[Romance] Measurably Immeasurable

[Nyanmaru]

You look at me like I'm the hardest part of your life
but I don't know how to react
I stared back at your melancholic eyes
Full of sadness and sorrows
But it was the most beautiful thing ever
If you would let me love you it would be to the moon and back
Seventy times
And even more than that
Even if you cease to look
and stop the beating of my heart
I would still love you to the moon and back
Seven hundred times
and even more than that.

 

[Waindo]

Oh god...stressingly beautiful poem...

 

[Nyanmaru]

Oh god...stressingly beautiful poem...

Thanks for being.... stressed about it. LOLOLOLOL

 

[Waindo]

It's a positive stress. :T_T:

 

[Mis]

I knew this would be good just by reading the title. Oxymorons are beautiful! <3
I wish I could write, too.

 

[Ryu Kishi]

i like itX

 

[fiend]

Oh Nyanmaru such beauty in a small poem<3 .Totally beautiful, especially that modified 70x700 reference.

 

[Nyanmaru]

Oh Nyanmaru such beauty in a small poem<3 .Totally beautiful, especially that modified 70x700 reference.

Thank you thank you thank you thank you <3

i like itX

much love <3

I knew this would be good just by reading the title. Oxymorons are beautiful! <3
I wish I could write, too.

Yes!! Oxymorons <3
Anyone can write <3

It's a positive stress. :T_T:

lolol hmmkay thanks xd

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

You look at me like I'm the hardest part of your life
but I don't know how to react
I stared back at your melancholic eyes
Full of sadness and sorrows
But it was the most beautiful thing ever
If you would let me love you it would be to the moon and back
Seventy times
And even more than that
Even if you cease to look
and stop the beating of my heart
I would still love you to the moon and back
Seven hundred times
and even more than that.

Good poem and this poem came to my mind, when i read it Lol

It's true that you're the hardest part in my life,
non of them were your faults.........
Sadness and sorrows in my melancholic eyes
that used be there in my entire life,
but if you could know the truth,
you will see it's not because there's no love,
so if you can see the irony in it,
these distances and reasons i pushed you away,
that I'm not the man for you,
i may take away that beautiful smile,
so just remember all this times i hurt you
it's all because of love .

 

[Nyanmaru]

Good poem and this poem came to my mind, when i read it Lol

It's true that you're the hardest part in my life,
non of them were your faults.........
Sadness and sorrows in my melancholic eyes
that used be there in my entire life,
but if you could know the truth,
you will see it's not because there's no love,
so if you can see the irony in it,
these distances and reasons i pushed you away,
that I'm not the man for you,
i may take away that beautiful smile,
so just remember all this times i hurt you
it's all because of love .

The similarity is unbearable :dead:
Who wrote it??

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

The similarity is unbearable :dead:
Who wrote it??

It has to be, i wrote it as answer to your poem and poem was well written words just came out when i read it

 

['Kurapika]

Lovely. I loved it.

 

[FunkyFatal]

Very good poem. I'm a famous poet on this site, though i'm not online much. I really like your use of rhymes and the structure. Keep up the good work!
:bouncy:

 

[Professor Finesser]

This poem is worse than cancer 2/10,000 u didn't even rhyme m9