[Photoshop] Luffy D Monkey Signature

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Phew ok I'm officially dead tired lol

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Personally I think I did a great job :)
 
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Now alright. Personal CnC is on the way..

I really gotta say, this is a new level. So you've really done what i said you to do :)

That warms me btw, cause that means i kinda get respect O_O

Anyway here goes:

First of, two focals. Like i don't like. The render is one, and the text is one. They h ave to melt together! Shaping one focal.
Also remember that the text needs to flow with the focal when you put them together. Otherwise it's look weird. Alas, this is a part i also need to work on! So you're not alone O_O

I find the background well, flowing in, not creating to much attention like not should. So that's ok. But i find that pattern that has been led over the bg disorienting. It also makes it look kinda lq.

You've really gone up levels in lighthing. Now you just have to make it blend even more, and create more realistic ways of the light. Follow the lightness of the render, see where it's lit. Then make the lightsources, then you put a fitting background(or do as me create my own background) to fit the light. Not reverse!

Still no depth! No part is clearer/more blurred out than another. So, it doesn't have any deep feeling into it. Make it feel 3D, even it's just 2D. Use the sharpen/blur tools. Not just over the render ofc, but over the whole image!


Needs more blending aswell! See the black lines around Luffy? They make it looks unblended. You either blend it more with the smudge tool(not the bg, i mean the render). Or, you select the render and simply remove a pixel off it's canvas. But yeah, smudge it instead..

Needs border imo, to create a more focused image. If you don't know how to do that, you can look that up on either youtube or deviantart.com

So. You need to focus now on;
1. DEPTH
2. Not creating multiple focals!!
3. More blending(take it to the next level)
4. Make the lightning fit the render in first hand, not the background!


That's pretty much it right now..
Keep going!
 
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