meaning of death

[izinagi54]

death is a new begining to give rise to life
in death all pain in strive cease to happen
it may be long or sudden

the energy of the heart will enrich the new mark.
we must learn not to morne but be joyus.
for the life of pain and misery is history

we are written by our souls deeds
you will need to fit the needs
to either go in peace or return to relief
but be warn if you scorn you will and shall be forever be torn

 

[OG Smoove]

very creative +Rep

 

[Zygomic]

Creative, and true ^_^

 

[Yuka]

It was a beautiful poem.

 

[Holy Cross]

sexy +rep

 

[Supermacaquecool]

Good! I can read a bit of the human feelings bout death. You know? Antique egipcians were obsessed by death, probably cause it sorrounded em often. In the Book of the Dead there's a poem that talks about the brevity of life, and thus tell us to live the best we can...Or like ya put it there, to be "joyus"

 

[izinagi54]

we live fearing the unkown but when you have been through it
you are changed into somthing more brilliant

 

[Tsuki]

This is interesting man... I actually want to start writing some poems but I'm kinda stuck :shrug:
Keep it up and give me more ideas :ice:

 

[Chojuro Sama Kun]

Nice

 

[Rorasa]

nice poem chris :3

 

[0neCrazyAngel]

some great man said, we are dead the moment we are born. the death-god is the biggest thief of all. we dont know when he will sneak in on us. that is right. live life joyously without any regret. always move forward and share love to people you meet in your journey.

 

[Enado17]

poet to poet...that was good. befriend me dude seems like we got some cool intrest in life. i gotta poem book still undergoinn but i got like over 20 poems. try creating a book too

 

[ikikouchiha9668]

My grandpaw died a couple months ago and I really understand the meaning of this peom. I cried cause I was happy for him and that his lung cancer and missing leg would be healed. I cried cause he was returning to God full and heathy