[Predictions] manga 628 surprise allies part 1

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I've posted this before on my old account but when I went to edit it I couldn't login so I had to create this account

1st - brother I need you to do scan of the area and sense anyone present

2nd - ok fine this won't take long

1st - Sasuke and co come here we are about to leave

(Sasuke and taka and oro join up with the Hokages )

2nd - ok I sense madara chakra in the north west area near the sand village along with the 9 nails chakra and a kid controling the nine tails and there's also a load of ninjas there too then further south there are 4 people and 4 slugs and wait what there's tsunade with her life force leaving her body

1st - what tsunade we must hurry now

3rd 4tg - we agree

2nd - we are going to have to walk there I cant teleport there there's no seal in place

Minato -maybe I can help I can get us to the battle field then from there we can go here just take kunai everyone
(They all take one )

Minato - hold on tight

- scene changes to the battle field -

Naruto - Kurama are you done regaining chakra because my sm is going to finish

Kurama - nearly wait that chakra fourth hokage seems you got a gift for me

Naruto - dad? Where is he ?

Kurama - he seems to be going near the kages

Naruto - huh w....

Madera - you shouldnt have been distracted (throws a fire ball at him naruto quickly dodges it)

Kurama - you need to stay focus

Naruto - right

-scene changes to tsunade and other 4 kages gathered around her)

Kazakage - she gave her life for us

Raikage - she died death every ninja wants the type you get from fighting an enemy

Muizkage - may her soul rest in p...

1st - tsunade tsunade ( runs up to them and push everyone out the way )

Raikage - hey do you even kn... Wait your the 1st hokage

Tsuikage - wait how are all the Hokages here ?

Sasuke - because they have all been brought back to fight the war

Raikage - Sasuke Uchiha ! Prepare to die ! ( runs to Sasuke to attack)

Minato - I don't think so ( flashes over to Sasuke and back to the others again )

Raikage - wait what huh?

Minato - your always anxious to fight aren't you A

Raikage - seems you got brought back to and beside Sasuke Uchiha is a rouge ninja from the hidden leaf who join up with Madera it seems you too join your son into bringing him back

Sasuke - 1 I was never with madara 2. I've changed

Kazakage - naruto will be happy to hear about that

1st - everyone be quiet I'm trying to bring tsunade back

(Tsunade opens her eyes slowly)

Tsunade - grandpa is that you? Am I dead ( sits up)

1st - it is me tsunade and your not dead we are just Edo tensi s

Tsunade - grandpa (cough ) Madara he has your cells (cough ) he can perform wood style nin jutsu

Next time how will Harshirama act to the news and will the kages reach the battle field

If you want me to do a 629 tell me in the comments

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That is a good story but there are 2 problems:
1) The Grammar
2) "2nd - ok I sense madara chakra in the north west area near the sand village along with the 9 nails chakra and a kid controling the nine tails and there's also a load of ninjas there too then further south there are 4 people and 4 slugs and wait what there's tsunade with her life force leaving her body"
&
"Kurama - nearly wait that chakra fourth hokage seems you got a gift for me"
makes no sense.
 
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