of Edo Tensei...
Madara: Hmph..., Edo Tensei is forbidden and powerfull jutsu indeed but don't forget who are you talking about. I am Uchiha Madara, the most powerfull Ninja on this World, I broke human limits by breaking contract with summoner.
Naruto is confused: What?!, what do you mean
Kakashi: *Breaking contract with summoner, the summoner was Kabuto but what that could mean?!*
Killer bee: I don't catch any of this crap, it is nothing to my rap, wee!
Gai is confused:...
Obito: *He released himself from Edo Tensei, but how and that could mean he should be gone, so how?!*
Madara: There was two ways to release from Edo Tensei. First way is release completly from technique by releasing emotions and grudges which keep you binding soul to world. Second way is not completly release from techniqe. Edo Tensei contains two binding, one is to technique itself and second is to summoner. Second way which I broke only second binding to summoner leting me save Edo Tensei profits.For someone who know seals to break contract of being summoned with summoner it was easy. Now I am not dead and not alive.
Everyone:?!
Obito: sigh...*so finally you failed Kabuto, I didn't know that Edo Tensei jutsu secrets, If I know I could force Kabuto to do that to Madara, so he would be free and he is now*
Kakashi is shaking : *so this is real Uchiha Madara, make great impact with no doubt. How can he be no dead and no alvie....*
Gai: *No dead and no alive, this is weird...*
Naruto: last question, before I kill you!
Madara:?!
Naruto: How did you get there so fast, it could took you much more time. It was far away from here, how?!
Madara: oh, I used flying ability with Rinnegan simple.
Obito with schocked face: what?!
Madara with annoying face and looking at Obito with one eye : Flying ability, Obito. Rinnengan allows user to use any jutsu he wants, I wanted to fly so I flew. I called this jutsu "Heaven Flight".
Kakashi: *this is ridiculous, he was flying by using Rinnegan. The Rinnengan..., how broken this eyes are...*
Gai:...
Naruto: The Rinnengan *I fought with Nagati some time ago, but I didn't know he could fly, wow rinnengan is god eyes afterall...*
Obito: oh *I has a lot to learn it seems...*
Naruto: Now time to fight Madara!
The scene shows Naruto about to rush at Madara, while Madara didn't care about Naruto
Madara: *flashback of Kabuto talking with Madara: "fake Madara don't work according to your plan it seems"*
Madara turns his face to Obito: Where is Nagato?, why he didn't ressurect me?!, what did happen, tell me!, Obito
The scene shows Naruto stops few meters away from Madara,
Obito is looking at Madara:?!, oh..., Nagato.... he is dead you see...
Madara: What?!!, how can he be dead, he was my son after all!
Naruto: Nagato is his son?!
Obito: *Nagato was his son?!, no wonder why he awake RG himself. It thought it was Madara Rinnegan but I was wrong *
Kakashi, Gai: *Pain guy was son of Madara Uchiha?!*
Killer Bee:*Nagato....?! oh I reminded man called Nagato to fought with me and Naruto, so he was this man son?!*
Obito: Yes he is dead, but it wasn't my fault. he was stopped by this *points finger in Naruto direction* kyuubi jinchurkii, Uzumaki Naruto!
Madara turns face to Naruto and send him glare: Kyuubi brat..., so it was you.
Obito: Yes, master. He forced Nagato to revive all Konoha Ninja by using Rinne Tensei, the technique which I planned for him to ressurect you after having all tailed beasts, but Narato broke our plan and threw havoc in this...
Madara: Uzumaki clan, so troublesome...., *Flashback of Madara: Madara met strong Uzumaki woman, made *** with her and she breeded their son: Nagato..., then Madara used genjutsu on his false parents and make them care about Nagato, their false son. *. Cursed Uzumaki..., to broke my plan. You will pay me kid for that.
Naruto: I am not afraid of you!
Kurama: ?!
The scene shows Madara with pissed look. Madara is emiting a lot of powerfull chakra which make everyone shake except Naruto from enemy side.
Kakashi body shaking: wh..at this chakra is...
Gai: this evil comming from his chakra is dangerous...
Killer bee: this man, I have to stop rap or I make crap
Gyuuki: Enough, bee focus on fight!
Naruto: *This power is terryfing, he will be hard to take down* your power didn't make impression on me, try harder!
Kurama: This will harder than you thought Naruto, but we can do this
Madara serious face changes to : This was only warning kid... *turns his head to Obito*: What about Zetsu, you didn't loose him as well, did you?!
Obito with fear in voice: oh... Zetsu, I didn't see him since I began to fought with them. When I wonder about it , he should inform me about you being ressurected Master, or about Kabuto releasing Edo Tensei or by you breaking contract Edo Tensei with kabuto..., but he didn't.
Madara with serious face: sigh..., so you failed Obito in everything....
Obito: it could look like that, but I brought new Uchiha young boy, called Sasuke Uchiha on our side. He is Itachi younger brother, last living Uchiha without me counting...
Naruto: *Sasuke*, stop talking about Sasuke as your tool!
Kakashi: Obito, why?!
Gai:...
Killer Bee: *this Sasuke guy, coud he be manipulated to fight me...*
Obito is mad: Shut the **** up and don't dare to break my conservation with master
Madara ignoring them: good, where is this boy, I want to talk to him
Obito looks at Madara: oh well, I make Zetsu guard him so he shoud be safe, but...
Madara being serious and little mad: since you didn't get any news from Zetsu, it could mean that this boy Uchiha Sasuke betrayed you and killed Zetsu, yes?!
Obito with fear: maybe yes..., but?!
Madara looks at Gedo Mazou transforming: at least you didn't fail in everything, but Jyuubi will revived in nut full form, yes Obito?!
Obito: you are right master. *Damn, I look now as fool*, I could complere your plan if I didn't have to fight with them*points Naruto, Gai, Kakashi and Killer bee*
Naruto, Gai, Killer bee take battle stance while Kakashi lost will to fight
Madara: I see, eight tails is not captured as well and your former friends...
Obito: you are right Master. Now I will show you how powerfull I become, master just sit down and watch.
Madara: hmph..., ok, I give you last chance before you join in battle myself.
Obito: thanks *looks with serious face at Naruto and rest.* Now when my master is watching me I will not fail!
Last scene shows zoom on Obito posture with serious expression and sharingan shining red intesively while Rinnegan shining purple intesively


602 chapter please read below:

602 - Tool
The scene Obito with serious face looking at them. They exchange few glares with each other, while Madara sits down on rock in range.
Kakashi: *I can't fight with him..., I should be blamed for Rin death, Obito is right...*
Gai about to rush ,look at Kakashi and stop: Kakashi, wake up. There is no time for thinking, look at Naruto.
The scene shows Naruto and obito charging at each other,Naruto is much faster and when he is about to hit obito, Obito become intangible so Naruto pass through him. Obito fast turns around to see many rasengans cooming at him from above kept by kyuubi tails. Obito absorb all of Rasengan with Kamui, then he become tangible and go at Naruto, Naruto turns around and rush at Obito with greater speed, Obito is force to become intangible in last second so Naruto pass through him.
Obito turns around to attack Naruto: Useless!
Naruto without turning around: we will see...
Obito:?!
The scene shows one rasengan kept by one of kyuubi tails about ot hit Obito, Obito become intangible make Rasengan pass thorugh him again.
Obito: it doesn't work on me!
Naruto:...
Obito:?!
The scene shows Obito become tangible. Suddenly two Kyuubi tails are comming from ground and Make Obito totally suprised and unprepeared. Kyuubi tails surround Obito legs and catch them.
Obito:?!
Naruto: Gotcha!
Obito try to become intangible, but it doesn't work: what?!
The scene shows Obito unable to become intangible while many Hachibi tentacles are comming at Obito. Obito notice them and use fire jutsu.
Obito: Fire release: fire projectiles!
Naruto:?!
Killer bee:argh!!!
The scene shows fire in shape of projectiles flying at Killer Bee. When fire connect with Killer Bee tentacles, it cause Killer bee feel pain and hsi tentacles are burned really badly.
Naruto: Killer bee uncle?!
Obito: haha..., you thought you could beat me with your tentacles, I am student of Madara Uchiha!
Killer Bee: oh...., you will pay me for that
The scene shows Obito still unable to free himself. Obito try to attack Naruto with fire jutsu, but Naruto protects himself with kyuubi tails. Obito try then to absorb himself in his dimenssion. Naruto surrounds and wraps him with many kyuubi tails. While Killer bee is charging Bijuu Dama from some distance
The shows Kakashi and Gai. Kakashi is heavy breathing and sweating while Gai looks at him with sadness and understanding
Kakashi: *this..., Obito could't do that and Rin, i let her die...*
Gai shakes Kakashi: wake up, Kakashi. there is no time to be sad. This battle will decide about out future...
Kakashi feel bad : Rin...
Gai looks at him with sadness and disappointment: Kakashi...
Kakashi is depressed: ....
Gai: I understand how do you feel Kakashi, but... , think about it. If Rin be alive how could she reacts to your feeling sad and bahave so bad.
Kakashi:?! but I let her die...
Gai: It is sad, but we are not gods Kakashi, we are only human, death is something what waits all of us, but sometimes someone had to die earlier.
Kakashi....
Gai: you should't blame yourself, even you failed. You are great sensei *looks at Naruto*, you fought well there, you are genious and Obito is as well guilty as you. He shouldn't blame you if he didn't do anything to save her.
Kakashi: you think so...
Gai: Yes and now our resposibility is stop your friend Obito from this madness. We have to stop him even if it means killing him, this is was Obito would want if he would be same Obito we knew.
Kakashi restore his coolnes: Yes, you are alright thanks gai
Gai: Great to see you back!, Now as your eternal rival I and you will stop Obito from hurting more people.
Kakashi: I will think about plan, be ready Gai *Obito, you can't redem himself anymore, I am sorry for Rin but it is you fault as mine. Think about me whatever you want but I am going to help you met Rin soon by killing you in this world!*
Gai: *great Kakashi coolnes return* time to figth, you will feel my power of youth!
The scene changes to Obito surrounded by Naruto kyuubi tails, while Killer Bee finished charging bijuu dama. Few hundreds meters away is sitting Uchiha Madara on rock.
Madara: *Obito, I am amazed that he got great in fire release and Kamui...*
fool, make use of your Rinnengan...
Obito: Damn, I can't free myself...
Naruto: NOW!
Obito:?!, SHIT!
The scene shows Kyuubi tails releasing Obito leaving only two which keep Obito by his legs. Killer Bee is about to fire off Bijuu Dama at Obito, who notice this make fast handseals and activate stakes impaled in Hachibi tentacles blocking Killer bee bijuu power. Killer bee bijuu dama dissapear slowly while Bee is screaming in pain.
Obito: Outer path sealing Rinnengan stakes!
Killer bee: ARGH!!! shit!
Naruto: Damn you!
The scene shows Naruto attacking Obito with kyuubi tails but Obito become intangible so kyuubi tails pass through him.
Obito: why are trying so hard?!
Naruto attacks Obito with kyuubi tails: I will get you!
Obito become intangible: No way!
When Obito become tangible again Naruto throws explosive kunai and after that his own clone transformed in shuriken at Obito. Obito become intangible so explosive kunai pass through him then Kakashi use Kamui to send second shuriken to Obito dimenssion, Another Naruto clone is showed behind Kakashi healing him.
Obito: *explosive kunai* I will pass throught it!
Naruto: *yes, he fall in our trap* shit!
Obito in other dimenssion: Now I am safe there...
Obito:?!
The scene shows kunai appear in Obito dimenssion. Suddenly Kunai reveal Naruto clone who use Rasengan and charge at Obito. Obito become tangible in real world again.
Obito: Damn you Naruto, Kakashi...
Obito:?!
The scene shows Obito become tangible, while Gai is about to punch Obito straight in face. Obito avoid Gai punch in last second and kick Gai in face send him flying.
Obito: Shit ! *Gai, I will never ****ing let you touch me*
Gai: Almost!
*Obito avoid and kick Gai in face*
Gai: Arghh!!!
The scene shows Naruto attacking Obito from back with his kyuubi tails, Obito protect himself with Madara war fan creating dust everywhere. From dust is comming noise sound as it reveals fuuton rasen shuriken!
Obito: No way Naruto, you stop me!
Narut: *Almost and he will be dead*, shit I didn't hit him!
Obito: *what did he plan to do* fool you think it could work on me
Obito turns around: oh, not shit!
The scene shows Obito turns around to see fuuton Rasen shuriken almost hitting him
Obito: Shit!!! *I can't become intangible in time*
Kakashi: Do it Naruto!
Gai with bleeding nose: Yes
Killer Bee: for everyone, destroy this fool!
Kurama smiles: Naruto
Gyuuki: it is his end...
Madara: Banshou Tenin!
The scene shows Fuuton Rasen shuriken expanding and destroying everything in range, finally blowing itself to create crater. After dust fall on ground.
Naruto: I got him!
Kakashi: Great!
Gai: hehe
Obito: I couldn't think that for sure
Naruto, Kakashi, Gai, Killer Bee: No way!
The scene shows Obito standing next to Madara, while Everyone look at disbelief
Naruto: How could you be alive?!
Obito: My master saved me.
Kakashi, Gai, Naruto and Killer bee: Master *looks at Madara*, so it was his work, damn!
Madara: Yes I saved him because I didn't want to loose my usefull tool.
*flashback shows: Madara used Bansho Tenin with stretching one his hand at Obito, who was about to hit by FRS. Obito is pulled in last second to Madara hand as Madara release pulling force Obito land on ground.*
Kakashi: Tool?!, Obito, why you let him to call you as tool?! OBITO!
Naruto: Tool?! *He remembers Haku and Zabuza*, really?!
Obito: Yes, I am only tool to my master. He created me, he gave me aim, reason to live, he taught me a lot of things and yet he only asked me to be his tool.
Kakashi: But why?!
Naruto: Stop it!, ninja is no tool!
Obito: You are so child ,Naruto. I am Madara Tool as Sasuke is mine Tool. As Madara Tool I will do whatever my master say me, I will protect him with my live because he saved me from death and gave me reason to live.
Naruto: reason to live *Haku, Gaara, Kimmimaro...*
Kakashi: you are not tool OBITO!, look you are so powerfull now it isn't too late for you to reedem himself...
Obito: Now, it is too late. I am not Obito you knew, I can look like him, has his soul and his body but I am not him....
Kakashi, gai, Naruto and Killer bee: What do you mean
Obito: I will show you.

The scene shows Obito transforms completly to Izuna
Madara: hehe, so you have done what I had done before
Kakashi: What do you mean?!
Naruto, Killer Bee, Gai: ....
The scene shows Izuna transforms completly to Madara
Madara send glare at Obito transformed in Madara: amazing..., but you shouldn't do that.
Everyone:?! *How there could be two Madara at the same time*
The scene shows Obito as Madara transforms completly to Hashirama
Madara:?! *even hashirama... I see so after my death he fully intergrated with orginal Zetsu I created, and now he can take become anyone who's DNA he has. I gave you some mine cells, izuna cells and even Hashirama*
Everyone: First Hokage?!, what the hell?!
The scene shows Obito as Hashirama transforms to Kagami
Everyone: What the hell?!
Madara: *nice, so he took Kagami DNA too*
The scene shows Obito as Kagami transforms back to Obito appearance.
While Naruto, Killer bee, Gai and Kakashi are confused and mind ****ed

Obito laughs: Hehe..., your face expression make me laugh. Yes this is how I fooled everyone...
Kakashi, Naruto, Killer bee and Gai:?!
Obito: What do you think now Kakashi?!
Kakashi: Obito, why?!
Naruto, Killer bee, Gai: Who in the hell are you?!
Obito: I am not Obito!!!. I am not Obito because his ideals, personality, wishes and even his body are destroyed with my fake death...
Kakashi: fake death?!
Obito: I am Tobi Uchiha , ultimate tool ninja in Madara hand, I am his creation and I owe him everything I got. Now I will tell you about Uchiha Obito death
Madara smirks: *it will be interesting, let's listen*


603 - Death Of Uchiha Obito comming soon...
604 - Birth of Uchiha Tobi comming soon....
605 - Master and student comming soon
606 - Madara death comming soon


Wow, I wrote really big predicitons, so I hope you enjoy reading this.

Please give me comments about what you liked and what you disliked in my prediction:), sorry for any grammar issues:D

Tobi being Obito is really let down for me, but I hope Kishi will do something liek me or other epic...

not shit he wrote in 600 chapter... hope dies last.


Hear you soon
 
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Henrik

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I don't like how people underrestimate and make Tobi look like shit. Madara doesn't speak like that, and he wasnt Itachi's teacher
 

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ok i am pretty sure kakashi knows who da fuq madara is, come on he is not that stupid, secondly of course madara knows who naruto is, kabuto told him about him whenever he was revived, there are so many inconcistensies with your script and the dialogue is so childish.
 

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I only read 601, but it was painful to read. There are such major grammatical issues, it was almost unbearable. You got basically everyone's speech patterns wrong and type like a 12 year old.
 

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Good but it's like most of the lines will never happen like obito changing faces and body or naruto restoring kakashi's chakra. NO OFFENCE THOUGH
 
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