Manipulation Of Stocks~

[Fex]

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I made this a 3 months ago but what I did was render out the cubes and got one of tincek artworks darken it a lot then put it on Linear Dodge to get the chain effect.(and changed the Hue)
But did I do good job? CnC plus feedback is greatly appreciated.​

 

[Horus]

Too lazy for a detailed CnC z.z
But the lighting needs to be worked on(its all over the place) and the text really needs work. The border on the green font needs to be highlighted better as white doesn't bring it out when the color on the font is light.

 

[suki]

There is a big contrast between dark and light areas making it unattractive to the eyes. The text is attracting more attention than the character because of this... The depth is pretty neat also. Working on that lighting and try to keep the flow by arranging everything linearly and not just everywhere would give it that improvement as a whole.

Nice/unique concept just needs to be worked on and tweaked a little. Would be good to see an improved version of this. Keep it up~