Me and my friend. PLEASE READ. It will help us.

[Suigetsu13]

So idk if I did this right but if I did I'd like some feedback.

1.My voice is not a perfection due to a cold.
2.We had crappy camera audio.
3.Our own original song.

Please tell me what you think.

 

[Suigetsu13]

Ok I obviously didn't do it right idk how to post videos so here is the link.

You must be registered for see links

 

[Darthlawsuit]

Put the "lRqujwq2n0Q" into the youtube tag.

 

[Suigetsu13]

Alright thank you. But what did you think?

 

[UchihaBrat]

I can't seem to watch it since this is a link for mobiles. Try to, if you're using a browser on your cellphone, when on youtube, click the 'computer' at the bottom of the page, then go to the video(if you're not already there) and copy/paste that link.

 

[soulless uchiha]

i can not see it

 

[Suigetsu13]

This should do it.

 

[UchihaBrat]

This should do it.

... Says it's private!xdxd
For us to see it, you probably have to change some settings, I'll wait, so no hurry!xd

 

[Suigetsu13]

Ok it should be public now.

 

[Rice]

I'm not trying to be mean but I'm not a fan of it. But then again I really don't like that style/genre of music.

 

[UchihaBrat]

It's quite ok, but as Rice^ says, in my family I'm not the one who listens to this genre of music. Don't get dispirited though, the lyrics are good, though I'm sure my mother would like it better than me(a compliment)!

 

[Yugure]

I don't know, it's off tune sometimes... Did you write the lyrics yourself?

 

[FlareBlitz]

its pretty good lyrics are good.

 

[Suigetsu13]

Yes all composed by me and we were trying it out so sorry it was off tune I couldn't find the right tune. Were gonna make another version.

 

[UchihaBrat]

I don't think you need to apologize!xd Just keep trying!

 

[Suigetsu13]

Alright thanks everyone.