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Hey guys . As promised here's the following chapter. PHEW 2 chapters in one day.
Anyways Thanks for reading my Fan Fic. I thank all those who continue to read my series and Special Thanks to those who comment and share your thoughts, your the ones who keep me writing
Anyways There's going to be another character change this chapter
CHAPTER 6 - MINATO NAMIKAZE
Minato , Naruto and Kakash left the mountain that over looked the war. They leave behind their dear friend Obito who turned out to be the man behind the mask, murdered by Sasuke. They now rush towards the battle with Madara and the 5 kages.
They jump tree to tree moving as fast they can.
Naruto: Follow me there this way.
Kakashi: How do you know for sure?
Naruto: *looks back at kakashi, to reveal orange eyes* I can sense their chakra through my sage mode. I have a wider range now with Kurama's help.
The three continue as fast as they can go.
Minato: You say Madara is alive. How's that possible?
Kakashi: The same way your body was brought back. The edo tensei. Although his revival wasnt as complicated as yours.
Minato: what a troublesome jutsu.
They continue to close in on their destination for about another 20 mins at a steady pace.
They left behind the forest they were in and now ran across a field of rocks.
Minato: *stops*
Naruto & Kakashi: *notice minato's halt and stop and walk towards him*
Naruto: Dad why'd you stop we have to get going and help the kages against Madara.
Kakashi: Sensei he's right we dont have much time.
BLAST.
A mountain in the distance was torn in half. The impact caused a small earthquake making Minato , Kakashi and Naruto struggle for balance.
After it subsides minato speaks out.
Minato: *looks intensely at the damage* Naruto...go back to konoha.
Naruto: WHAT! WHY?
Minato: What you told me about your friend. He will attack Konoha, and if no ones there to protect it, our village will be defenseless. You seem low on chakra as well, you need rest. Go back with Kakashi ill be there as soon as i meet with the other kages and we'll start with the Perfect Sage mode training.
Naruto: What about Madara?!?! I cant let you fight him alone. My friends are out there too, my comrades are dying while im laying back taking it easy!
Minato: (he's stubborn...just like kushina) Your job is to protect the leaf now. We'll fight the battle here. Your battle is a different one. And i promise that not one more person will die when i arrive. I swear as the fourth hokage.
Naruto:.....fine. But the leaf is so far from here it'll take forever to get back.
Kakashi: I understand what you mean sensei, but Naruto's right here. It'll take too long to get back to the leaf.
Minato: hmmm....let me try something *puts a kunai on the ground and then extends his hands* take my hand.
Naruto and kakashi briefly stare at his hand but decide to take it without question.
Minato: *grasps their hands*
Their vision seem to blur for a split second and as fast as it came it disappeared as their vision cleared again.
Naruto: ....No way....were in Granny Hokage's room....how'd you do that.
Kakashi: ...the Flying Thunder God technique.....
Minato: *smiles as he puts a hand on his head* To be honest i had no idea if that would have worked or not. Im actually pretty surprised the old seal is still here. *points to the roof were an old tag lies* The room looks a bit different from when i was hokage.
Naruto: ive actually never noticed that before.
Kakashi:...sensei what do you want me here for, wouldnt it be better for me to go with you.
Minato: *looks at kakashi* No. You need the rest as well. besides.....The eye obito gave you back in the war....I can feel an extraordinary power from it....The Mangekyo Sharingan is the only one capable of it. You also seem to have used a lot lately.
*looks at kakashi more seriously*
Minato: i also know that an overextended use of the Mangekyo leads to blindness. No. You need to stay, if anything happens im confident you can think of a strategy to deal with it.
Kakashi: (he really is amazing) Okay. I understand. Leave things here to me and Naruto. We'll be waiting.
Naruto: *smiles, looks at minato and raises an extended fist* Come back okay dad.
Minato: *looks oddly at the fist but then seems to get the idea and bumps fists with Naruto*
I promise.
PFFF.
With that Minato disappears.
Minato used the FTG to teleport to the Kunai he dropped before he went to Konoha.
Minato: *picks up the Kunai and puts a finger on the ground* Okay...time to go.
By putting his finger on the ground Minato was able to sense the general direction of The allied shinobi force.
CHANGE OF SCENERY- 5 KAGES
As an enormous Susanoo stands before the five kages they look on in hopelessness as it towers over them.
Mei: ....how can we even fight someone like this.
Onoki: ...I dont want to give up...but...were on the verge of collapsing and our enemy only gets stronger.
A: He's to strong. Onoki's right, we should retreat for now and launch a full scale attack with the remaining of our forces.
Tsunade: As much as i hate to admit it your probably right. Were to weakened to go up against something like this.
Garra: Alright it's settled then. Mizukage , Hokage , Tsuchikage ! Run ive got one last jutsu left in me. Raikage stay with me ill need you to get away in time.
KAGES: GOT IT!
3 of the Kages run in retreat as Garra and A stay back for the final attack.
Madara:*looks as some of the kages retreat* "I see...but your not getting away."
Garra: Claspes his hands together.
SAND TSUNAMI.
A gigantice wave of sand starts to build in front of Garra and A.
Garra: *raises his hands*
As the wave of sand moves towards Madara it grows larger.
It collapses at Susanoo's knees.
Garra: *raises his hands as if he were lifting something heavy*
ARGHHHHH
The sand starts to climb the susanoo rapidly covering it up.
Garra: okay raikage Lets go!
A: alright! LIGHTNING RELEASE ARMOUR! *lightning surrounds A's body"
*A grabs Garra by the torso and runs off*
Garra: *looking back at the covered Susanoo*
SAND COFFIN!
The sand hardens on Susanoo and crushes it with tremendous force.
The Kages meet at a distance about 1mile away.A deactivates his lightning armor as he catches up with the rest of the kages and puts garra down.
Garra: That wont hold him long
A: He's right we have to go now. I used my last chakra reserves on that last jutsu. Were all exhausted and Madara has unlimited chakra we cant win in our condition.
KAGES: *shake their heads in agreement*
Tsunade: Allied SHINOBI FORCE! WE HERE BY ORDER A RETREAT.
Allied Shinobi: *hesitate at the order, but then start to run back to camp*
Within the susanoo there is pitch darkness
Madara: *closes his eyes and grins* How pathetic.
BLAST!
The sand breaks off the Susanoo as it stretches its arms wide.
Madara: NOW DIE! *swings his hand*
A giant shock wave heads right at the kages. It shreads everything in its path scarring the earth as it heads for the kages. None of them have the energy or chakra to dodge it.
PFFF
5 kunai past right by the kages heads.
BLAST.
A giant dust cloud forms were the kages stood.
Madara:
*Starts to turn around*
"They really were too weak in the end"
*Halts and quickly looks back*
"Thats impossible!"
On a small hill about 2 miles layed the Kages.
Madara: It's the 9 tails host *squints his eyes* wait...no this is someone else...
Kages: *start to lift themselves of the ground while opening their eyes they see a man standing tall in front of them, his bright yellow hair waving in the wind along with his white coat. *
Garra: *stares*
Mei: who-
A : impossible....
onoki: i cant believe it.
As the kages stare in disbelief one of them lightly whispers his name.
Tsunade: yondaime hokage....
Minato: *turns around 4 kunai in hand and grins*
Hey ....its been a while
So that was chapter 6. Hope you enjoyed. I think ill do chapter 7 tomorrow. I tried to make this as entertaining as possible for you so i hope i didnt disappoint.
REMEMBER TO RATE 1 - 5....5 BEING AWESOME. AND PLZ COMMENT UR THOUGHTS ARE WHAT MAKE ME A BETTER WRITER AND COMPLIMENTS ENCOURAGE ME TO WRITE MORE. UNTIL NEXT TIME GUYS.
Anyways Thanks for reading my Fan Fic. I thank all those who continue to read my series and Special Thanks to those who comment and share your thoughts, your the ones who keep me writing
Anyways There's going to be another character change this chapter
CHAPTER 6 - MINATO NAMIKAZE
Minato , Naruto and Kakash left the mountain that over looked the war. They leave behind their dear friend Obito who turned out to be the man behind the mask, murdered by Sasuke. They now rush towards the battle with Madara and the 5 kages.
They jump tree to tree moving as fast they can.
Naruto: Follow me there this way.
Kakashi: How do you know for sure?
Naruto: *looks back at kakashi, to reveal orange eyes* I can sense their chakra through my sage mode. I have a wider range now with Kurama's help.
The three continue as fast as they can go.
Minato: You say Madara is alive. How's that possible?
Kakashi: The same way your body was brought back. The edo tensei. Although his revival wasnt as complicated as yours.
Minato: what a troublesome jutsu.
They continue to close in on their destination for about another 20 mins at a steady pace.
They left behind the forest they were in and now ran across a field of rocks.
Minato: *stops*
Naruto & Kakashi: *notice minato's halt and stop and walk towards him*
Naruto: Dad why'd you stop we have to get going and help the kages against Madara.
Kakashi: Sensei he's right we dont have much time.
BLAST.
A mountain in the distance was torn in half. The impact caused a small earthquake making Minato , Kakashi and Naruto struggle for balance.
After it subsides minato speaks out.
Minato: *looks intensely at the damage* Naruto...go back to konoha.
Naruto: WHAT! WHY?
Minato: What you told me about your friend. He will attack Konoha, and if no ones there to protect it, our village will be defenseless. You seem low on chakra as well, you need rest. Go back with Kakashi ill be there as soon as i meet with the other kages and we'll start with the Perfect Sage mode training.
Naruto: What about Madara?!?! I cant let you fight him alone. My friends are out there too, my comrades are dying while im laying back taking it easy!
Minato: (he's stubborn...just like kushina) Your job is to protect the leaf now. We'll fight the battle here. Your battle is a different one. And i promise that not one more person will die when i arrive. I swear as the fourth hokage.
Naruto:.....fine. But the leaf is so far from here it'll take forever to get back.
Kakashi: I understand what you mean sensei, but Naruto's right here. It'll take too long to get back to the leaf.
Minato: hmmm....let me try something *puts a kunai on the ground and then extends his hands* take my hand.
Naruto and kakashi briefly stare at his hand but decide to take it without question.
Minato: *grasps their hands*
Their vision seem to blur for a split second and as fast as it came it disappeared as their vision cleared again.
Naruto: ....No way....were in Granny Hokage's room....how'd you do that.
Kakashi: ...the Flying Thunder God technique.....
Minato: *smiles as he puts a hand on his head* To be honest i had no idea if that would have worked or not. Im actually pretty surprised the old seal is still here. *points to the roof were an old tag lies* The room looks a bit different from when i was hokage.
Naruto: ive actually never noticed that before.
Kakashi:...sensei what do you want me here for, wouldnt it be better for me to go with you.
Minato: *looks at kakashi* No. You need the rest as well. besides.....The eye obito gave you back in the war....I can feel an extraordinary power from it....The Mangekyo Sharingan is the only one capable of it. You also seem to have used a lot lately.
*looks at kakashi more seriously*
Minato: i also know that an overextended use of the Mangekyo leads to blindness. No. You need to stay, if anything happens im confident you can think of a strategy to deal with it.
Kakashi: (he really is amazing) Okay. I understand. Leave things here to me and Naruto. We'll be waiting.
Naruto: *smiles, looks at minato and raises an extended fist* Come back okay dad.
Minato: *looks oddly at the fist but then seems to get the idea and bumps fists with Naruto*
I promise.
PFFF.
With that Minato disappears.
Minato used the FTG to teleport to the Kunai he dropped before he went to Konoha.
Minato: *picks up the Kunai and puts a finger on the ground* Okay...time to go.
By putting his finger on the ground Minato was able to sense the general direction of The allied shinobi force.
CHANGE OF SCENERY- 5 KAGES
As an enormous Susanoo stands before the five kages they look on in hopelessness as it towers over them.
Mei: ....how can we even fight someone like this.
Onoki: ...I dont want to give up...but...were on the verge of collapsing and our enemy only gets stronger.
A: He's to strong. Onoki's right, we should retreat for now and launch a full scale attack with the remaining of our forces.
Tsunade: As much as i hate to admit it your probably right. Were to weakened to go up against something like this.
Garra: Alright it's settled then. Mizukage , Hokage , Tsuchikage ! Run ive got one last jutsu left in me. Raikage stay with me ill need you to get away in time.
KAGES: GOT IT!
3 of the Kages run in retreat as Garra and A stay back for the final attack.
Madara:*looks as some of the kages retreat* "I see...but your not getting away."
Garra: Claspes his hands together.
SAND TSUNAMI.
A gigantice wave of sand starts to build in front of Garra and A.
Garra: *raises his hands*
As the wave of sand moves towards Madara it grows larger.
It collapses at Susanoo's knees.
Garra: *raises his hands as if he were lifting something heavy*
ARGHHHHH
The sand starts to climb the susanoo rapidly covering it up.
Garra: okay raikage Lets go!
A: alright! LIGHTNING RELEASE ARMOUR! *lightning surrounds A's body"
*A grabs Garra by the torso and runs off*
Garra: *looking back at the covered Susanoo*
SAND COFFIN!
The sand hardens on Susanoo and crushes it with tremendous force.
The Kages meet at a distance about 1mile away.A deactivates his lightning armor as he catches up with the rest of the kages and puts garra down.
Garra: That wont hold him long
A: He's right we have to go now. I used my last chakra reserves on that last jutsu. Were all exhausted and Madara has unlimited chakra we cant win in our condition.
KAGES: *shake their heads in agreement*
Tsunade: Allied SHINOBI FORCE! WE HERE BY ORDER A RETREAT.
Allied Shinobi: *hesitate at the order, but then start to run back to camp*
Within the susanoo there is pitch darkness
Madara: *closes his eyes and grins* How pathetic.
BLAST!
The sand breaks off the Susanoo as it stretches its arms wide.
Madara: NOW DIE! *swings his hand*
A giant shock wave heads right at the kages. It shreads everything in its path scarring the earth as it heads for the kages. None of them have the energy or chakra to dodge it.
PFFF
5 kunai past right by the kages heads.
BLAST.
A giant dust cloud forms were the kages stood.
Madara:
*Starts to turn around*
"They really were too weak in the end"
*Halts and quickly looks back*
"Thats impossible!"
On a small hill about 2 miles layed the Kages.
Madara: It's the 9 tails host *squints his eyes* wait...no this is someone else...
Kages: *start to lift themselves of the ground while opening their eyes they see a man standing tall in front of them, his bright yellow hair waving in the wind along with his white coat. *
Garra: *stares*
Mei: who-
A : impossible....
onoki: i cant believe it.
As the kages stare in disbelief one of them lightly whispers his name.
Tsunade: yondaime hokage....
Minato: *turns around 4 kunai in hand and grins*
Hey ....its been a while
So that was chapter 6. Hope you enjoyed. I think ill do chapter 7 tomorrow. I tried to make this as entertaining as possible for you so i hope i didnt disappoint.
REMEMBER TO RATE 1 - 5....5 BEING AWESOME. AND PLZ COMMENT UR THOUGHTS ARE WHAT MAKE ME A BETTER WRITER AND COMPLIMENTS ENCOURAGE ME TO WRITE MORE. UNTIL NEXT TIME GUYS.
