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Name: Remagtesb
Nickname: Sting
Gender: Male
Age: Unknown
Clan: Unknown

Looks: Sting is a tall slim man with white, gray marked hair. He has Dark brown colored eyes and his attire took the form of the standard shinobi dress of his idol, Hashimara Senju consisting of light blue traditional armour from his era — similar to that of samurai— worn over a simple white suit. This armour was constructed from numerous metal plates, formed into multiple protective guards along his body, in particular: chest, shoulders, thighs and forearms. This clothing was accompanied by sandals.

Personality: Sting is a righteous hero with a strong willpower and an ability to overcome great fear. Having a strong sense of right and wrong, Sting is guided by his own conscience rather than the general rules that most of the other shinobi follow. One of his most notable traits is his refusal to admit defeat even in the darkest of situations, which has allowed him to achieve victory even in the most difficult odds. He also carries with him a Broad long sword.

Village Info

Village of Birth: N/A
Village of Alliance: N/A

Rank//Chakra Info

Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty: N/A
Elements: Wind/Water
Your ninjutsu:




Background Info

History: Sting was abandoned in an orphanage at a young age. No one knows who his parents are. He was left with only a broad sword that never seems to rust or break. Ever since that day no one knows his age.


Battles

Won: N/A
Lost: N/A

~Declined~
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BazzBee

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What is this ? Its incomplete get the template from here ( ) and fill it up.
 
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Penguin

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Ye, I would add some pictures and give it some color. Nice effort though! :hint:
 

AppleJuice

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I think you need a clan.
And an age.
You need some pictures.
You can only have one element.
And for god sake this is the second bio I've seen that the village of birth says "N/A"!!! How is that possible!!!
 

BestGamer

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hes from an orphanage and doesn't know what village he is.....is that acceptable?
 

Penguin

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No clan. Do not put a clan.

You need village.
 

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Yeah it could use some work, nice effort though xD
 

Professor Finesser

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Why is everyone sugar coating this? The bio is plain, and lacks substance simple as that U_U
 

0TailBijuu

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Why is everyone sugar coating this? The bio is plain, and lacks substance simple as that U_U
kinda. my first "attempt at a bio" was a shino bio that sucked soooo bad. it was kinda like this. all the comments where, "how terrible" and "this sucks."
 

Artemis81

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My first attempt at a bio is going to be scrapped.
The moment my Annie bio is approved.
If it is.
 
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