[Romance] Mistakes..

[Paramour]

Shit happened. And we as humans learn indeed from our faults.
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I once met a person I dreamed of.
I almost thought this was real love.
Someone I long waited for.
He was a nice person, kind of.
He was born with a slight of aggression.
Though his words were always full of passion.
He was different. I came as an acceptation.
I took him with me and covered him up.
But I wasn't thinking clear, in fact; I treat him like a pup.
I made mistakes while he stand silence.
He was willing to do everything, yet I kept showing arrogance.

I thought everything I did was out of pure perfection.
He proofed me wrong and came with a rejection.

Until now, upon this very day.
I know my soulmate is still so far .. Away.

Thank you for reading, I appreciate it. ^^​

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[BazzBee]

If you read the pink words in order it makes a beautiful explanation... beautiful *_*

 

[P3ĮÑ]

It's pretty neat

 

[Paramour]

Thanks guys! I appreciate that so much! :T_T:

 

[Asami..]

Beautiful!

 

[Zee Seh]

lol i dont have much sense of poetry but still it was gud... nice work :bouncy: LOVELY...

 

[AllomnisymbolsparttwoT]

Yeah :'I you Ignored me now I am gonna take over the world!!!

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In which I will be king! and I will be respected and saluted and be seen for how great I am!

 

[sandy uzumaki]

Good one kiddo !! Damn why can't I write poems like these >.<

 

[Thoth]

Realy nice poem, it can be seen that it's directly from the heart.

 

[Aquarius]

Nice poem, even though i'm not a poet i can say it is a good one

 

[The Big Boss]

Yeah :'I you Ignored me now I am gonna take over the world!!!

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In which I will be king! and I will be respected and saluted and be seen for how great I am!

what did i just read

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i read the the poem

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[KuroKaze]

Better than last one... Nice work!!

 

[Sasukenumberonelover]

Wow .. this is really nice :bouncy:

 

[Paramour]

Thank you, guys!!!! :bouncy:

 

[SasukeTheViper EMS]

Beauteous, just absolutely beauteous! ^^

 

[Paramour]

Beauteous, just absolutely beauteous! ^^

That means a lot coming from you. :x3:

 

[Yashiro]

Very Nice, I like it

 

[Wanheda]

Great! I love it!

 

[~Shadowhunter Princess~]

Its beautiful XD
I love it!

 

[Anorien16]

Really sweet poem ....