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"jiraya and namikaze"

*so ero sennin and minato are walking down town*

*ero sennin eye balls a window full of pervy magazines*

*minato eye walls them a second after ero sennin*

*jiraya and minoto stare at eat other.... tention is building up...*

ero sennin: "FINE... rock, paper, scissors for the person to buy it?"

minato: "heh ok..."

ero sennin and yondaime: "ICHI, NI.... SAN!"
*ero sennin: paper | minato: rock*

minato: ".... ROCK GOES THROUGH PAPER!!!"

ero sennin: "man... you good sensei"

*ero sennin comes out with the bought magazine*

minato: "thats kiddo *takes the magazine*"

*ero sennin and minato -.- stare at each other again *

minato: "HIRAISHIN NO JUTSU"
ero sennin: "WAIT PAPER COVERS ROCK!!!"

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hahah funny! i like it:D
thanx =D i have another on to add to this thread xD

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"hinata's date"

*i had to write this 3 effin times cuz i accidently pressed the back key on my laptop, and it didnt save >.>*

[writer's note: hinata reminds me of asahina from suzuka] and the first version i can up with was soo much better >.> i just got tired of rewriting the sotry over and over >.>

naruto: "so hinata, where do you want to go?"

hinata: "w-well as long as we're together....*blushes and looks at him*

naruto: "..... OK!:D movies it is"

*as theyre wastching the move, there was a sudden seen where its scary, and hinata grabs naruto's arm*

naruto: ...* puzzled* ... *thinks to what sakura told him: when in doubt just smile, so he smiled back and continued to watch the movie*

*after the movie was over, they head out on the street*

naruto: "JAA~ *stretched*, "so how did you like the movie hinata"

hinata: *remembers back the movie* *she was holding naruto's arm, and he held her hand*.... "i loved the movie :eek:"

naruto: "great" *walks her home*

*next day*

*phone rings in naruto's apt*

naruto: *in a dead voice* "hello?*

hinata: "oh naruto-kun, i hope i didnt wake you up >.<" *though it is noon*

naruto: "is that yo hinata?... ah dont worry, its about time i should be getting up anyhow, so whats up?"

hinata: "w-well i was thinking if you wanted to come to a picnic with me you know, just the two of us"

naruto: *thinks about it: dont have to biy food for today* "sure i'd love to"

hinata: *in an energetic voice* " that great naruto-kun!~, then ill meet you soon ok?"

naruto: "sure thing... *click*"

*naruto frantically tries to get dressed*

*so he meets up with hinata, and she lead the way to the park, on the way, naruto see's ino and sakura hiding behind the bush...*

hinata: "well here we are :), how do you like it naruto"

naruto: *-.- eye balls the bush suspiciously* "WAH~ it looks great"

*hinata blushes*

*after they've eatten hinata tries to break the ice*

hinata: "soo naruto, whats your fav-"

*suddenly there was noise coming from the bush... naruto see's that its not just ino ans sakura anymore...*

*hinata desperatally trying to get his attention, comes up to kiss him, but suddenly the bunch of people fall out of the bush!*

*hinata turns all red, cries, and runs away*

*naruto glares at the people that were in the bush, and runs after hinata*

*naruto finds hinata standing near her home...where he poofs infront of her*

naruto: "hey hinata *lifts her chin* it might not seems like it, but i enjoyed every minute with you, and i have you to thank *kisses her ^^*"

*hinata suddenly faints, and naruto is right there to catch her*

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波風 ミナト;166934 said:
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"jiraya and namikaze"

*so ero sennin and minato are walking down town*

*ero sennin eye balls a window full of pervy magazines*

*minato eye walls them a second after ero sennin*

*jiraya and minoto stare at eat other.... tention is building up...*

ero sennin: "FINE... rock, paper, scissors for the person to buy it?"

minato: "heh ok..."

ero sennin and yondaime: "ICHI, NI.... SAN!"
*ero sennin: paper | minato: rock*

minato: ".... ROCK GOES THROUGH PAPER!!!"

ero sennin: "man... you good sensei"

*ero sennin comes out with the bought magazine*

minato: "thats kiddo *takes the magazine*"

*ero sennin and minato -.- stare at each other again *

minato: "HIRAISHIN NO JUTSU"
ero sennin: "WAIT PAPER COVERS ROCK!!!"

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good story:D:D:D:D:
but strange poll :p
 
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