[Romance] Man Devourer

[Waindo]

*dedicated to da ladies

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She has captured your heart,
On a bait of souls she would greedily feed.
Than threw it on the floor;
Stomping it, watching it bleed.

She spotted your weakness,
Moved in on her prey.
Extracted all of your love
Throwing it all away.

Their tears made her strong,
And she enjoyed watching men fall,
Lying and breaking hearts;
Answering her true call.

Her heart is made of stone
Man devourer is her name.
Mistress of reeking havoc;
She loves playing this game.

 

[Zealotic]

I get it

 

[Waindo]

We all do. :T_T:

 

[Luciform]

And she enjoyed watching men fall, hmm

nice one.. and is it supposed to be lying not lieing, babe?

 

[Waindo]

And she enjoyed watching men fall, hmm

nice one.. and is it supposed to be lying not lieing, babe?

Thx for noticing that mistake. English is not my native language afterall ^^ Glad you liked the piece.

 

[Beyond the Horizon]

Ayyeeee, this was good . Just two little spelling corrections. It's spotted, not spoted and throwing, not threwing.

 

[Waindo]

Ayyeeee, this was good . Just two little spelling corrections. It's spotted, not spoted and throwing, not threwing.

Aye aye correcting those right away. Don't eat me!

 

[Ryu Kishi]

this reminds me of chaucers wife of baths tale.

 

[Waindo]

Heard of Chaucer, never read 'im.

 

[Beyond the Horizon]

Aye aye correcting those right away. Don't eat me!

Only because I care . It's perf now :hooray:.

 

[Waindo]

Only because I care . It's perf now :hooray:.

Yay! Thanx

Bon apetit!

 

[Mis]

I really like the way you wrote the poem, plus the message behind it~
And, despite being a female myself, I have to agree with you. But there are inconsiderate people of both gender. Do not worry, you will eventually find someone who will love you dearly. In the meantime, keep getting inspired to write this beautifully

 

[Waindo]

Now thats a feedback!. Nah Ill pass, been in a rs till few months ago. I'll rather be sane for a while. XD