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Kakuzu:

Update: A-rank Fire, C-rank Earth, D-rank Water, D-rank Wind, 3 hearts & White Lion Summoning Contract.​

Reis R & R
No stealing
Killing (Not counted towards bio)
Range: Long
CJ:Yes
CE: No
CS: Yes
Sub: No

Terrain: Kakuzu is walking down a lonely road, as the wind is blowing through the trees in the little beautiful and peaceful forest and the birds is singing in the sky, while the dust is running along the ground and his cloak is waving in the wind. He could hear a small waterfall in the distance as he stopped walking and looked at the road ahead. His eyes are fixed on the road, as he notices a young shinobi standing before him, Kakuzu stares at him with his lightgreen eyes while he takes off his old Akatsuki cloak, revealing his strange looking body.​

Kakuzu: "Hello young shinobi... may I ask your name..."

(You may go first)
 
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talking doesn't count to time frame +post cj thread link
u go first
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Shino: I am here to take care of what my comerades failed to do
 

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Kakuzu: "I guess I have to kill you...."

*Kakuzu quickly stomps the ground, as he releases a massive amount of fire into the ground in front of him while your looking at him. When the fire is traveling underneath the ground it turns into Lava and when it is all gathered, Kakuzu throws a single smokebomb, and simultaniously makes the needed hand seal for the lava to erupt right beneath you, exploding right up towards you in a massive lava explosion*

(Katon: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Fire Release: Exploding Flame Crater
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user first stomps on the ground, making an underground tunnel form between themselves and the opponent. They then breathe out fire into the tunnel, causing the fire to turn into lava as it travels. With a single hand seal, the lava will erupt from the ground underneath the opponent, engulfing them in lava.

*While your focused on the lava, Kakuzu splits into 3 seperate bodies (3 hearts) as two of them stay beside eachother and the last one goes underground unnoticed by the smoke*

(Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. While underground one can sense what is happening on the surface and use the information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. Once can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy cant reach.

*This will make you think that there is only me and one other heart, as the last heart is unnoticed, Kakuzu and his other heart simply stand there looking at the lava attacking you*
 
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As kakuza stomps on the ground and due to shino's vast knowledge of jutsu's he knows what is going to happen after the stomp so shino simply jumps to the air and uses his wind chakra to increase his height from the ground as shino is rising in the air and you are dropping your smoke bomb shino throws two explosive tag kunia'a at you making you chnage your move and not seperate into hearts shino while is still in the air uses another wind tech to shorten the distance between eachother (now mid range and shino on the groud)
Shino: Is that it old man
Shino then focuses he lightning chakra to his hands and sends it to the ground and as the lightning is about to approach u shino seperates it into three lines one comes at you from the front and the other two to your left and right
(Fūton: Kaze Ogawa no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth. The user can also use this technique by blowing it at the ground and causing a dust cloud to rise, concealing the users location and movement.
used twice
(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.
 

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Kakuzu: "You think that's going to work..."

*As Kakuzu says this he simply jumps into the air, whiel exhaling a giant and very powerful fireball with such immense force coming straight at you. Meanwhile Kakuzu puts a smokebomb on his foot concealing him once again where he splits into 3 bodies in mid air, landing beside eachother looking at you from mid range*

(Katon: Zukokku) - Fire Style: Intense Pain
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A huge burst of fire that turns into a huge fireball and can cover a large area, burning all in its path.
 
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Kakuzu: "You think that's going to work..."

*As Kakuzu says this he simply jumps into the air, whiel exhaling a giant and very powerful fireball with such immense force coming straight at you. Meanwhile Kakuzu puts a smokebomb on his foot concealing him once again where he splits into 3 bodies in mid air, landing beside eachother looking at you from mid range*

(Katon: Zukokku) - Fire Style: Intense Pain
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A huge burst of fire that turns into a huge fireball and can cover a large area, burning all in its path.
You didn't evade my explosive kunia so you should be dead but this fight needs more fun so i will let it slide
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As kakuza jumps and before he throws the smoke bomb Shino quickly throws an explosive tag at you delaying your move then performs the required hand seals after cutting his thumb and summons Imado beneath him making Shino rise to the size of Gambuta while standing on Imado's back making me long range from you Shino then sends 3 wave of bug at you while you are dodging those three waves he sends the other two waves to finish you off Shino then just incase you survive surrounds himself with a Cocoon while still on Imado

#1 Summoning Technique: Imado (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Imado )
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra 40
Damage: 80
Description:* The user after cutting his thumb and performing the required hand seals summons Imado the lightning element mouse. Imado stands at the height of Manda and has a body length that of Gambuta. Imado is light blue in color.

~Can only use up to S rank lightning techniques that the user knows although without hand seals.
~Must have signed mouse contract and be trained by mangekyo byakugan to summon it.
~Lasts Four turns.
~Can only be summoned once.

(Kikaichu Hisame no Jutsu) -Destruction Bug Hail Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will release thousands of destruction bugs from his body into the air. On their Command, the insects attack the opponent in 5 waves. The insects turn coalesce into a large cloud and rain down on the opponent causing tremendous damage.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame clan.

Hijutsu: Mushi Miyu) - Secret Technique: Insect Cocoon
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
description: After performing the required hand seals the user to increase the speed of insects' development. As the user's body is already a hive of sorts for the insects, the user will encase himself in an actual cocoon to further aid the insects. This is an extremely useful move for Aburame clan members, since their attacks mainly focus on the usage of bugs. However, using this in the midst of a battle can be potentially dangerous as it leaves the user static and vulnerable.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame clan and wait 1 turn for development of Bugs.
 

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Okay, so I have been asked to check the fight, so far I have a comment on each one of your moves xD

CJ:

Kakuzu: "I guess I have to kill you...."

*Kakuzu quickly stomps the ground, as he releases a massive amount of fire into the ground in front of him while your looking at him. When the fire is traveling underneath the ground it turns into Lava and when it is all gathered, Kakuzu throws a single smokebomb, and simultaniously makes the needed hand seal for the lava to erupt right beneath you, exploding right up towards you in a massive lava explosion*

(Katon: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Fire Release: Exploding Flame Crater
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user first stomps on the ground, making an underground tunnel form between themselves and the opponent. They then breathe out fire into the tunnel, causing the fire to turn into lava as it travels. With a single hand seal, the lava will erupt from the ground underneath the opponent, engulfing them in lava.

*While your focused on the lava, Kakuzu splits into 3 seperate bodies (3 hearts) as two of them stay beside eachother and the last one goes underground unnoticed by the smoke*

(Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. While underground one can sense what is happening on the surface and use the information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. Once can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy cant reach.

*This will make you think that there is only me and one other heart, as the last heart is unnoticed, Kakuzu and his other heart simply stand there looking at the lava attacking you*
Okay, so you are creating a tunnel, breathe the fire into the tunnel and thus create a lava from it to attack Mangekyo with. Then you throw a smokebomb, to obviously cover up what you are doing. You split in three and some of you goes underground. Now, I don't know how fast you did all that, but if your third part goes underground when you just used the fire jutsu there is a chance he will get burned. You did not specify where the third part went, just that he would go underground.

Advice one: Location, location, location ;)

As kakuza stomps on the ground and due to shino's vast knowledge of jutsu's he knows what is going to happen after the stomp so shino simply jumps to the air and uses his wind chakra to increase his height from the ground as shino is rising in the air and you are dropping your smoke bomb shino throws two explosive tag kunia'a at you making you chnage your move and not seperate into hearts shino while is still in the air uses another wind tech to shorten the distance between eachother (now mid range and shino on the groud)
Shino: Is that it old man
Shino then focuses he lightning chakra to his hands and sends it to the ground and as the lightning is about to approach u shino seperates it into three lines one comes at you from the front and the other two to your left and right
(Fūton: Kaze Ogawa no Jutsu) - Wind Release: Wind Stream Technique
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 10
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique allows the user to change direction in mid-air at high speeds by simply blowing wind out their mouth. The user can also use this technique by blowing it at the ground and causing a dust cloud to rise, concealing the users location and movement.
used twice
(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Utage) - Lightning Release: Lightning Burial ~ Banquet of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Mid/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user brings their hands together and an electrical energy will begin to crackle around them. They will then slam their hands to the ground to send an electric current racing through the earth. When the current approaches its target, it can split into multiple tendrils to attack separate targets individually.
Basicly, what you just did was jumping into the air and increase the hight of your jump. But.. You only did that until he threw the smokebomb. Whilst he said that he threw the smokebomb and at the same time performed the handseal to make the lava erupt from the ground. This would mean that you should be hit by the lava for you did not move to the left of the right nor specified the hight of your jump. May I refer to more info about Exploding Flame Crater:
Furthermore, at this moment you still are at long range, if your kunai would reach the opponent it would definitely give him enough time to perform his move.
Do remember that you cannot see Jiraiya due to the smoke. Saying that "one comes at you from the front and the other two to your left and right" is therefore not the best option. I would rather say that one goes towards the location I last saw my opponent, though this is not necessary.

Advice two: If you don't know how a jutsu looks or are doubting it, look it up ^_^

Advice three: Look at how fast things are and compare them to how fast the opponent's moves are. If you throw a kunai from long range it would definitely take longer than from mid.

Advice four: If you cannot see the opponent he can in many cases not see you either (except for doujutsu users or sensors). You can use this to your advantage, though do know that the opponent tries this as well. If you cannot use the disadvantage, try to get it away. Use a wind jutsu to blow the smoke away, go underground so you can sense the opponent or use something like the rain jutsus to locate the opponent.

Kakuzu: "You think that's going to work..."

*As Kakuzu says this he simply jumps into the air, whiel exhaling a giant and very powerful fireball with such immense force coming straight at you. Meanwhile Kakuzu puts a smokebomb on his foot concealing him once again where he splits into 3 bodies in mid air, landing beside eachother looking at you from mid range*

(Katon: Zukokku) - Fire Style: Intense Pain
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: A huge burst of fire that turns into a huge fireball and can cover a large area, burning all in its path.
One cannot, in most cases, avoid jutsus by jumping or diving. You have to defend from the jutsu using another jutsu. Though it might have been possible to jump and therefore avoid the lightning, you could not see it due to your own smoke, if you still threw the smokebomb, however you did not say you didn't so we could assume you did. Idem Ditto for the kunais, even though they are slow, you still have to defend from them, but you couldn't see them either. Since you didn't defend from either of them, you probably are killed.

Advice five: Don't forget about previous moves. Take every possibility in consideration and if you do not do something, point it out as well.

You didn't evade my explosive kunia so you should be dead but this fight needs more fun so i will let it slide
__________________________

As kakuza jumps and before he throws the smoke bomb Shino quickly throws an explosive tag at you delaying your move then performs the required hand seals after cutting his thumb and summons Imado beneath him making Shino rise to the size of Gambuta while standing on Imado's back making me long range from you Shino then sends 3 wave of bug at you while you are dodging those three waves he sends the other two waves to finish you off Shino then just incase you survive surrounds himself with a Cocoon while still on Imado

#1 Summoning Technique: Imado (Kuchiyose no jutsu: Imado )
Type: Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short
Chakra 40
Damage: 80
Description:* The user after cutting his thumb and performing the required hand seals summons Imado the lightning element mouse. Imado stands at the height of Manda and has a body length that of Gambuta. Imado is light blue in color.

~Can only use up to S rank lightning techniques that the user knows although without hand seals.
~Must have signed mouse contract and be trained by mangekyo byakugan to summon it.
~Lasts Four turns.
~Can only be summoned once.

(Kikaichu Hisame no Jutsu) -Destruction Bug Hail Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will release thousands of destruction bugs from his body into the air. On their Command, the insects attack the opponent in 5 waves. The insects turn coalesce into a large cloud and rain down on the opponent causing tremendous damage.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame clan.

Hijutsu: Mushi Miyu) - Secret Technique: Insect Cocoon
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: N/A
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
description: After performing the required hand seals the user to increase the speed of insects' development. As the user's body is already a hive of sorts for the insects, the user will encase himself in an actual cocoon to further aid the insects. This is an extremely useful move for Aburame clan members, since their attacks mainly focus on the usage of bugs. However, using this in the midst of a battle can be potentially dangerous as it leaves the user static and vulnerable.
Note: Must be a member of the Aburame clan and wait 1 turn for development of Bugs.
You didn't defend from the fireball lol

I hope I helped you both with this. ^_^
 
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Alright Leaf sensei :D I get it all :D more info on each move i guess :D

I just though that if i jumped into the air... i would use the fire to block the kunai.... O_O just forgot to mention... i though it would be more simple... >_>
 

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Alright Leaf sensei :D I get it all :D more info on each move i guess :D

I just though that if i jumped into the air... i would use the fire to block the kunai.... O_O just forgot to mention... i though it would be more simple... >_>
Yeah, that could have been the case, and it might seem obvious to you, but it can be confusing for other people, therefore it always good to try to explain as much details about your move as possible ^_^
 

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same rules like before but mid range from eachother and terrain a forest with no water source

Shino seeing his opponent throws a three wind enhanced kunia's at you then as you are busy with the kunias he throws a smokebomb conceiling his presence he then whilehidden in the smokes creates three bug clones one to my left one to my right and one to my front

(Mushi Bunshin) - Bug Clone
Rank: C
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:15
Damage Points:70
Description:Creates a clone of the user out of bugs.
NOTE:Must be a bug user to use this jutsu.
 

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*As you throw the kunai, I counter your kunai with my own three kunai which are enhanced with fire chakra. Simultaniously as you create the smoke, I go down on one knee as I send chakra into the ground, as all the surrounding grass turns to small needles (you can't see the difference in the normal grass and the needle grass) and as this happens I weave a single handseal as all the grass needles come from all sides, turning you and your clones into a pillow of needles*

(Senbon Kusa)-Grass Senbon
Type:Atack
Rank: D
Range:Short-Mid
Chakra:10
Damage:20
Description:The user sends his chakra into the grass near him and hardens it.After that the user would be able to fire the hardened grass from the ground like senbons at the oponent.
~Note:Can be only used on terains with short grass.
Note: The needles can't kill, but is extremely difficult to avoid in your situation since you can't see them and your in the smoke.

*While this happens my hearts split into 3 seperate bodies one standing on each side of me, this would confuse you making you think they are just clones*
 
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