[Mystery] My Apartment: Chapter 3

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My Apartment chapter 3
"She is in danger?"

Characters:
Polly Levit
=a young 18 year old girl who lives alone after her parents go overseas. She has a long blonde hair. She likes mysteries and solving mysteries.


Stuart Wood
=a young 20 year old boy who lives alone next door.


Edward Strike
=A young 21 year old guy who lived in the room of Polly before.He always wear a black suit.


Anonymous/Mike Mooney
=the person who is following Edward and Polly. But the truth is, he is a policeman and also a private detective.



Owner/Palrus
=The owner of the restaurant.


Boss
=a leader of a gangster.


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Chapter 3


"You!! go upstair, maybe someone is there"
"Yes boss."
"No, no one is there" owner said.
"Ohh, really? *grin*" Boss asked.
Oh no, they're going to find us.
"Let's hide in the cabinet" Edward whispered.
"O-oh, ok" I response.
*open the door-thud* "What's going on here?" a young man asked.
"Yo..yo..y--" the boss said but he stopped, "You! what are you doing here?!" the Boss asked.
*everyone is shocked*
"Did you see the sign?? it's already closed!!" the Boss continued.
"Ooh, is it bad to come here?? afterall this is our restaurant!"the young man responded.
wooh, there is someone there, thank goodness. wait, his voice is familiar??
"ah- I see, ok, we're going to leave now" the Boss said, "Let's go, kids" He continued.
"Ye-Yes boss" the memebers said.
*closed the door- bang"
"Are you ok uncle??" the young man asked.
"*cough-cough* Ye-yeah."the owner responded.
"I think they left already." Edward said, "Let's go, before they come back" He continued.
"o-ok" I responded.
Wooh, Thank Goodness, they left and if not we're dead, I think.
Ah *stopped* "What is it Edward??" I asked. *shocked* ah, it.. it's--
"Stuart??" Edward asked.


huh?? He knew Stuart??
"Ed-Edward!You're back!" Stuart said and hug Edward.
wooh. They knew each other.
"Ms. Polly Levit??" Stuart said,
*shocked* he remembered me.
"What are you doing here?? He asked.
"uuhhm, Ed--" I sai--
"She's just visiting this Restaurant" Edward said
" uhm, Yeah" I said.
"So, you knew each other??" Stuart asked. "Ye--" I resp-- but cutted off.
"No, when she visit here, I'm already here and I'm just serving her a coffee upstair"He responded.
Eh?? maybe he don't want Stuart to know about it.
"Oh, Stuart. What are you doing here?" I asked.
"I'm just visiting this restaurant." He responded.
"Isn't it your uncle's restaurant??" I asked.
"Oh, no. I just called him uncle and maybe you heard me a moment ago but that was just an act." He answered.
"Well, we still treat him like an uncle" Edward butt in.
"Oh, I see" I said, "so who are they?? the one who visited earlier?? I asked.
"Oh, they're just a gangsters who always fight in this restaurant, isn't right Ed?? He said.
"Uh. Yeah *smile*" Edward responded.
After we have our little chat, Stuart glance in the clock.


"oh, It's already 9 o'clock. I think I need to go now." He said, "Do you want to have a ride ms. Polly Levit?" He continued.
"Hah??" I uttered.
"Afterall our house is just next to each other *smile*" He continued.
"Umm, I thi--" I sai-- *sigh*
"Yeah, Ms. Levit. It's better to have someone to accompany you, because around this area has a lot of perverts" He said.
"Eeeh??!" " I'm just kidding.*laugh* But It's still better to have accompany and it's already late too" He continued.
"Oh, Ok" I said.
We then go outside.
"We will go now.*enter the car* bye" Stuart said.
"Ok, take care *wave*" Owner said.
Stuart whisks his hair back and start the engine.
Then he said "fasten your seatbelt."
"O-ok"I responded.
I'm kinda nervous and I don't know why, maybe It just the way he drove the car.
"Do you feel hot?" He asked.
"Uuum. yeah, kinda" I responded.
"Ok, I will higher the temperature" He said.
*yawn* ooh, I kinda feel sleepy. My eyes is so heavy, it felt lik--.


(Back to the Restaurant)
Owner: are you ok with this Ed?? *wiping a wine glass*
Edward: *sip a mug of beer* What do you mean??
Owner: You let your girl snatched by others.
Edward: Wha-what?? Stop it Palrus. She's not my girl. *sip*
Owner: Oh, come on Edward Strike. The way you look at her is different than usual.
Edward: You knew my heart is already occupied.
Owner: Yeah Yeah. I know. Your childhood friend, but that's in the past. I think it's already 10 years,right??
Edward: ....

---:*enter the resto*
Owner: Welcome sir.
---: can I have Vodka please.
Owner: right a way sir. *get in the kitchen*
Edward: *turn to the left side* *shock*
---: ....
Edward: Yo-yo-you.
---: hmm. haah! *shock* you! *get a gun* *stand up*
Edward: *hands up* wai-wait.
Owner: *get out from the kitchen* wooh, sir. you-your gu-gun. Yo-you wa-want m-oney.
---: aah.*point the gun* wai-wait I-I *get a Police ID* he-here. I'm a police and a private detective.
Edward&Owner: Huh??


(A minutes later)
Edward: so your a policeman that is following Ms. Levit. and your name sir is??
Mike/Moon: Mooney, Mike Mooney. and you? your an acquaintance of ms. Levit?
Edward: ah, yeah maybe. my name is Eward Strike.
Moon: I see.
Edward: btw, why are you following ms. Levit?? Did someone hired you to do that?
Moon: Yes, and that is mr. Roco.
Edward: mr, Roco?? the landlord? Why?
Moon: I don't really know the details, but he said.. "Please follow ms. Levit where ever she go even it's Day or Night. If there is someone is with her even it's her boyfriend... but I don't think she has, no matter what happen follow them. Guard her and protect her with all your cost!!" that's what he said, that's why I've been following ms. Levit but I lost a sight both of you when you entered the train and I also thought that you're her boyfriend. That's why I think that I stop for this day, so that both of you have time together and maybe you think of me as a stalker too. Am I right??
Edward: *dumbfounded* uuhm.. it's not what you think, she is just my friend. We're not in that kind of relationship.
Moon: oh.really?? From what I see..
Edward: Don't worry about ms. Levit. she's all right now.
Moon: is she here?
Edward: ha?? no.
Moon: then how can you be sure about it?? If someone you care of is out of your sight of course you worry. you dimwit.
Owner: *nod nod* ... you right.
Moon: you agree right? high five!
Owner: Yeah! high five!
Edward: *laugh* because she's with my best friend who live next to her room.
Moon: live next to her room?? you mean mr. Stuart Wood??
Edward: ah ye-yes. why?
Moon: Mr. Roco said to look for him too.
Edward: *stand* what?!? *shock*
Moon: ms. Levit is in danger!!


-to be continued-


What happened to Polly?? What will Edward do?

Check in the next chapter.

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Mind blowing chapter indeed U_U explanation mistakes were spotted but none the less nice chapter I really like Edwards character :p
Hahaha. yeah, when I checked it again I saw it O_O. Well, I made that an hour ago and I'm a little bit sleepy when I made that.
 
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