Memoirs of a Jinchuriki: Chapter Two

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_Memoirs .of a. Jinchuriki

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_ . N O T E .
Well I got a few people who liked Chapter one of my FanFic so ive decided to continue, this Chapter will have fighting and action in it which should get more members and people like my stories.. anyways enjoy.

_ . T H E_C H A P T E R S__!!.

Chapter One:
 

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_ . Chapter Two: .

After leaving Yugito's home, Hazashi and Yugito were now on their way to the outside of the Village to meet up with The Third Raikage for her Test, Yugito wan't sure where they were headed or what the test was for but she made sure to keep her game face on as she followed close behind Hazashi. They were using the Rooftops of the Village to make their way to their destination faster and to avoid any confrontations with the Villagers. Yugito liked it better this way as the Villagers would always whisper or say mean things and look her with Hatred or Fear.

The Village looked peaceful and happy from atop the rooftops, everything was visible. From Yugito's left and right ,Homes, Shops and a number of Restraunts could be seen that seemed to bustle with the sounds of Childrens laughter, the sounds of plates and cup clanging, people in conversation and the odd trader trying to sell his wares. The smell of freshly baked goods seemed to carelessly drift with the breeze and caressing Yugito's nose. Behind Yugito the Raikage's mansion seemed to tower over the Village atop the largest rock causing a shadow to cast over some of the smaller buildings. Clouds to seemed to drift only barely above the Village and seemed to hug the Raikages Mansion. Yugito loved to use the Rooftops as travel as she got to view the Villages beauty and peacefulness, and rarely was she ever allowed to travel around the Village.

Yugito looked toward Hazashi with a puzzled look on her face.


Yugito: Hazashi, where are we going? and why am I going to take this test? After all these years of being shut away in my home and only coming out to train with you.. Why now? Why am I being summoned?

A stressful and puzzled toned seemed to leave Yugito's lips as she tried to look for an answer from her Teacher. Hazashi let out a small sigh beneath his mask asYugito finished her questions, the look on his face seemed to be a painful one but yet he was also fulled with happyness, he knew why she were being summoned but he didn't want to ruin the suprise for her.

Hazashi: You will be briefed when we get there, for now keep your mind on what is to come, prepare for the best or worst scenario and remember to use everything you have learnt.

The words seemed to ring Yugito's ears as she listened to what Hazashi had said, she let out a sigh and decided it would be best just to leave it at that, she had a feeling he knew what was about to happen but she also knew he wouldn't tell her anything.

Hazashi and Yugito were now arriving at their destination, it was a forest the seemed to stretch for miles. The Village was no longer visible and the land seemed to be a combination of rocks and trees. Yugito looked around to see if The Anbu team or The Raikage had a arrived but no one seemed to be there. Hazashi smiled beneath his mask and patted Yugito on the head awkwardly.


Hazashi: Well Yugito I guess this is the last time we will see each other.. Its been good taking care of you and teaching you.. I have watched you grow from a small helpless girl to a now great Shinobi. I have great expectations for you and out of all my missions, this has been the best one.

Hazashi let out a loud sigh and pulled a handsign vanishing into a cloud of smoke. Yugito looked paniced, why had Hazashi brought her all the way out here and then said goodbye, the thought scared her. Was her life now about to come to an end.. what was the point in him training her, taking care of her if it had all lead up to this point. A tear floated down Yugito's cheek as she looked around for Hazashi but he were no longer in the area.

Yugito:...I.. never even got to say goodbye before I.... had to die...

Yugito sniffed and sobed as she prepared herself for the worst. The bushes to her left seemed to rustle with noise causing Yugito to reach for her Kunai, she stood in a battle ready stance as tears still dripped down her face. Three figuires came from out of the bushes, Yugito couldn't see properly as her tears were blurring her vision but she could make out the figuire of a man and two small children around her age.

???: Hi!
??: Oh Hello there
?: Whatever..


To be Continued...
 
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You must be editing chapter two or something. I'll be waiting for the awesomeness.:)
Edit: Frickin great! Looks like a few new characters are going to be introduced soon. I wonder who the antagonist(s) are, hmmm. Nice work, bud.:D
 
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Done and done!!! Just needed to edit a few things lols... sorry about the wait :O

Also I know I said id add fighting in this one but yeah decided it could wait lols
 
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Can't wait for the sencond one! ^^
Aww, no needed to credit me, sweetie. :hug:
Awwwh its fine hun, Credits are to show my appreciation to those who helped me out with my FF!

You must be editing chapter two or something. I'll be waiting for the awesomeness.:)
Edit: Frickin great! Looks like a few new characters are going to be introduced soon. I wonder who the antagonist(s) are, hmmm. Nice work, bud.:D
Mhm 3 New Characters are going to be introduced into my story!! ^_^ Glad you liked liked!! :)

Awesome chapter as always Kawaii san :D aw mai God I want to read more :crazy:
Lols Mr Impatient as always.. Well If I have the time ill try get another Chapter up in the next 1-2 Days ^_^
 
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Hmm, pretty good.
That part with "before I had to die" intrigued me.
Keep them going, sweetie!
Lols THank you!, It Intrigued you hmm?? I wanted Yugito to react in a way that she feared not for her life but for Hazashi leaving her her there to be killed, I wanted her to feel betrayed in a way? Even though it may not be what she thinks lols.. But thank you! NEXT CHAPTER.. 3 Newbies will be introduced! ^_^.. I have found perfect "Piccehs"
 

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Lols THank you!, It Intrigued you hmm?? I wanted Yugito to react in a way that she feared not for her life but for Hazashi leaving her her there to be killed, I wanted her to feel betrayed in a way? Even though it may not be what she thinks lols.. But thank you! NEXT CHAPTER.. 3 Newbies will be introduced! ^_^.. I have found perfect "Piccehs"
It intrigued me in the good way, of course. xd
Hmm, can't wait to see the next chapter!
And why let her die there? I kinda didn't get that part, hehe. But I bet you'll explain it in the next chapter. :)
 

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Great chapter keep em coming this is great. Btw I voted glad its not a Obito thread for shits and giggles lol awesome chapter again. I'll be waiting for the next. :scorps:

Lol sorry cant rep you right now i have to spread it around
 
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