Lyrics

[IcedFox]

Hey guys, I just wanted to share this with you. I had a random brainstorm while on a nightshift today (I'm still on the shift actually). Anyway, some lyrics to a song maybe.

Give me your feedback

Believe, Deceive
Decide, defeat
Trust in God to be.

Lie, Die
Time, Goodbye
Heaven ain't so high

I never understood
what it all meant
Until I lost it all
I tried to break your wall
And you cast me aside
What ever was I to you?​

 

[leti46]

Nice ! Do you have a melody to go with this ?

 

[IcedFox]

Nice ! Do you have a melody to go with this ?

Thanks, glad you liked it

Well, yeah in my head...it'll be harder to put the melody on paper

 

[Princess Kaguya]

I like them but the color you chose seriously hurts my eyes and makes it difficult to read.

 

[Urda]

I don't understand. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Plain and simple. You thought too much about it then putting your emotions into it. Your are yelling with a purpose. You want your point across.

 

[leti46]

Thanks, glad you liked it

Well, yeah in my head...it'll be harder to put the melody on paper

Haha, was that your chorus or verse? Or was that your whole song ?

 

[Urda]

What genre you are going for? RNB, Soft/Hardcore Rock, Alternative, Hip Hop & Rap..... What?

 

[IcedFox]

What genre you are going for? RNB, Soft/Hardcore Rock, Alternative, Hip Hop & Rap..... What?

Trying for a Metal/Hard Rock feel.

Haha, was that your chorus or verse? Or was that your whole song ?

Oh hardly. It's just a random brainstorm moment.

 

[IcedFox]

I don't understand. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ Plain and simple. You thought too much about it then putting your emotions into it. Your are yelling with a purpose. You want your point across.

It's usually how it goes for me, sometimes is works out better than other times.

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

Nicely done .