me vs mcAfeezy battle training

[Black Butler]

As you push yourself out of the fissure, I create 2 clones, C1 and C2, right and left. C1 sees you shoot the dragon fire balls into the air and at us, he warns me. So I create a chidori in my hand, while C1 throws me out of the way. While C2 runs around your fireball and throw 3 explosive kunai at you, while you're creating the Wind Gale. As the weather has changed really quickly because of the amount of fire dragons you sent into the sky, I quickly point my hand into the sky, and take control of the lightning, causing kirin to come down and hit you.

(Raiton: Raiton Kage Bunshin) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shadow Clone
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: N/A
Description: User creates a Shadow Clone of himself infused with his lighting chakra. When the clone gets hit he will return to its previous state of pure lighting chakra. The clone has a physical substance and therefor is able to use ninjutsu and taijutsu techniques as well as he has all the normal moves the user has.

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.

(Raiton: Kirin) Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: After using Dragon Fireball Jutsu to create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Can only be avoided with time/space techniques. Can only be used once per battle.

Try not to set yourself up next time, if your going to use Kirin, try to use it in the same turn.

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

On phone right now so I can't copy and patse as you bring kirin down I to use kirin and clash it against yours ( the strom wasn't meant for kirin I just wanted it for a differnt jutsu) I then use intense pain and mix it with windgale

 

[Black Butler]

Can't clash with my Kirin because first, you didn't create a chidori in your hand and second, Kirin is auto, meaning there is no counter, if I get it off.

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

Ok how did I do?

 

[Black Butler]

You did good, although I found a weakness, you don't use combinations right. You can use a jutsu to attack from the floor, one from the sky, and one directly. Also another weakness is that you leave your opponent to easy of a window to counter. Try to make your move as collective as possible, meaning try to make your opponent use up their 3 jutsus just to defend, while you stay on the attack.

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

So how would I do that can you give me an example please

 

[Black Butler]

Try Earth Shaking Technique, to throw your opponent off balance, while you use Chidori Needles, going directly at them, then you use Lightning Fang, to attack from above. The good thing about this is that, if they dodge your Chidori Needles, they will walk right into your Lightning Fang.

Don't forget to Rep me!

 

[-Haku Yuki-]

Ok reped thanks

 

[Black Butler]

NP