[Mystery] Murder

[Blinkie Uchiha]

Darkness surrounds me.
Who are you to force me?
to test me?
to judge me?
to hurt me?
to control me?
A craze manifests in my cells.
I jolt, I writhe, I thrash.
Screams echo in the emptiness of my vision.
Blind Hatred.


Alone.
Loneliness in the bitter cold.
Fear splinters my pale skin.
I step forward into nothing.
Free falling into black.
Land, suddenly in cold blood.
My hands drip with crimson regret.

What have I done?


First poetry entry.. it's short I know, how did I do?

 

[Clouds]

Damn... this is dark as hell ._.

I guess its good. :x

 

[~Cherry~]

Nice. ^_^

 

[LitAquarius]

Love it. Darkness <3

 

[The Necromancer]

I am that which grips the heart in fright, hearkens night and silences the light.

 

[Ōkami]

I em so phoning the police.

 

[Blinkie Uchiha]

I em so phoning the police.

nooo Okami san wasn't me. I'm innocent!

 

[Ōkami]

nooo Okami san wasn't me. I'm innocent!

Sure you are.

 

[Αizen]

Wow that's it huh?

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

This is your first poem it's a medium length poem . you have done a great job and welcome to writing poetry .

 

[Noni]

You did pretty damn good.