[Predictions] Managa 599-600 Prediction (MrCbrl_95)

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first time i do this type of prediction. ^-^ let me know what you guys think

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EDIT: i have slightly editted chapters 599 and 600. plus i added chapter 601, enjoy ^-^

599: An unstopable force!

(Tobi's face is revealed. Tobi stands firmly and some blood is going down his face)
Tobi: *Darn you kakashi! i underestimated you, but no more.*
(clone)Naruto: "who are you!?"
Tobi: "..."
(clone)Naruto: "answer me!!!"
Tobi: "i am no one"
(clone)Naruto: "i guess ill have to beat the truth out of you!"
(Tobi laughs mysteriously)
Tobi: "you should've thought things through before rushing into situations naruto! now you will die!!"
(Tobi attacks naruto and they go on a blocking spree of taijutsu)
(clone)Naruto: "i dont know who you are but we will stop you no matter what the cost!"
Tobi: "you are a fool to believe you can stop me!"
(Naruto attempts to hit Tobi with a chakra arm)
Tobi: Shinra Tensei!
((clone)naruto is sent flying back, and poofs away)
Naruto: Rasengan!!
(tobi turns around to see a whole lot of naruto clones behind him and before the rasengans land on him he shifts to the regular world)
Tobi: *damn it! i will show these roaches their place!!*
Kakashi: (looking at Tobi) *so it wasnt Obito after all*
(kakashi attempts to stand back up, Guy helps him up)
Guy: "Kakashi you have done well, no less to expect from my rival. now its my turn, let me take the oppurtunity to show this guy the true power of youth!!!"
Kakashi: *i hate admitting it but if i continue to fight ill die. itll be best if i rest and gain some strength back meanwhile Guy, and naruto handle things*
Guy: "prepare yourself, you are now dealing with the leaf's handsome green devil, mighty guy!"
Naruto: "and Naruto Uzumaki!"
Guy: "6th gate, gate of view open!!"
(Guy opens 6th gate meanwhile naruto charges towards Tobi)
8-tails: "Bee we cant just stay here while naruto and guy fight him!"
Bee: "i know ya', ima bring the pain to that ashole, buh we cant take down the barrier protecting the Gedo mazo, yo"
8-tails: "so how will we get loose?"
Tobi: "you are but a couple of insects compared to my power!"
(Guy and naruto charge towards Tobi with amazing speed)
(meanwhile.. scene switches to madara vs the 5 kage)
Onoki: *this is bad, we wont be able to hold out for much longer against him*
(madara stares off into the distance)
Madara: *it seems they are stiring up trouble already, ill have to deal with them myself*
Madara: today is your lucky day kages, for i have other more important matters to attend to, but i dont want to leave you hangin' so ill leave a little gift.
Madara: *it pains me to lay such shame upon susano'o but im forced to have to deal with them*
(Madara activates the perfect susano'o again)
Madara: "you cant win when going against an unstoppable force! its futile to try"
(madara dissappears off sight as susano'o appears)
-end-

600: Interception!

(Madara's susano'o charges at the kages, the kages are busy running from it in an attempt to not get killed)
Tsunade: "whats the plan!? we cant evade this thing for much longer!"
Onoki: "such power.. i.. i dont know what to do."
Raikage: "stay in the game you old geezer. we need you in this"
Onoki: *maybe if i get another shot at it with my dust release, but how?*
(susano'o is throwing a punch towards onoki but tsunade and raikage match its strength together with gaara's sand and prevent the hit from landing on onoki then the mizukage uses lava release which covers most of the susano'o and then hardens to molten rock as she continously sprays it with it)
(at this point the 5 kages are all close to eachother)
Onoki: *thats it!*
Raikage: come on you old geezer, dont tell me you broke your back again! whats the plan?
Onoki: "i know what to do! listen up.."
(scene switches to Tobi vs Guy)
Tobi: "Shinra tensei!!"
(Guy is sent flying back, rolls a bit on the ground and then quickly gets on his feet)
Guy: *-_- he just keeps pushing me away..*
Naruto: *this is my chance!!*
Naruto: "wind style: rasen-shuriken"
(the rasenshuriken is thrown at tobi)
Tobi: *damn i wont be able to use shinra tensei in time!*
(scene switches to Kages vs Susano'o)
Onoki: "now!"
(Raikage and tsunade are lifted by gaaras sand meanwhile susano'o is covered by mizukage's lava release which again solidifies to molten rock)
Raikage: "now or never!!"
(raikage uses the sand to get a push off of it and is now moving at lightning speed while holding tsunade, then he releases her towards the susano'o)
Tsunade: "AHHHHH!!!"
Onoki: *she will make it in time, mizukages jutsu is very powerful and can hold the susano'o for atleast a few seconds. this will work!*
(tsunade moving at lightning speed lands a tremendous punch using all her chakra on the ground right before susano'o. the ground breaks and everything begins to fall(like in 2012 movie^-^))
(while falling in the giant hole on the ground caused by tsunade the susano'o breaks free)
Gaara: giant Sand burial!
(gaara turns all the rocks around the susano'o into sand and uses it to press the susano'o uderground)
Onoki: *this is it*
(onoki flies right above the susano'o buried in the sand)
onoki: "dust release!"
(the dust release goes into the sand burial meanwhile destroying everything its touching)
Gaara: "we have done it"
onoki: "it would seem madara fled while we fought the susano'o however"
raikage: "that coward!"
(scene switches to naruto meanwhile his rasen shuriken is flying towards tobi)
naruto: *wh.. what is that!?*
(scene switches to madara who just arrived at his destination but its unclear where he is)
Madara: (with his arms crossed and staring down) "What do we have here"
-end-

601: The unexpectable

(through some woods, sasuke and orochimaru are doing there branch hopping thing(lol))
Sasuke: *the way we are headed.. its towards konoha*
Orochimaru: "im sure you've realized our destination by now, sasuke?" (smiling)
Sasuke: ".."
(as they arrive by the front gate madara is looking down on them from the top of the konoha wall straight above the gate)
Madara: Madara: (with his arms crossed and staring down) "What do we have here"
Orochimaru: "tch!" *what the hell is he doing here!?*
Sasuke: "and who are you?"
(sasuke seems clam but orochimaru seems nervous now as madara jumps down and lands a couple meters from them)
Madara: "my name is Madara Uchiha"
sasuke: (eyes widen as he has flashbacks of hearing bout madara from 9 tails and tobi, then his eyes calm) so your who ive heard so much about.
Madara: "..."
sasuke: "it seems you were also brought back by the edo tensei, but my brother and i looked to it that it was stopped. how are you still here?"
Orochimaru: (smiles) "Madara is too clever for such tricks"
Madara: "so you stopped edo tensei? hm so you have potential"
sasuke: "..."
madara: "it makes no difference to how i am still here. the only thing conserning you should be facing me because you wont get into konoha unless through my dead body"
sasuke: (activates EMS) "that should be easy enough considering you are already dead!"
orochimaru: "dont be too hast sasuke"
madara: *lets see how powerful he really is*
(sasuke charges towards madara with his blade out meanwhile madara stands firm and calm)
(scene switch to the kages)
tsunade: "im just about out of chakra.."
Onoki: "we cant leave madara loose. he can change the outcome of this war"
Raikage: *i cant believe the amount of power he has..*
Gaara: "its not so bad he left, i doubt we wouldve won that battle. atleast we know his powers now"
Onoki: "right. we need to group a team of fine shinobi to.."
(a loud noise is heard and then the ground begins to shake)
tsunade: "what is that!?"
(the susano'o comes out of the ground)
kages: !!!
-end-



you guys like my predictions? ^-^
 
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No. theres no way Tobi can face Naruto in plain taijutsu while he is in Bijuu mode, Naruto's strength would easily over power him, secondly, he might be Obito. Also KillerBee is pinned down by tobi's attack. Madara refuses to bring out his perfect susanoo again 1 it would bring him shame, and has already stated he wouldnt bring it out again, and two, dosent need it. Cant imagine Tobi using the Shinra tensei, but it is possible. The 5kage out running perfect susanoo? they can barely stand, and, come on, out running something that big? running? Madara takes one swipe and they all go flying. Perfect susanoo is unavoidable. Naruto threw rasenshuriken? well, if Tobi is usuing the rinnigan abilities, he should be able to absorb it. or he can just shift part of him so he wont be hurt by it. Also, Tobi could use Bansho Tenin to draw them in one by one to Kamui them. The kage know that jutsu wont help them, so why would they waste even more chakra on trying to kill madara when they can only seal him? The Mizukage would have to create a pretty gigantic lava release to hold the giant perfect susano. And its hard to believe that perfect susano wouldnt be able to break free. This needs to be worked on more, too many errors
 
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No. theres no way Tobi can face Naruto in plain taijutsu while he is in Bijuu mode, Naruto's strength would easily over power him, secondly, he might be Obito. Also KillerBee is pinned down by tobi's attack. Madara refuses to bring out his perfect susanoo again 1 it would bring him shame, and has already stated he wouldnt bring it out again, and two, dosent need it. Cant imagine Tobi using the Shinra tensei, but it is possible. The 5kage out running perfect susanoo? they can barely stand, and, come on, out running something that big? running? Madara takes one swipe and they all go flying. Perfect susanoo is unavoidable. Naruto threw rasenshuriken? well, if Tobi is usuing the rinnigan abilities, he should be able to absorb it. or he can just shift part of him so he wont be hurt by it. Also, Tobi could use Bansho Tenin to draw them in one by one to Kamui them. The kage know that jutsu wont help them, so why would they waste even more chakra on trying to kill madara when they can only seal him? The Mizukage would have to create a pretty gigantic lava release to hold the giant perfect susano. And its hard to believe that perfect susano wouldnt be able to break free. This needs to be worked on more, too many errors
youre right bout most things except
1 what do u mean by telling me that the 8 tails is pinned? i know that. he didnt do shit in my predictions..
2 they stopped the perfect susano'o once already, they could do it again (possible)
3 they survived it as well, and running (evading its attacks) as in when he attacks they try and run out of the way. but i see your point in the difficulty it would be to evade the susano'o
4 how tf will tobi absorb his rasenshuriken, if he didnt use that ability at his hand why didnt he do it the 2 times he got hit by rasengans, or at any point ever?
5 why would he shift to the other dimension if theres mass multi shadow clones waiting to rasengan him
6 what jutsu u say the kages knows wont help them? thats the jutsu they used to stop the susano'o in the first place..
7 mizukage has 2 kekkai genkai, plus she is a kage after all. it would not be a surprise if she can do very cool and powerful jutsus
EDIT: 8 remember the naruto he fought was just a clone, so though he was in bijuu mode, clones do have a limit. do u expect it to fight tobi to his near death or some shit? its a clone

youre right about a few though, it does have errors here and there but i was typing as it was coming to me in the spot. it was a freestyle prediction
 
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youre right bout most things except
1 what do u mean by telling me that the 8 tails is pinned? i know that. he didnt do shit in my predictions..
2 they stopped the perfect susano'o once already, they could do it again (possible)
3 they survived it as well, and running (evading its attacks) as in when he attacks they try and run out of the way. but i see your point in the difficulty it would be to evade the susano'o
4 how tf will tobi absorb his rasenshuriken, if he didnt use that ability at his hand why didnt he do it the 2 times he got hit by rasengans, or at any point ever?
5 why would he shift to the other dimension if theres mass multi shadow clones waiting to rasengan him
6 what jutsu u say the kages knows wont help them? thats the jutsu they used to stop the susano'o in the first place..
7 mizukage has 2 kekkai genkai, plus she is a kage after all. it would not be a surprise if she can do very cool and powerful jutsus
EDIT: 8 remember the naruto he fought was just a clone, so though he was in bijuu mode, clones do have a limit. do u expect it to fight tobi to his near death or some shit? its a clone

youre right about a few though, it does have errors here and there but i was typing as it was coming to me in the spot. it was a freestyle prediction
bolded 1: you made killerbee seem like he could still do something.

bolded 2: They did? i remember P. susano was gonna kill them until it disappeared due to edo tensei release.

bolded 3: Well if your making him do shinra tensei he should be able to use bansho tenin, and should be able to absorb chakra, he's never used shinra tensei so why are you making him use it now? Besides, both times he was caught by surprise.

bolded 4: They never stopped perfect susanoo. any justu they use against him wont do anything. it can just swing once and blow away all jutsu.
 

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im possitive 100% killerbee wont stay stuck by the pins the entire battle.. so yes imo he will do somethign to get loose

i could be wrong, but didnt the susano'o get destroyed by dust release and madara stated that the kages knew that they couldnt harm him or something but it was just a distraction to get the susano'o ?

he has nagato's eyes (nagato could only use shinra tensei. he needs another path to do bansho tenin, noo ??

btw i made some corrections and reposted in another thread. take a look. but i didnt address too much.
 

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im possitive 100% killerbee wont stay stuck by the pins the entire battle.. so yes imo he will do somethign to get loose

i could be wrong, but didnt the susano'o get destroyed by dust release and madara stated that the kages knew that they couldnt harm him or something but it was just a distraction to get the susano'o ?

he has nagato's eyes (nagato could only use shinra tensei. he needs another path to do bansho tenin, noo ??

btw i made some corrections and reposted in another thread. take a look. but i didnt address too much.
Nagato could summon, shinra tensei, absorb chakra, and use asura path ability. Re-read Nagato VS Naruto, Itachi and Bee.
 
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