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hey everyone 
. I know its been a few days but i havnt had time to write because of work lately (13 hour work days).
Anways If you have read my Fan fic before i thank you for reading.AND A SPECIAL THANKS TO ALL THOSE THAT GIVE ME UR THOUGHTS AND COMMENTS UR THE ONES THAT ENCOURAGE ME TO KEEP WRITTING.
Also For you first time reader i hope you enjoy and consider following the series
Anyways this chapter will Focus on Sasuke, and will be a bit short but another longer chapter will be released today. Keep Tuned guys things are about to go down
CHAPTER 5: CLASH OF WILLS
Back in an old underground hideout two figures walk slowly down a shadowy low light hallway.Cobwebs litter the walls and dust and dry blood litter the ground.
Its quiet.The steps of the two figures can be heard from afar.
Step...Step...Step...
Orochimaru: Im sorry about the mess sasuke-kun. This is one of my older hideouts. Back from when i first fled from the leaf, so its not quiet guest presentable, but it was the closest one to us.
Sasuke:.....
Orochimaru: Oh thats right, you took quiet a bit of damage from your battle with Tobi hehehe....Im still amazed you managed to kill a rennigan and sharingan user.
Sasuke: Lets just go and get this done with.
Orochimaru: *smiles* Pushy as always.
Sasuke: whatever
The two continue to walk down the dusty hallway until they reach some stairs that lead down deeper into the hideout.
Orochimaru: My labs just down these stairs
Sasuke: *takes the first step down the stairs*
Orochimaru: *briefly stops to look at sasuke and starts to descend the stairs as well*
At the bottom of the stairs they reach a stone door.
Sasuke: *turns the knob*
Orochimaru: This is it.....although it's messier than i remember.
Sasuke: Lets start with the procedure
Orochimaru: Hehehe quiet eager aren't we.
The room is quiet dark save for some small light candles on the walls. The room its self is not to big, but not what you would call small either. There are counters on the edges of the room with old glass bottles on them, some broken and others with liquids in them.
In the center of the room was a stone rectangular table with straps on each of its corners. Probably to hold down someones limbs.
Sasuke: *goes to the middle of the room and lays down in the table*
Orochimaru: *follows sasuke to the table and straps him down and then goes to a counter and searches for something moving books and glass bottles out of the way*
Oro: When the procedure starts i cant stop it sasuke. You may not look .......quite you when its done, but then again you dont seem to have a choice do you sasuke with your chakra level, either you take the First's genes and hope you can control the beast or hold on as long as you can and be consumed.You really are quite cornered here.
Sasuke: The only reason i brought you back was for your help in this. I gave you what you wanted now shut up and start.
Oro: *seems to find what he was searching for and goes towards the table*
Alright then enough small talk. Lets start.
*puts gas mask over sasuke's mouth and then puts a needle into sasuke's arm*
Sasuke: *starts to get drowse and slowly closes his eyes*
Oro: okay...time for me to repay my part in this deal.
*takes out an IV stand and puts rubber tubes into sasuke's side*
Sasuke's Sub conscious
Sasuke walks down a dark hallway towards a light coming from a door at the end. Once he enters the room he see's how big it is. It has a thin layer of water on the ground. At the end of the room There are giant metal bars. A giant dark cage.
Sasuke: *this looks like that time before*
Suddenly 3 large eyes open up from the cage.
Sasuke: *walks closer to the cage*
????: *GRRrrr* [something growls quietly from within] "So you are my new host" *GRRrr*
Sasuke: ......Juubi.
Juubi: *looks at sasuke's eyes*
Sasuke: ahhhh! *puts his hands to his eyes. After a little bit the pain subsides and he lowers his hands*
Juubi: *GRRrr* "those are the blasted eyes that put me into this predicament" *GRRrr*
Sasuke: *looks down at the water and see's his EMS was involuntarily activated* ".....how'd you mak-"
Juubi: *RAWWWR* [The force of the Juubi's rawr whips sasuke's hair back and causes the water to spray all over the air]
WHEN I HAVE CONSUMED YOU AND STRIPPED YOU OF YOUR VERY BEING IM GOING TO RIP YOUR FUC*EN EYES OUT. I WILL REDEEM MYSELF OF THIS EMBARRASSMENT !
The juubi launches its body towards the metal bars head first and then pushes with its arms.The cage starts to bend outwards the strain on them forcing them to their breaking limits.
Back in the real world
Oro: *flinches*
A dark purple aura starts to release from sasuke's body covering him
ORO: i have to hurry. It seems the juubi isnt too pleased with the idea of being sealed.
Back into sasuke's sub conscious
Sasuke: *manages to recover and widens his eyes*
Sasuke: *holds up his arms*
The bars seem to stop bending. They slowly start to straighten up again, pushing the juubi deeper into its cage.
Juubi: RAWWRRR [ the juubi releases a furious rawr in protest]
The bars have straightened back to normal.
Sasuke: *collapses onto one knee and takes hard, forced breathes*
Juubi: *looks at sasukes eyes* Ahhh...so you already had a dojutsu and have therefore acquired a stronger dojutsu. The RaSHINGAN.
*laughs quietly* But it seems you dont have the required chakra to use them.
hehehehe. I might have not succeed in taking your soul today, but in due time it will be mine, SASUKE!!!!.
Sasuke: * OPENS HIS EYES, as his vision slowly starts to clear he turns his head to the left. (im awake).
Orochimaru stands leaning against a wall, arms crossed looking at sasuke.
Oro: So your back.
Sasuke: yea...
Oro: *walks to the table and unstraps sasuke*
Sasuke: *sits up. Notices the almost burned through straps*
Oro: *follows his gaze*
The tailed beast chakra was starting to consume you while you were asleep. It's normally a red color but this chakra was purple. Probably because of the fact that its the ten tails. What happened while you were asleep?
Sasuke: .....I just had a bit of trouble, but its been dealt with. How was the surgery.
Oro: *looks at sasuke's left side*
Sasuke: *lifts his shirt*
It reveals cracked dark skin.
ORO: It was successful. I perfected the serum from before so the side affects were less noticeable. An extra face on someone is a bit scary.
Sasuke: (perfect...i can feel the incredible life force flow through me)
...My ribs and lungs are cured.
Oro: After the ten tails chakra retreated it your body healed its self. Its remarkable how fast a jinchurriki can heal.
Sasuke: Perfect. Now i join this war.
Oro: hehehe...i promised to stay out of this one, but ill be watching you from a far.
Sasuke: do what you want. *Gets off the table and exits through the door*
Oro: *stares at the foor for a few moments and then takes something out of his pockets*
Now these eyes will finally be mine. The sharingan and the rinnegan.
Okay so that was chapter 5. THANKS FOR READING. REMEMBER THAT ANOTHER CHAPTER WILL BE RELEASED TODAY SO STAY TUNED FOR THAT.
PLZ RATE 1-5...5 being awsome! PLZ COMMENT AS WELL THEY ARE WHAT INSPIRE ME TO KEEP WRITING.
. I know its been a few days but i havnt had time to write because of work lately (13 hour work days).Anways If you have read my Fan fic before i thank you for reading.AND A SPECIAL THANKS TO ALL THOSE THAT GIVE ME UR THOUGHTS AND COMMENTS UR THE ONES THAT ENCOURAGE ME TO KEEP WRITTING.
Also For you first time reader i hope you enjoy and consider following the series
Anyways this chapter will Focus on Sasuke, and will be a bit short but another longer chapter will be released today. Keep Tuned guys things are about to go down
CHAPTER 5: CLASH OF WILLS
Back in an old underground hideout two figures walk slowly down a shadowy low light hallway.Cobwebs litter the walls and dust and dry blood litter the ground.
Its quiet.The steps of the two figures can be heard from afar.
Step...Step...Step...
Orochimaru: Im sorry about the mess sasuke-kun. This is one of my older hideouts. Back from when i first fled from the leaf, so its not quiet guest presentable, but it was the closest one to us.
Sasuke:.....
Orochimaru: Oh thats right, you took quiet a bit of damage from your battle with Tobi hehehe....Im still amazed you managed to kill a rennigan and sharingan user.
Sasuke: Lets just go and get this done with.
Orochimaru: *smiles* Pushy as always.
Sasuke: whatever
The two continue to walk down the dusty hallway until they reach some stairs that lead down deeper into the hideout.
Orochimaru: My labs just down these stairs
Sasuke: *takes the first step down the stairs*
Orochimaru: *briefly stops to look at sasuke and starts to descend the stairs as well*
At the bottom of the stairs they reach a stone door.
Sasuke: *turns the knob*
Orochimaru: This is it.....although it's messier than i remember.
Sasuke: Lets start with the procedure
Orochimaru: Hehehe quiet eager aren't we.
The room is quiet dark save for some small light candles on the walls. The room its self is not to big, but not what you would call small either. There are counters on the edges of the room with old glass bottles on them, some broken and others with liquids in them.
In the center of the room was a stone rectangular table with straps on each of its corners. Probably to hold down someones limbs.
Sasuke: *goes to the middle of the room and lays down in the table*
Orochimaru: *follows sasuke to the table and straps him down and then goes to a counter and searches for something moving books and glass bottles out of the way*
Oro: When the procedure starts i cant stop it sasuke. You may not look .......quite you when its done, but then again you dont seem to have a choice do you sasuke with your chakra level, either you take the First's genes and hope you can control the beast or hold on as long as you can and be consumed.You really are quite cornered here.
Sasuke: The only reason i brought you back was for your help in this. I gave you what you wanted now shut up and start.
Oro: *seems to find what he was searching for and goes towards the table*
Alright then enough small talk. Lets start.
*puts gas mask over sasuke's mouth and then puts a needle into sasuke's arm*
Sasuke: *starts to get drowse and slowly closes his eyes*
Oro: okay...time for me to repay my part in this deal.
*takes out an IV stand and puts rubber tubes into sasuke's side*
Sasuke's Sub conscious
Sasuke walks down a dark hallway towards a light coming from a door at the end. Once he enters the room he see's how big it is. It has a thin layer of water on the ground. At the end of the room There are giant metal bars. A giant dark cage.
Sasuke: *this looks like that time before*
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Suddenly 3 large eyes open up from the cage.
Sasuke: *walks closer to the cage*
????: *GRRrrr* [something growls quietly from within] "So you are my new host" *GRRrr*
Sasuke: ......Juubi.
Juubi: *looks at sasuke's eyes*
Sasuke: ahhhh! *puts his hands to his eyes. After a little bit the pain subsides and he lowers his hands*
Juubi: *GRRrr* "those are the blasted eyes that put me into this predicament" *GRRrr*
Sasuke: *looks down at the water and see's his EMS was involuntarily activated* ".....how'd you mak-"
Juubi: *RAWWWR* [The force of the Juubi's rawr whips sasuke's hair back and causes the water to spray all over the air]
WHEN I HAVE CONSUMED YOU AND STRIPPED YOU OF YOUR VERY BEING IM GOING TO RIP YOUR FUC*EN EYES OUT. I WILL REDEEM MYSELF OF THIS EMBARRASSMENT !
The juubi launches its body towards the metal bars head first and then pushes with its arms.The cage starts to bend outwards the strain on them forcing them to their breaking limits.
Back in the real world
Oro: *flinches*
A dark purple aura starts to release from sasuke's body covering him
ORO: i have to hurry. It seems the juubi isnt too pleased with the idea of being sealed.
Back into sasuke's sub conscious
Sasuke: *manages to recover and widens his eyes*
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Sasuke: *holds up his arms*
The bars seem to stop bending. They slowly start to straighten up again, pushing the juubi deeper into its cage.
Juubi: RAWWRRR [ the juubi releases a furious rawr in protest]
The bars have straightened back to normal.
Sasuke: *collapses onto one knee and takes hard, forced breathes*
Juubi: *looks at sasukes eyes* Ahhh...so you already had a dojutsu and have therefore acquired a stronger dojutsu. The RaSHINGAN.
*laughs quietly* But it seems you dont have the required chakra to use them.
hehehehe. I might have not succeed in taking your soul today, but in due time it will be mine, SASUKE!!!!.
Sasuke: * OPENS HIS EYES, as his vision slowly starts to clear he turns his head to the left. (im awake).
Orochimaru stands leaning against a wall, arms crossed looking at sasuke.
Oro: So your back.
Sasuke: yea...
Oro: *walks to the table and unstraps sasuke*
Sasuke: *sits up. Notices the almost burned through straps*
Oro: *follows his gaze*
The tailed beast chakra was starting to consume you while you were asleep. It's normally a red color but this chakra was purple. Probably because of the fact that its the ten tails. What happened while you were asleep?
Sasuke: .....I just had a bit of trouble, but its been dealt with. How was the surgery.
Oro: *looks at sasuke's left side*
Sasuke: *lifts his shirt*
It reveals cracked dark skin.
ORO: It was successful. I perfected the serum from before so the side affects were less noticeable. An extra face on someone is a bit scary.
Sasuke: (perfect...i can feel the incredible life force flow through me)
...My ribs and lungs are cured.
Oro: After the ten tails chakra retreated it your body healed its self. Its remarkable how fast a jinchurriki can heal.
Sasuke: Perfect. Now i join this war.
Oro: hehehe...i promised to stay out of this one, but ill be watching you from a far.
Sasuke: do what you want. *Gets off the table and exits through the door*
Oro: *stares at the foor for a few moments and then takes something out of his pockets*
Now these eyes will finally be mine. The sharingan and the rinnegan.
Okay so that was chapter 5. THANKS FOR READING. REMEMBER THAT ANOTHER CHAPTER WILL BE RELEASED TODAY SO STAY TUNED FOR THAT.
PLZ RATE 1-5...5 being awsome! PLZ COMMENT AS WELL THEY ARE WHAT INSPIRE ME TO KEEP WRITING.
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