[CJ] Me and SP

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(Genjutsu: Shinpi-tekina meisho) - Illusionary Art: Mysterious Attraction
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn active)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will make 3 handseals and induce chakra in the brain of the opponent to trigger a genjutsu. As the the opponent is situated into the ground, he will slowly feel a certain attraction from matter around him, like trees or buildings. At first he will feel as if he is being slightly attracted towards a certain body with no real harm. But as the time continues, within the same turn, the pull becomes greater and greater, Until he or she perceives in the illusion that the gravitational pull of the object (e.g. a tree) is overcoming that of the earth, actually forcing them in that direction, making him believe he is being pulled. While this is active, he will not even be able to move a limb away from the objects sending the pull as the gravitational attraction will be that large. Objects with a larger mass, will of course have a larger pull that others, with a smaller mass. If the user is between 2 large masses that have about the same size, he will be seemingly stuck in the middle with both bodies pulling in the same amount of force.

Note: No Genjutsu in the same turn.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.

Analyze this one for me, and it's yours.
 

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(Genjutsu: Shinpi-tekina meisho) - Illusionary Art: Mysterious Attraction
Type: Supplementary
Rank: A-Rank
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra: 30 (-10 per turn active)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will make 3 handseals and induce chakra in the brain of the opponent to trigger a genjutsu. As the the opponent is situated into the ground, he will slowly feel a certain attraction from matter around him, like trees or buildings. At first he will feel as if he is being slightly attracted towards a certain body with no real harm. But as the time continues, within the same turn, the pull becomes greater and greater, Until he or she perceives in the illusion that the gravitational pull of the object (e.g. a tree) is overcoming that of the earth, actually forcing them in that direction, making him believe he is being pulled. While this is active, he will not even be able to move a limb away from the objects sending the pull as the gravitational attraction will be that large. Objects with a larger mass, will of course have a larger pull that others, with a smaller mass. If the user is between 2 large masses that have about the same size, he will be seemingly stuck in the middle with both bodies pulling in the same amount of force.

Note: No Genjutsu in the same turn.
Note: Can only be used 3 times per battle.

Analyze this one for me, and it's yours.
It goes without saying that this technique is dependent on the surrounding environment to have any sort of effect. However, that's where it's strength lies. Because it's a technique that the user has simply an extent of bearing on, and letting other factors do the work of the Genjutsu, makes it a lot harder to detect. Using techniques or weapons that may induce things such as dizziness or drowsiness may make it harder for the opponent to discern it as a Genjutsu. At least, until the effects become increasingly drastic. You could even use techniques which possess tangibility, like an Earth technique, to quicken the effects and heighten their strength at a faster rate. As for in-battle uses, its effects would be maximised in a crucial moment when it is essential for the opponent to counter an attack urgently. So, in short, it's a technique that does it's own work, but you are able to use the environment and your weapons in order to cause greater confusion and increase it's effectiveness.
 

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(Futon: Kaze Kingu no Yūkai Fīrudo) | Wind Release: Bounded Field of the Wind King
Type: Offensive/Defensive/Supplementary
Rank: S Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40 (-10 per turn active)
Damage: 80
Description: This technique showcases the usage of the wind release, in accordance to the users body and or objects which he might be carrying or is in constant contact with, like weapons. Once the contact with the specific object is maintained, or without the object needed, the user will have the wind from all around, stick closely to a desired location in the body or object, forming 2, very distinctive layers from one another. The first layer which comes directly above the said object, has no particular effects, and strength. It plainly refracts the light allowing the said object to be invisible apart from some currents of wind, which move around, indicating the existence of that object. The second, is the most versatile one, giving the said object a lot of strength and versatility equal to an S-Rank above their original versatility. In cutting edge weapons, this layer even further enhances their sharpness as well. The second layer, which can be seen once the first one is used, is a very stable one. The second layer has a very characteristic effect, which is the ability of, at will, releasing blasts of air current, which might be either a rotating tornado which has a very strong pushing and very spread out cutting capabilities, to a very powerful, all destroying blast of wind, similar to Wind Release: Pressure Damage. A third and last form of releasing it, is a very thin, precise and powerful slash of wind, which has insanely large cutting capabilities, which can be directed, at the location where the said object or weapon is aimed towards. The strength of the said blast or tornado can be split a total of 2 times, creating 2 blasts at exact power of A-rank. The release of the blast will count towards the jutsu limit, and the releases can be independent in time from one another, as long as the effect of the technique is visible. Due to the effect of the last layer being largely visible, he cannot keep this layer active for longer than 4 turns, while the last one which carries no rank or visible boost, except than of rendering the weapon invisible, he can keep active for further, but needs to give a total of 5 chakra points each turn.

Note: Can only be used 3 times.
Note: Remains active for 4 turns (Last layer can be open for far longer, but it carries no attributes, and it consumes 5 chakra point every turn).
Note: Initial release of layers counts as a move, thereby as a jutsu usage limit.
Note: Weapon or object must be constantly in contact
Note: Can only be taught by Six Paths.

Its a pretty neat custom tbh, allowing you to cloak your weapon(s) and make it more difficult for your opponent to fight back against, particularly in cqc if you're wielding a sword or some other similar weapon, which is the primary usage I have in mind for this. The utility doesn't stop there though, since you can add a second layer that lets you fight at range, albeit to a somewhat limited extent, as with many customs of this type. Solid technique overall.
 
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