[Gimp] Magneto tag

[TheItachiUchiha]

It's not good, I could really use some tips from fellow gfxers.

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If you guys could point out what I did right and wrong I would appreciate it
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[Netferarri]

It's pretty neat mate ^_^

 

[Pirate King]

Colors look kinda dull but I'm not a gfxer of I don't know

 

[Pavoneo]

Placement: goodish
Lighting: Good
Depth: Meh, not good.
Flow: Non-existant

Placement is pretty good, but I personally would have done it a bit more to the left so it's not taking up like, half the tag which limits you a lot in a tag like this >.<

So, your depth and flow are lacking because you're forgetting one thing. C4Ds . Your C4Ds are usually what give your tag depth and flow. When you place a C4D or two in front of the render, then place a few behind the render and do some proper blurring, then you have some good depth. You also need to keep in mind that your C4Ds should also be properly placed so you could achieve proper flowing. In a tag like this I would have put the flow of the C4Ds in the general direction of how his back arm/hand is going. You tag died because there were no foreground or background C4Ds to help it. (I noticed the bubbles, that doesn't count, that's a finishing tool )

 

[TheItachiUchiha]

Placement: goodish
Lighting: Good
Depth: Meh, not good.
Flow: Non-existant

Placement is pretty good, but I personally would have done it a bit more to the left so it's not taking up like, half the tag which limits you a lot in a tag like this >.<

So, your depth and flow are lacking because you're forgetting one thing. C4Ds . Your C4Ds are usually what give your tag depth and flow. When you place a C4D or two in front of the render, then place a few behind the render and do some proper blurring, then you have some good depth. You also need to keep in mind that your C4Ds should also be properly placed so you could achieve proper flowing. In a tag like this I would have put the flow of the C4Ds in the general direction of how his back arm/hand is going. You tag died because there were no foreground or background C4Ds to help it. (I noticed the bubbles, that doesn't count, that's a finishing tool )

You're right I need to learn to use c4d better, I thought the bubbles were enough xD. As for flow I didn't realize I was missing it until you pointed it out which sucks cause I'm usually good at that ): I kinda tried to make the flow go upwards. Thanks for the help kind sir. My next sig will not disappoint.

 

[Chaos.]

Placement: goodish
Lighting: Meh{correction}
Depth: Not good.
Flow: Non-existant
So, your depth and flow are lacking because you're forgetting one thing. C4Ds . Your C4Ds are usually what give your tag depth and flow. When you place a C4D or two in front of the render, then place a few behind the render and do some proper blurring, then you have some good depth. You also need to keep in mind that your C4Ds should also be properly placed so you could achieve proper flowing. In a tag like this I would have put the flow of the C4Ds in the general direction of how his back arm/hand is going. You tag died because there were no foreground or background C4Ds to help it. (I noticed the bubbles, that doesn't count, that's a finishing toolthey were so bad...need to go{Correction})

I am agreeing with the ones above..
The one thing though that i am not agreeing as i corrected is the bubbles(which are horrible placed+the 2 in bottom are as good as erased) and the thing that only c4ds can make your sig have depth..I can say by experience this is fault because if you check my tags i rarely use any kind of c4ds and i achieve better depth than they can offer!With that being said though for your level it could be a bit hard to do it so i dont recommend!With that being said,i agree with every other thing Pavoneo said!​