Nice!I dont know if it is the white bg but i think that it is missing some lighting!Maybe make the lighting sources a bit brighter will fix the problem(as for me)!Now the text is good as of the font y used but something is really disturbing when y look it as a wholwe with the rest of the sig!It makes the rest look Lq and i dont know why..maybe modify it a bit cause it really makes the rest look Lq(although it isnt)!
I think it could have been little darker. I like the concept would look pretty badass if he was poping out out of the dark > light. Candle effect, also would make text darker and moer asian
@Grim yeah I see what you mean, it does look better on a 262626 coloured background and with the text. The more I look at it the more I dislike it lol, this is one I should have left without text but cheers