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''Do whatever you think is right! That's the way of Sunagakure!''

Basic Information

Name: Makarov Dreyar
Nickname: Sunagakure's Maniac.
Gender: Male
Age: 89
Clan: Akimichi Kiyoshi

Looks: Makarov is an extremely short elderly man. He has black eyes, and is growing bald with only the outer rims of his head containing white hair. He also has a thick white mustache with black stamp of Fairy Tail that covers his entire chest area with two pouches strapped on his hip hidden with useful tools. Once he goes berserk, his head get's covered with veins out of anger, his eyes turn completely white, and his voice becomes extremely heavy.

Personality: Makarov is a person who is able to love and believe in people, He also dislikes being called a kid for someone his age. He also has his own eccentric side, wearing an unusual hat or doing insane poses. Another trait is his docile perverted nature.​

Village Information

Village of Birth:
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- Konohagakure.
Village of Alliance:
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- Sunagakure.​

Rank and Chakra Information

Ninja Rank: Official Sage
Specialty: Wind, Fuuinjutsu, Kiyoshi arts.
Elements & Ninjutsu:

  • 火 Fire Release - Completed
  • 風 Wind Release - Mastered
  • 雷 Lightning Release - Completed
  • 土 Earth Release - Completed
  • 水 Water Release - Completed
  • 雨 Rain Release - Completed
  • ア Aluminium - Completed
  • Ninjutsu - Completed
  • Taijutsu - Completed
  • NB Taijutsu - Completed
  • Kenjutsu - Completed
  • Genjutsu - Completed
  • Fūinjutsu - Completed
  • Kiyoshi Arts - In training, almost mastered.
  • Summoning - Snakes & Toads
(Han'you Fūin) - Generic Sealing Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary , Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: This technique is a standard ninja skill which allows a ninja to summon an assortment of items or weapons that have been stored using Fūinjutsu,typically they are stored within scrolls. When needed, the owner will activate the seals releasing their item or weapon of choice. Scrolls can also be used as ammunition for other weapons. The items themselves are unaffected by time. This Technique allows the user to seal any weapons they wish being their own or opponents.
Note: Cannot seal opponent's custom weapons, or the special weapons of a particular character ( example: Samehada or Kubikiribocho ).
Note: Can only seal corpses, and not injured people regardless of the extent of their injury.

Background Information
History: Makarov was born in the beloved family somewhere in a small village within Konohagakure. His Father named Maka was a known shinobi and a true artist of the Akimichi clan which fell in love with a beautiful woman with long blonde hair named Mira, they married together and lived six happy years together until the first great shinobi world war destroyed everything including their house. The breakdown was so intense that they died within the house except one little baby of two months old, named Makarov Akimichi.

After the first great shinpbi world war, exactly seven years ago, a man named Goro found the little child hidden in a basement. Thereafter, Goro decided to take the little child with him and hidden somewhere deep underground underneath the destroyed village, where nobody could find them. Goro was the man that took care of Makarov, after becoming a student of the Ninja Academy Makarov got interested in everything related to Taijutsu, after becoming genin, Goro gave Makarov a shelter where they both lived in there for two years, in those two years, Makarov found out about the Akimichi abilities and never knew why he was so fat during his childhood and kept asking Goro to give him further information, however, he declined and kept everything secret from him even tho he knew every secret behind the little kid. After becoming a Chuunin at an age of nine years old, Goro decided to tell him everything he must know, and trained him to the utmost. He gave him knowledge about everything related to Taijutsu, and taught him how to enlarge his body parts until the day came that Goro thought that he had learned enough, and knew he was substantive enough to live on his own.

Goro; Farewell... Son.

After sixteen years, being at a age of twenty-five, Makarov has learned the elements from sages and one of the strongest shinobi's. Vergil, the one whom was specialized in the Wind element had to go trough a hard time learning him everything he should know about the Wind element when afterwards Akiza learned him the special and hot element, training him for six long months the arts of the fire element and Genjutsu while all the time, combining his taijutsu specialty with the elements he has learned when subsequently finding the Lightning specialist whom everyone knows, Kirabi, learning everything he can and could, mastering it in a short time when after a while, when Makarov kept searching for his destination, he found both two legends named Alucard and Gatsndshanks, Alucard teaching Makarov everything he must know and learned from Bishamon whom he assigns it to Makarov whilst Gatsndshanks learns him everything about the water element... therefore having learned everything he should know...

After going trough the intense training he received from one of the strongest, he made close friends while traveling from village to village which where Crow, Yusuke, and Jinbei, making new friends, enemies and rivals. However, he always was interested in the special 'Kiyoshi arts' of Jinbei and asked him everything he could ask, and got answered closely and hence now having contact with Roku which he searched for and received some training, and he was the only one who knew how to learn someone the Kiyoshi arts whilst being an Akimichi... until he has reached the destination... Sunagakure...

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Makarov stood in front of the ten meters thick wall, while two shinobi's stood in front of the gate, which looked at me while one of them smiled at me.

Jacob moore; Ah, Makarov my friend, it's been a long time!

Makarov; Ja.. Jacob! Yeah.. After everything, I decided to come after-all ^_^

Jacob moore; Ah well... Glad to have you back, I guess your coming here to talk with the Hokage?

After naming the word 'Hokage' Makarov nodded and within a eye blink, Jacob made a few handseals and stomped his hands on the ground, opening up the gates while warmth flooded in his body, being happy and relieved at the same time. After he stood in front of the Hokage office, about to knock the door, a man that Makarov previously known opened the door.

The Pervy Sage; What in the world are you doing here?!

Makarov; I know what you might think bu...

The Pervy Sage; GET OUT! IMMEDIATELY!

After screaming at Makarov, a man with a hat and long black hair, a white skin color spoke.

Emperor; Pervy, Calm down, let's see what he has to say.

Makarov; I came here... to ask you if I could become a Shinboi... of Sunagakure.​

After having a long conversation and discussion, they came to a decision to let him join the village, The pervy sage however wasn't happy, not at all, but after a while they could interact with each other and after a while even becoming friends, Makarov himself also made new friends named House, Zoro.. Rexi, Wesobi, Vision and Wind while still being a very close friend with Jacob moore and leaving the Village sometimes, searching for Roku to receive further training.

After being a year in Sunagakure, he became a trusted member, trusted and beloved, he did everything to put the village on top as members kept fading from the village. They wanted a whole other experience, they left, and traveled to another village. And eventually, Sunagakure became the weakest as they heard rumors that Konohagakure, Akatsuki and many other villages caused for havoc in the ninja world when Makarov then wanted to change everything, and get the village back on top as their very own Kazekage Jacob moore, got ill. Makarov wanted the new comers and the weaker one to get stronger, to learn how to fight and defeat, and kill every invader when eventually the village thought that he had done so much for everyone that they wanted Makarov Drayer, to become their very own Seventh Kazekage and is working to make the village number one again until the day he dies.

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Abilities​

Taijutsu; While training for three long years he became one of the greatest taijutsu user, he received training of one of the best named Goro. As evident of his small size but muscular build, Makarov possesses a high degree of physical strength, during his training with Goro they fought several times like beasts. After receiving all information from a strong Taijutsu specialist, Makarov also became a melee specialist, with hand-to-hand combat, paired with Akimichi abilities, being the main element of his fighting style he was shown making short work of different missing-ninjas, defeating some of them with fast and accurate punches and others through sheer physical strength, and could also engage in close-range combat with Goro. Makarov can also utilize the style known as "Strong Fist" to the fullest. Makarov was aslo shown capable of easily dispatching several opponents in unarmed combat even without the aid of his Akimichi abilites which he mastered using only both strong punches and simple grips to overwhelm his foes. Along with his Jeet kune Do Makarov gains 3x the ability to read through enemy taijutsu and movement, capable of reacting with enormous speed when compared to an average Strong Fist user.​

Chakra; Makarov has also gained a strong and enduring body with very high chakra reserves and precise chakra control, he also is capable of changing techniques with great speed, as well as switching between elemental techniques with ease and has immense stamina by constantly pushing his own limits, allowing him to recover from extreme exhaustion in an alarming short period of time​

Kiyoshi; Kiyoshi ability deals with powerful strikes and giving attacks a more explosive and pulsive effect as well as using energy. The secret to the Kiyoshi Clan’s abilities lies in utilizing chakra at its purest and most natural (and semi-tangible) form. This ranges from shooting pulses of energy to using chakra to expand the range of weapons to surging one’s chakra into another’s body through contact. Members of the Kiyoshi Clan focus much of their effort in acquiring the ability to focus in on and sense Energy so that they can gather the Energy from the environment and utilize it. As such, the members that are more adept at feeling Energy can locate the specific Energy sources of living entities (trees, animals, and most human beings) and non-living objects alike since all things of the world, in Kiyoshi Philosophy, give off some sort of energy of their own, be it spiritual, physical, or natural (physical energy is extremely difficult to sense because of its lack of metaphysical properties). The Kiyoshi Clan’s fighting style is a mix of Tai Chi (to control calm movement of energy, best utilized by Kiyoshi Masters), Hung Ga (to control stable and powerful movement of energy), and Northern Shaolin Kung Fu (for close combat). The Kiyoshi Clan’s energy is based to be sent out in pulses. When in combat, they can utilize the energy, which causes their hands and/or feet to glow whatever color coincides with their personality and ability [green, blue, red, white, ect. (Distinct colors only occur in Kiyoshi Generals and higher)] and when they direct an attack, right before contact an invisible/visible “pulse” of chakra is sent out of their fists/feet to make an explosive effect when a clan member delivers a punch or kick that can send the opponent back many feet. Movement also plays a big role in the use of pure chakra/energy. The larger/bigger the motion during movement made to utilize energy, the more energy will be produced. Masters of the Kiyoshi art are signified by a significant glow in their eyes when utilizing the energy, and they can use it much more effectively than normal members. The ability is called Konki Myaku (Energy Pulse). (The reason why those with Kekei Genkai cannot utilize the ability is because their chakra is different from regular chakra and their bloodline effects their chakra in a way that it is configured to work a certain way, thus their chakra can never be ''pure''. People with Tailed Beasts can learn to purify their chakra, but it would be nearly impossible due to their bijuu’s influence on their chakra.)​

Wind; The wind element was the first element Makarov has learned from the legendary Vergil, their trained for over two years and Makarov himself kept using wind technique's whenever he got the chance, he fought with only Taijutsu and Wind based technique's when fighting enemies and foes, he also where near equal to Vergil, hence now being able to use wind based technique's with the usage of one handseal.​

Intelligence; After fighting hundred of fights in Sunagakure and outside the village he kept writing notes in his note book, where he has written everything his opponent was capable of, his/her KG and abilities. After fighting Sharingan, Byakugan, Sage mode and several other users with special abilities and researched everything about them, he now knows allot of them and knows exactly what to do during a battle against them after studying and looking in the note book a couple of times a day, copied almost everything in his mind, to go to the utmost against his opponent(s) during a battle.

Generic Sealing Technique Makarov has a seal on his right wrist (Like Sasuke when fighting against Itachi) which can be activated whenever he wants, once inserting chakra trough it thus increasing the amount he carries at any one time and launch speed. During his training with Wesobi in Fuuinjutsu, he has sealed thousands of shurikens and kunai's and several wire strings with two fūma shuriken's in the seal along with a chokutō so when inserting a amount of chakra trough it, Makarov can decide by himself what to summon, but he has to state in his description during a fight when he inserts chakra to summon a certain tool of course.​

Akimichi; By forcibly converting the body's fat reserves into chakra, each successive pill ingested gives a tremendous power boost. The Chilli Pill is even said to increase one's power a hundred times. However, the pills have a drawback. Each pill damages the body, poisoning it and since the third pill converts all one's fat reserves, the user will become dangerously emaciated. It is said that after the third pill, death is imminent. However, the Nara clan has apparently done extensive research on the Akimichi and their pills.

Three Coloured Pills
(Sanshoku no Gan'yaku) Three Coloured Pills
Type: Supplementary
Rank: N/A
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description:
The Three Coloured Pills are secret medicines used by the Akimichi clan. As the name suggests, there are three pills, each with a different colour. First is the green Spinach Pill (Hōrengan), next is the yellow Curry Pill (Karēgan), and last is the red Chilli Pill (Tongarashigan). By forcibly converting the body's fat reserves into chakra, each successive pill ingested gives a tremendous power boost by forcefully pushing the normal metabolism and abilities of the Akimichi clan members beyond their normal limit. However, each pill poses a great risk on the user. Forcing such process upon the body makes the user lose much of his body mass, specially all of the fat. Not only that, but, as the fat is metabolized into energy, it leaves many poisonous and toxic byproducts within the body. While in the normal rate of the metabolism, these are dealt with and eliminated before they can do any harm, in an accelerated metabolism they accumulate in high amounts before the body can expel them. This poisons the body and produces enormous physical damage. As each pill is consumed, more power is released inside the user but more damage he takes from its use.

(Horengan) Spinach Pill - The first pill and the most basic ones. Any Jounin rank Akimichi can use this and it grants the user a slightly higher physical strength (+10 to Taijutsu), speed and chakra (+5 to all Ninjutsu). After eating it, the effects last for 5 turns. Once those pass, the user is left unable to mold techniques above S-Rank for 4 turns.

(Karegan) Curry Pill - The second pill and the first one considered dangerous. Any S-Class Ninja ranked Akimichi can user it. One must have already eaten the Spinach Pill and be under its effects before eating the Curry Pill. Once eaten, the user gains another boost in strength (an additional +15 to Taijutsu), speed (user gains the speed boost equivalent to 1st gate) and chakra (an additional +10 to Ninjutsu) for another additional 4 turns. Once those pass, the user is unable to mold techniques above A-Rank for 5 turns and is left severely injured and physically limited.

(Tongarashigan) Chili Pill - The third and last pill but also the most dangerous of all. Can only be used by Sannin Rank and above Akimichi ninjas and its effects are much more drastic than those of the other 2 pills. To gain access to its power boost, the user must be under the effects of the other 2 pills, thus the enormous risk this pill comes with. The strength is increased to enormous levels (an additional +20 to Taijutsu), speed (now equivalent to 3rd Gate) and chakra (an additional +10 to Ninjutsu). While becoming insanely strong, the user also becomes utterly vulnerable. The effects of the pill are fleeting and the user has 3 turns to win, because otherwise, he loses since once the pill wears off, the user is left unable to move, barely conscious and unable to mold chakra.

Note: Each pill can only be eaten once and each count as a move.
Note: User can't be in Sage Mode to use nor enter Sage Mode after use.
Note: Usable until the user masters Calorie Control, after which point, they become obsolete (unusable)

Theme Song and Background Music:​


Battles

Won: Some battles
Lost: An acceptable... amount.​

Updated
Updated the History.
Updated the Speciality's/Elements/Ninjutsu.
Added in the category ''Abilities'' both Intelligence and Generic Sealing Technique
It's been validated by Scorps and Roku that this is allowed as you all can see in my previous update.​


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"It doesn't matter if you say the true origin of Chakra is "Darkness", It doesn't matter if you say it's "Light" either. Chakra is alive. Its place changes over time and it grows along with us. Chakra is anything you can think of. It can be felt in infinite ways... as light, as darkness, as red, or as blue and it is living freely, together along side all of us."

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Edited Abilities>Akimichi>Pills part, updating the pills according the the updated jutsu
 
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Lol it say almost Master Kiyoshi. Lol I bet you don't even understand how energy is made and the difference of the energy around us and in us?

Take everything Akimichi out because Caliburn is going to tell you to, so just do it before he do it. No matter what any other rp mod said, it is a rule and needs to be follow.
 

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Lol it say almost Master Kiyoshi. Lol I bet you don't even understand how energy is made and the difference of the energy around us and in us?

Take everything Akimichi out because Caliburn is going to tell you to, so just do it before he do it. No matter what any other rp mod said, it is a rule and needs to be follow.
Bolded; Let's see about that during our training :)

And that's up for the RP mod's to decide, and Caliburn. You have no rights of speaking or telling what a mod whether should do, or decide. If it's disallowed, then Caliburn would already have declined my other biography, even if it was approved by Roku. So once again, no rights of telling what a mod should do, or decide.
 
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Bolded; Let's see about that during our training :)

And that's up for the RP mod's to decide, and Caliburn. You have no rights of speaking or telling what a mod whether should do, or decide. If it's disallowed, then Caliburn would already have declined my other biography, even if it was approved by Roku. So once again, no rights of telling what a mod should do, or decide.
Lol tell me without looking at anyone else training

But I was just telling you that :shy:
 
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