Thank youIt's good, you just need to focus more on the face and hair
Well depends how long you've been drawing for, so if you've been drawing for a while lets say 2 years or more, honestly that would be pathetic (sorry if its too harsh).
However if you just started then that's actually not bad plus everyone always ends up having trouble with the face i use to be like that too.
Overall 8/10.
The shading is perfect you got that down pack just the face. But i give it a 8.5/10
it's good.. will be better with some finishing touch (maybe with drawing pen)
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It's good but can easily be improved with patience, like the hand for example, redraw the fingers and add a bit more detail to them to make them look my finger-like and not rolls. Then the hair I think make it more spikey, if you can and then go over it all in pen (the outlines).
The shading is very good though and everything else seems to be fine too, good job.
Edit: It may be a good idea to upload the picture you drew from (that's if you did use a picture) so that people can see how close to the picture you were.