[Romance] Mistakes..

Disquiet

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*Wait for it*........SPEECHLESS!
 

Reraru

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Lovely dattebayo!
 

Kishi Uzumaki

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There's some inspiration for me .
About your poem it's an awesome poem and meaningful one as well .
 

Revyy

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I'm sorry but that makes no sense at all. Please don't use words you don't know the meaning of.. I think you ment acceptance? Also Spell check is a good friend...Just some constructive criticism.
 

Paramour

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I came as an acceptation

I'm sorry but that makes no sense at all. Please don't use words you don't know the meaning of.. I think you ment acceptance? Also Spell check is a good friend...Just some constructive criticism.

xD I got that from a friend too, I know it isn't a word. But it rhymes. :0
And for me, the understanding is far more important. Hence why I didn't changed it. Wasn't a big deal to others. :p

I know my grammar well. :)
 
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