Maya Ikyouto

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Name: Maya Ikyouto
Nickname: Try-hard
Gender:Female
Age: 14
Clan:/

Looks: Maya is an average sized, tan skinned girl with blue eyes. She is very muscular in her shoulders and arms because she constantly uses them to move, and wears a green blouse with a red overcloak. She has a highly deformed left leg, which is result to her harsh birth conditions. She wears a cast over her leg which also has her ninja headband sown into it after she graduates from the academy, and a red boot on her other leg. She has long, flowing gray-blue hair that goes down to the seat behind the wheelchair, which is worn from continued use. She also has a very developed right leg, which is a fact she keeps hidden under her boot. The left leg, if uncovered, would be several inches shorter than the right leg, with an unnaturally bent knee and bruising all over.

Personality: She is very energetic and outgoing, because of her lack of exercise and her need to talk to others. She is not upset by the fact that she can barely move by herself, but instead excited by the idea that she might become the first ninja who can’t use taijutsu (supposedly). She works much harder than average and excels in most mental areas (except keeping calm). She is very protective of her good leg, and if anyone mentions the possibility that it might get so much as a mud smear on it, she will fly into a rage.

Village Info

Village of Birth: Kumogakure
Village of Alliance:/

Rank//Chakra Info

Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty: Moving with impairments
Elements: Earth, needs training
Your ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info

History: She was born to a non-ninja family, and was born in an unfortunate way. During her birth, their village was the battleground between two disagreeing clans. Her father died and her mother was injured, leading to her being born with a permanently deformed leg. She grew up with her mother’s teachings, that the world of shinobi was an evil place and shouldn’t be tempted to its evil doings. However, she secretly went to the ninja academy behind her mother’s back (claiming she had to exercise on her good leg). This is partially true, as she did in fact spend so much time on one leg that she has grown to be almost as fast on one as others are on two. However, she prefers to keep this a secret as to keep the attention of friends and possibly surprise someone someday. Then, one day, she came home from the academy to find her mother bleeding out from a kunai in her stomach. Her mother, in a state of shock, explained that she knew about the academy and wanted her to go on to make her proud, and show the world that anything was possible. After her mother died, she had even more reason to go full out in her training, becoming better than the other trainees in everything except taijutsu and focusing. She to this day doesn’t know who killed her mother, but intends to find out…

Other

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Theme Song and Background Music: Sun and Steel

[video=youtube;m2k7qQzg-_0]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m2k7qQzg-_0[/video]

Battles

Won:0
Lost:0
 
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Can we make minor edits after posting it for review? The rules make It seem like we can't really change it up after posting... Anyway, this is my first try, and I won't die of waiting for month because of ugliness.(hopefully). Also, do we have to put a KG/HA or can we just be normal. (especially because this is a pretty unusual circumstance)
 
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Can we make minor edits after posting it for review? The rules make It seem like we can't really change it up after posting... Anyway, this is my first try, and I won't die of waiting for month because of ugliness.(hopefully). Also, do we have to put a KG/HA or can we just be normal. (especially because this is a pretty unusual circumstance)
You can edit it until it gets approved or declined. Once approved, it is forbidden to edit your bio. And when it gets declined, there's no option to edit it, so yeah.

And you can just be normal. By no means do you have to have a special ability of any kind and as a matter of fact, every special ability has requirements of some kind so you don't have to worry about that.

What you need though: Pictures. If you have not even one picture, it's safe to say the bio will get declined even though I like the creativity and obscureness of your character, you must find something to resemble her even if it's not completely accurate. Secondly, you should put a YouTube video up for your theme song. I don't know what that song is you put there so my mind is blank when it comes to that. So, so is your theme song. So find a video for that song or another so people can actually hear and feel what your character is like. You should really lengthen your history a bit more. It seems just a little rushed and although it can pass, you want to be safe all of the time and just to give you a heads up, I doubt the wheelchair thing is going to fly. If it does, I'll be exceedingly surprised. What ninja have you seen bound to a wheel chair and still a shinobi? Can she even walk? With crutches? Even if she could, that's pushing it as well and in the NW, you're asking to get stomped in the dirt if you're going to be RPing seriously being that your reaction time and how you react is no way up to par with any shinobi on the base. Even knew ones so you're metaphorically and literally out on a limb by creating something so different although I respect it. But my respect doesn't make the rules of the RP. And the fact that she's 11? Eh. Yeah. Pushing it. You've got lots to work on, honestly and I can almost safely say this will get declined in it's current form.
 
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I think this bio is amazing.
I believe that.

Edit: OT: A lot better. But the site you took the image from doesn't allow hot-linking so download it and upload it to an image hosing website yourself or find another picture.

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Alright. Good. You fixed it. Nothing left to do now but sit and wait unless you want to pretty it up in some colors but that isn't at all required.
 
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