[Predictions] My chapter 623 Prediction..honest feedback plz and ty :)

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()=thoughts and actions

MANGA 623 : What’s in a name....


(Madara is stands near the river out of the forest walks Hashirama)

MADARA : Hey you’re back (gives hashi a half smile)…watch this..(Madara successfully skips a stone to the other side of the river)

HASHI : (gazes off into the distance) We both can cross the river now…we have that in common…I bet we have so much more in common too…if only the clans would see it (frowns)

MADARA : You know…I feel the same way..

HASHI : You do?!?!

MADARA : Of course I do you idiot! Sheesh why are you so dense?

HASHI : I’m sorry...(Hashi frowns)

MADARA : Don’t get all bent outta shape…if only the clans would take the time to know one another through peace instead of battle…it makes me sick this world..(thinks for a second) Uchiha…

HASHI : What?!?!

MADARA : that’s my clan name..Uchiha Madara…

HASHI : My brother was killed by the Uchiha…

MADARA : .....(slowly and quietly readies a kunai behind his back)

HASHI : But.... I don’t think ill of the Uchiha it’s this war that’s to blame..killing is all anyone does theses days..If it wasn’t an Uchiha it would’ve been another clan…or another..

MADARA : ?!!

HASHI : I never want anyone to experience this kind of pain again, we must end this stupid violence.

MADARA : WE?!?!?

HASHI : I mean (shuffles his feet bashfully) ..that is if you want to help me...

MADARA : well um…yea..I do (relaxes and releases the hidden kunai)

HASHI : (quietly mutters something)

MADARA : What was that?

HASHI : (mutters words…)

MADARA : You dummy I can’t hear you! Speak up! Leans in closer to hear..

HASHI : My surname is…

MADARA : (listens intensely)

HASHI : My surname is…Trolololol ( Hashi quickly whips out a kunai and stabs an unsuspecting Madara in his gut.)

MADARA : (screams and falls to the ground writhing in pain) W…why?...why hashi?(gasps for air as blood trickles from his mouth)

HASHI : (Walks over to the fallen Madara and while standing over him, pulls his pants down and proceeds to teabag him repeatedly) Trololol (Hashi hears shouting in the distance)

UCHIHA CLANSMEN: Over there!! I see them!!! Lord Madara is hurt quick send for healers!!

HASHI : Oh shit!! (Dips into the forest)

EDO HASHI : That day, we first introduced ourselves as a true Shinobi.

-END CHAPTER-
 
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well naruto and sasuke kissed so its possible hashirama and madara did some weird s*** too :P
 

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Not bad for a first try...........Welcome to NB btw
 

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It would have been madara who stabbed hashirama.
 

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Not to be a D*** but how much of a no life would you have to be to think and write a prediction??? lol as if anyone is ever going to get their prediction right? :x but how much of a no life would you have to be to even read it? beats me I just came in to insult you a bit :D
 

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Lol wtf trololol
 

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the chapter needs itachi, manga has gone so boring without him :NO:
 

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Well that's messed up o-o
 
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Welcome to NB :)

Not bad, seems legit ;)
 

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HASHI : Oh shit!! (Dips into the forest)

EDO HASHI : That day, we first introduced ourselves as a true Shinobi.

-END CHAPTER-
LMFAO funniest part right here
 

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That was actually going pretty good until you trolled

Lmao didnt see that coming
 

Hasby

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lol, not gonna happen XD
 

KGB Kakuzu

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Got halfway through a fairly good chapter, but then it went troll...

Anyways, I doubt this happens. I'm also guessing we are going past childhood and closer to teens like Naruto is now or their 20's
 

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Lol, that was a funny prediction. Not bad for beginners. However, welcome to NB, enjoy your stay. :)
 

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first post is a prediction? .. weird
 
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