TY for all those who have kept reading my Fan Fic.
1st time readers
If you havnt read my other chapters it would probably be a good idea because you probably wont have a good idea of whats happening. There not to long so shuldnt be a problem.
Also when i write in bracket -> ( ) . Im writing the characters thoughts, so their not actually talking.
Anyways in this chapter i will be doing a character change. HOPE YOU ENJOY:ice:
Chapter 3: Revival
(naruto, kakashi, guy and bee are still where they were fighting Tobi. Naruto is now in KM and Bee in normal human mode
????: RAAAWWWWWRRRRRRR!
NARUTO:
*turns his head towards a mountain a few miles away*
[Tobi]
"He's over there!"
*Naruto points towards the mountain*
KAKASHI:
*kakashi widens his eyes*
"wha- , what is that?"
On top of the mountain an enormous creature was visible. The ten tails resurrection was completed.
Bee: "That things hell-a huge yo"
Kakashi: " Tobi must have used the S/T jutsu to teleport to the mountain and finish the revival of the ten tails"
NARUTO: *grinds his teeth in frustration and clenches his fists*
"we've got to stop him"
BEE: "hey yo. the ten tails is disappearing you fool!"
GUY: He's right. Tobi said something about becoming the next ten tails jinchurikki. He's probably sealing it inside of him right now.
Naruto: "LETS GO! WE CANT JUST STAND HERE AND LET IT HAPPEN" [yelled naruto in an impatient matter]
Naruto seems to disappear with a yellow flash rushing to the mountain.Leaving everyone behind except Kakashi grabbing him with a Kyuubi cloak arm from the back of his semi ripped shirt.
NARUTO: (ill need kakashi's jutsu to help me stop tobi)
Kakashi: NARUTO! DONT GET RECKLESS HE'S GOT THE TEN TAILS ON HIS SIDE. WE SHOULD WAIT FOR THE OTHERS! [ Kakashi yells against the wind ]
NARUTO: *stops at the base of the mountain.*
WE DONT HAVE TIME FOR THAT
Kakashi: (dammit....he's probably right)
"Get ready to Kakashi-sensei"
Kakashi: "yea...lets keep going"
Naruto: *Runs the rest of the distance up the mountain in a matter of seconds and stop right before a clearing near the top of the mountain and puts kakashi down. Naruto holds his hand up to his eyes to stop the sun shine from blocking his view as he passes through the trees*
The landscape seems to be completely deystroyed with black flames and regular fires littering the battle as well as dogs laying on the the floor. Some already completely engulfed by the black flames and turned to ashes.
Naruto: "was this all done by the ten tails just being summoned?"
KAKASHI: no....there was a fight here before hand. Something big must have taken place here. ( amaterasu is here. Sasuke.....)
????: "groan......"
NARUTO & KAKASHI: * Turn their heads towards the sound*
They see tobi lying against a rock with his eyes closed. His clothes seem to be mostly burned off and blood drenches his clothing and body. His mask is partially broken from the mouth down,the rest is there but it seems to just about to crack apart.
Naruto: Tobi....
kakashi and naruto walk over to tobi.
Naruto: what happened to him?
Kakashi: it looks like he fought someone. It doesnt seem to be related to the ten tails.
Tobi: kakashi......
Kakashi: *widens his eyes*
Tobi: take off my mask......
NARUTO: be careful kakashi-sensei
the request comes as a shock to kakashi and he flinches a little bit.
KAKASHI: *Hesitates as he reaches for his mask. He softly grabs the top left part of the mask and slowly starts to pull of the mask*
CRACK
the mask shatters under the touch of kakashi's hand.
KAKASHI:
*kakashi looks at tobi bluntly without any sign of recognition*
Tobi's face is wrinkly and old.
Kakashi: "who are you...."
TOBI: "ahh... i guess you wouldnt recognize me like this...its me .....
Obito
Kakashi:" but thats impossible...Obito was crushed by a giant boulder. There's no way you could have made it out"
Obito: "I was saved by a white and black being. Zetsu." "he helped repair my body by filling up my crushed and missing organs with parts of his body. My other eye somehow survived the accident. Although i was left without an eye for a long time."
"Even though i was fixed my skin and body seem to age at a rapid speed. I appear much older than i really am."
"After i was rescued from death i felt that i couldnt return to the village. Especially because of what i realized. The War opened my eyes.
IN THIS NINJA WORLD THERE COULD NEVER BE PEACE.
the cycle of hatred is to strong. How is it possible to make everyone happy. To return the lives that were taken. Its not. So i made up my own plan.
The Moon Eye plan. To place everyone under a tusukyomi. That is the only way there will ever be true peace.
After i had carefully constructed my plan a problem appeared. Talented Uchiha shinobi were being born. Able to unlock the Mangekyo sharingan. They would be able to break out of the Tusukyomi and stop the peace i had created.So i had to kill them off for the sake of peace.
As for the 9tails attack i caused back in konoha. I originally thought that i could use the kyuubi to preform ultimate tusukyomi. But i realized as soon as most of its power was sealed away by Minato-sensei, that it could never be powerful enough to pull off my plan.
NARUTO: (minato-sensei?........)
Obito: Anyways im not asking for forgiveness, but please know that i did this all for the sake of peace.
Kakashi: * quickly leans forward and hugs Obito tightly. After a few seconds he lets go*
Obito: *smilies* (thank you kakashi)
Naruto: .....i cant forgive you.....
Kakashi: (Naruto...)
Obito: i know there is no excuse for what ive done
Naruto: you took my parents away from me....Minato was MY FATHER
Obito: .....im sorry about minato naruto, but i would really like to see my sensei's son one last time.
A third eye opens on Obito's forehead revealing a Rinnegan.
Naruto: (gross.....)
Obito:
*frowns and puts on a serious face and turns to kakashi*
"Kakashi"
*turns to naruto
"Naruto"
The new host of the Ten tails...is SASUKE UCHIHA
Naruto: WHAT! HOW? WHERES SASUKE?
Obito: He defeated me in battle.He then put me under tusukyomi and forced me to release the ten tails. He then sealed it withing him self.He now has unlocked an even stronger eye than the eternal mangekyo sharingan. He has unlocked the SO6P's true eyes. Its potential is unkown. Naruto you and Madara , the REAL madara are the only ones that might have a chance of stopping him now. The only ones that might pose a threat to him. But i doubt Madara will be willing to help you. So you must build the perfect bond with the 9tails and become the Sages True body. Only then might you be able to challenge sasuke.
Naruto: *clenches his hands* (sasuke....)
Kakashi: But how can he obtain the Sages true body?
Obito: He must be taught the absolute perfect sage mode. One only our Sensei was able to master.Once he has done that he must join his sage mode and his KM together.
Kakashi: But the only one who ever mastered or even was able to learn that was our sensei. How is naruto suppose to learn it?
Obito: IM GOING TO REVIVE OUR SENSEI.
NARUTO: You can do that !?!?!?!
Obito: yea...Kabuto showed me the seal to the edo tensei. I can preform it.
*obito clasps his hands together and a coffin rises up from the ground*
As the coffin door falls open Minato' body is inside lifeless.
OBITO: Our sensei's soul was sealed in the Death reaper. There is only one way to bring him back. There must be an exchange of souls. That soul must be just as powerful as the one being asked for. Im already near death. Ill do it.
REVERSE DEAD DEMON CONSUMING SEAL!
(i guess im the only one who can see it)
A white ghostly figure appears in between Obito and Minato's coffin.
The ghostly figure stabs its large knife into the center of Minato's empty shell body. A yellow ghostly gas goes out of the ghost's mouth and into Minato's summoned body.
OBITO: Now to bring you back to life....Outer Path: Samsara of Heavenly Life Technique!!!
The signs of the cracks on Minato's face showing he was an Edo tensei summon started to disappear.
Both naruto and kakashi turn their attention to Minato.
NARUTO: ".....dad.."
Kakashi: "sensei....."
Obito still leaning against the rock slowly starts to close his eye as Minato starts to open his and the demon reaper takes Obitos soul.
A light breeze rustles the tree's leaves as one gently lands on Obito's hand.
Obito: (i entrust my mission, my dream ....of peace to you naruto)
okay so thats chapter 3. kinda boring i know but its one of those that i needed to write in order for the plot to continue. I tried to make it somewhat interesting. Oh and as for TOBI being OBITO i dont actually believe this to be true but i believe the roll i gave tobi was more suited for for Obito than anyone else. Tell me what u think ...did i make the right choice on obito being tobi? and what did you think of the chapter and that little bit on Obito's life?
Oh and i wont be able to write to much on weekdays cuz of work. i started to write 2day as soon as i got home and i probably stayed up to long on this but i enjoyed writing this.
Rate 1-5 ...5 being awsome. Plz leave a comment and thanks for all those who read and who have continued to read i promise next chapters will be more action packed.
1st time readers
If you havnt read my other chapters it would probably be a good idea because you probably wont have a good idea of whats happening. There not to long so shuldnt be a problem.
Also when i write in bracket -> ( ) . Im writing the characters thoughts, so their not actually talking.
Anyways in this chapter i will be doing a character change. HOPE YOU ENJOY:ice:
Chapter 3: Revival
(naruto, kakashi, guy and bee are still where they were fighting Tobi. Naruto is now in KM and Bee in normal human mode
????: RAAAWWWWWRRRRRRR!
NARUTO:
*turns his head towards a mountain a few miles away*
[Tobi]
"He's over there!"
*Naruto points towards the mountain*
KAKASHI:
*kakashi widens his eyes*
"wha- , what is that?"
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On top of the mountain an enormous creature was visible. The ten tails resurrection was completed.
Bee: "That things hell-a huge yo"
Kakashi: " Tobi must have used the S/T jutsu to teleport to the mountain and finish the revival of the ten tails"
NARUTO: *grinds his teeth in frustration and clenches his fists*
"we've got to stop him"
BEE: "hey yo. the ten tails is disappearing you fool!"
GUY: He's right. Tobi said something about becoming the next ten tails jinchurikki. He's probably sealing it inside of him right now.
Naruto: "LETS GO! WE CANT JUST STAND HERE AND LET IT HAPPEN" [yelled naruto in an impatient matter]
Naruto seems to disappear with a yellow flash rushing to the mountain.Leaving everyone behind except Kakashi grabbing him with a Kyuubi cloak arm from the back of his semi ripped shirt.
NARUTO: (ill need kakashi's jutsu to help me stop tobi)
Kakashi: NARUTO! DONT GET RECKLESS HE'S GOT THE TEN TAILS ON HIS SIDE. WE SHOULD WAIT FOR THE OTHERS! [ Kakashi yells against the wind ]
NARUTO: *stops at the base of the mountain.*
WE DONT HAVE TIME FOR THAT
Kakashi: (dammit....he's probably right)
"Get ready to Kakashi-sensei"
Kakashi: "yea...lets keep going"
Naruto: *Runs the rest of the distance up the mountain in a matter of seconds and stop right before a clearing near the top of the mountain and puts kakashi down. Naruto holds his hand up to his eyes to stop the sun shine from blocking his view as he passes through the trees*
The landscape seems to be completely deystroyed with black flames and regular fires littering the battle as well as dogs laying on the the floor. Some already completely engulfed by the black flames and turned to ashes.
Naruto: "was this all done by the ten tails just being summoned?"
KAKASHI: no....there was a fight here before hand. Something big must have taken place here. ( amaterasu is here. Sasuke.....)
????: "groan......"
NARUTO & KAKASHI: * Turn their heads towards the sound*
They see tobi lying against a rock with his eyes closed. His clothes seem to be mostly burned off and blood drenches his clothing and body. His mask is partially broken from the mouth down,the rest is there but it seems to just about to crack apart.
Naruto: Tobi....
kakashi and naruto walk over to tobi.
Naruto: what happened to him?
Kakashi: it looks like he fought someone. It doesnt seem to be related to the ten tails.
Tobi: kakashi......
Kakashi: *widens his eyes*
Tobi: take off my mask......
NARUTO: be careful kakashi-sensei
the request comes as a shock to kakashi and he flinches a little bit.
KAKASHI: *Hesitates as he reaches for his mask. He softly grabs the top left part of the mask and slowly starts to pull of the mask*
CRACK
the mask shatters under the touch of kakashi's hand.
KAKASHI:
*kakashi looks at tobi bluntly without any sign of recognition*
Tobi's face is wrinkly and old.
Kakashi: "who are you...."
TOBI: "ahh... i guess you wouldnt recognize me like this...its me .....
Obito
Kakashi:" but thats impossible...Obito was crushed by a giant boulder. There's no way you could have made it out"
Obito: "I was saved by a white and black being. Zetsu." "he helped repair my body by filling up my crushed and missing organs with parts of his body. My other eye somehow survived the accident. Although i was left without an eye for a long time."
"Even though i was fixed my skin and body seem to age at a rapid speed. I appear much older than i really am."
"After i was rescued from death i felt that i couldnt return to the village. Especially because of what i realized. The War opened my eyes.
IN THIS NINJA WORLD THERE COULD NEVER BE PEACE.
the cycle of hatred is to strong. How is it possible to make everyone happy. To return the lives that were taken. Its not. So i made up my own plan.
The Moon Eye plan. To place everyone under a tusukyomi. That is the only way there will ever be true peace.
After i had carefully constructed my plan a problem appeared. Talented Uchiha shinobi were being born. Able to unlock the Mangekyo sharingan. They would be able to break out of the Tusukyomi and stop the peace i had created.So i had to kill them off for the sake of peace.
As for the 9tails attack i caused back in konoha. I originally thought that i could use the kyuubi to preform ultimate tusukyomi. But i realized as soon as most of its power was sealed away by Minato-sensei, that it could never be powerful enough to pull off my plan.
NARUTO: (minato-sensei?........)
Obito: Anyways im not asking for forgiveness, but please know that i did this all for the sake of peace.
Kakashi: * quickly leans forward and hugs Obito tightly. After a few seconds he lets go*
Obito: *smilies* (thank you kakashi)
Naruto: .....i cant forgive you.....
Kakashi: (Naruto...)
Obito: i know there is no excuse for what ive done
Naruto: you took my parents away from me....Minato was MY FATHER
Obito: .....im sorry about minato naruto, but i would really like to see my sensei's son one last time.
A third eye opens on Obito's forehead revealing a Rinnegan.
Naruto: (gross.....)
Obito:
*frowns and puts on a serious face and turns to kakashi*
"Kakashi"
*turns to naruto
"Naruto"
The new host of the Ten tails...is SASUKE UCHIHA
Naruto: WHAT! HOW? WHERES SASUKE?
Obito: He defeated me in battle.He then put me under tusukyomi and forced me to release the ten tails. He then sealed it withing him self.He now has unlocked an even stronger eye than the eternal mangekyo sharingan. He has unlocked the SO6P's true eyes. Its potential is unkown. Naruto you and Madara , the REAL madara are the only ones that might have a chance of stopping him now. The only ones that might pose a threat to him. But i doubt Madara will be willing to help you. So you must build the perfect bond with the 9tails and become the Sages True body. Only then might you be able to challenge sasuke.
Naruto: *clenches his hands* (sasuke....)
Kakashi: But how can he obtain the Sages true body?
Obito: He must be taught the absolute perfect sage mode. One only our Sensei was able to master.Once he has done that he must join his sage mode and his KM together.
Kakashi: But the only one who ever mastered or even was able to learn that was our sensei. How is naruto suppose to learn it?
Obito: IM GOING TO REVIVE OUR SENSEI.
NARUTO: You can do that !?!?!?!
Obito: yea...Kabuto showed me the seal to the edo tensei. I can preform it.
*obito clasps his hands together and a coffin rises up from the ground*
As the coffin door falls open Minato' body is inside lifeless.
OBITO: Our sensei's soul was sealed in the Death reaper. There is only one way to bring him back. There must be an exchange of souls. That soul must be just as powerful as the one being asked for. Im already near death. Ill do it.
REVERSE DEAD DEMON CONSUMING SEAL!
(i guess im the only one who can see it)
A white ghostly figure appears in between Obito and Minato's coffin.
The ghostly figure stabs its large knife into the center of Minato's empty shell body. A yellow ghostly gas goes out of the ghost's mouth and into Minato's summoned body.
OBITO: Now to bring you back to life....Outer Path: Samsara of Heavenly Life Technique!!!
The signs of the cracks on Minato's face showing he was an Edo tensei summon started to disappear.
Both naruto and kakashi turn their attention to Minato.
NARUTO: ".....dad.."
Kakashi: "sensei....."
Obito still leaning against the rock slowly starts to close his eye as Minato starts to open his and the demon reaper takes Obitos soul.
A light breeze rustles the tree's leaves as one gently lands on Obito's hand.
Obito: (i entrust my mission, my dream ....of peace to you naruto)
okay so thats chapter 3. kinda boring i know but its one of those that i needed to write in order for the plot to continue. I tried to make it somewhat interesting. Oh and as for TOBI being OBITO i dont actually believe this to be true but i believe the roll i gave tobi was more suited for for Obito than anyone else. Tell me what u think ...did i make the right choice on obito being tobi? and what did you think of the chapter and that little bit on Obito's life?
Oh and i wont be able to write to much on weekdays cuz of work. i started to write 2day as soon as i got home and i probably stayed up to long on this but i enjoyed writing this.
Rate 1-5 ...5 being awsome. Plz leave a comment and thanks for all those who read and who have continued to read i promise next chapters will be more action packed.
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