Magi Signature

[Gintõki1]

I made the signature today. It's Kassim from Magi and one of my favorite in the series. (and my entry for a contest)
Tell me what you guys think!

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[Cauzing]

Kassim huh? Nice work mate I love the series as well.

 

[Aømine]

This shit is awesome man! Great job.
Also glad that people on here like Magi. It is a great series.

 

[Hei]

Lets see...

First of all,the signature looks empty.Kust look at the bottom or top left corner,there are too much dark space.
Second,lightning is dull.Soft white light doesn't look good enough to me,same goes to whole color palette.More colors,adjustment layers and probably fractals neede to add crisp and tachy look to the tag.
Text is mehhh,at your current level it's better to leave it simple and be careful with sub texts,you placed yours too far from main text.
Anyway,nice attempt.Keep trying.

 

[Titania Erza]

Lets see...

First of all,the signature looks empty.Kust look at the bottom or top left corner,there are too much dark space.
Second,lightning is dull.Soft white light doesn't look good enough to me,same goes to whole color palette.More colors,adjustment layers and probably fractals neede to add crisp and tachy look to the tag.
Text is mehhh,at your current level it's better to leave it simple and be careful with sub texts,you placed yours too far from main text.
Anyway,nice attempt.Keep trying.

I agree and also the text placement is aweful, may as well have put it in a corner, it should he much closer to the vocal.

 

[Kyoto Samurai]

Lets see...

First of all,the signature looks empty.Kust look at the bottom or top left corner,there are too much dark space.
Second,lightning is dull.Soft white light doesn't look good enough to me,same goes to whole color palette.More colors,adjustment layers and probably fractals neede to add crisp and tachy look to the tag.
Text is mehhh,at your current level it's better to leave it simple and be careful with sub texts,you placed yours too far from main text.
Anyway,nice attempt.Keep trying.

i agree with hei. you should also look into the rule of thirds to help with text placement