You had me interested with hello, Mother and I adore that song, but we were sorely let down. What a horrible sound to listen to in that edited version and it was extremely short. Length isn't a complaint really, make the best with what you have, but it was only eleven seconds. Hard to feel anything in that moment. Video just seemed like random things happening, which works with that poor music in some way, but there is nothing behind it. Just random clips to me. Nothing gelled with me, Mother hated it even more so, but it was a good first try.
Mother and I hope you do better in the future.