Lunar Miku Chapter 10 *Final!!*

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Here is Chapter 10!! It's not my best chapter, considering I wrote this chapter around 2 AM. I might write a second one, if I can gather up enough material. ** I am currently working on other works, so I'll be posting up those when I finish a chapter.**
Chapter 9-
Chapter 8-
Chapter 7-
Chapter 6-
Chapter 5-
Chapter 4-
Chapter 3-
Chapter 2-
Chapter 1-

Chapter 10

Was she dead? She forced herself to use magic, even though she wasn't even able to use anymore. 'Where's Dad? If I'm dead then I should be able to see him, right?' she asked herself. She wanted to know why he turned evil.
She wouldn't believe that he was evil all along. If he was evil the whole time then there was need for him to be with her Mom. 'Mom.' To think her Mom's ring broke! How would she ever face here Mom again?

“Miku! Miku! Wake up!” she heard. Kodoku? That was Kodoku's voice! No, he couldn't be dead! She didn't use her magic just for him to die!

“Can you hear us, Mi?” Mitsuki asked. Mitsuki too!? How did Mitsuki die? She was only a little girl she couldn't have died!

“You're not dead, Miku. Wake up,” she heard.

She had to be hearing things. It couldn't have been. Mom!? 'I'm not dead? But I'm pretty sure I died!' she thought.

She woke up and looked around. Her Mom was sitting right next to her.

“Mom!” she exclaimed as she embraced her.

“It's okay, Miku. It's all over now,” her Mom said happily.

“Thank you, Miku. I can see Mitsuki and everyone else again,” she heard.

“Taki! You're alive!?” she shouted.

“As am I,” she heard.

“Yaburu!? Everyone is alive? But you two died!” she exclaimed as tears started to roll down her cheeks.

“You saved everyone, Miku. Your magic somehow brought them back to us,” Kikai explained.

She looked at Kodoku, and she got lost in his eyes as usual. “It's finally over,” she said.

“Yeah,” he said.

“Oh yeah, I never replied to you, Kodoku,” she said. “I love you too.” Then she leaned in and kissed him.

“You finally confessed to him, Miku!” Kuroi and Katei said together.

There was only one thing left for her to do. She had to rebuild the lake, and she wanted everybody's help. Everybody was family to her now, and family helped each other. Not to mention, they all loved the lake after seeing it!

The End.

For now. Maybe.
 

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Good ..wel made
 

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well sad......think u
 

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That was amazing!
one of the best stories I've ever read!:)

Girl,you're fantastic!;)
I'm officially a fan of yours!!:)
 

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That was amazing!
one of the best stories I've ever read!:)

Girl,you're fantastic!;)
I'm officially a fan of yours!!:)

Thanks. ^^ And wait until I start putting up one of my other 2 works. :) I'm really into them, even more than a usual story. :eek:
 

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Thanks. ^^ And wait until I start putting up one of my other 2 works. :) I'm really into them, even more than a usual story. :eek:

I'll make sure I read them once you release them:)
just don't forget to notify me when you do so;)
 
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