[CJ] Lucifer and Priest

[Lucifer]

Alright, I'll go first yeah ^^

pretty simple technique, any questions ?

(Doton: Akuma no Hana) - Earth Style: Demonic Flower
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user will focus his doton chakra through the ground and form a range of three handseals causing a flower of earth to rise up under the opponents, with the target in the middel of it, wrapping itself around the whole body of the opponent, with many thorns inisde it, with the size of an kunai and as they are thorns they will tear the flesh open of the enemy hence the name "Demonic Flower". And the moment it closes it releases all the oxygen inside of it as it doesn't take unnecessary space it directly climbs up, thus pushing the oxygen out, and goes back undeground suffocating the targets. This jutsu represents the carnivorous plants, the user can make it rise up anywhere on the battlefield. [

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Note: Can only be taught by Lucifer.
Note: This jutsu can only be used trice per battle.
Note: The user cannot use any earth techniques the following turn.

 

[Priest]

A very useful technique. I like the fact that its not a weapon you throw which is too common. Also it is something close to what I had in mind to make, a venus fly trap.

Its self explanatory and well understood.

 

[Erzo]

Sorry for the spam, but your usernames made this quite funny.

 

[Priest]

Sorry for the spam, but your usernames made this quite funny.

Wow, did not notice that until now. *wears my crucifix for protection*


kay my turn

Doton: Tenkyo Tsuchi waku - Earth Style: Moving Earth Slide
Rank: C
Type: Sup
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15(+10 for each turn active)
Damage Point: N/A
Description: This is somewhat similar to Marvel Ice-Man's Ice Slide. The user focuses his/her doton chakra to the hands and legs and while constantly coating his legs in glossy molten mud, he also continously releases a stream of mud from one or both his/her hand which he/she extends a little bit forward so that a long Mud slide is formed conveying the user along as it extends. The mud he releases partially solidifies as soon as it is released in such a way that the upper half which will be in
contact with the user's legs is inform of a glossy mud while the lower half is solid. The user then while his legs is coated with molten mud creates a small rideable mud wave from
the top molten half of the mudslide. It appears that the user is riding a very narrow mud wave on an equally narrow solid earth sky-way. The user can ride this from his/her initial position(ground/Mid air) to any direction and can go high into mid air (not very high) and also has quick manouvreability. The user is prone to lightning when using this.
+note+
-can't use any jutsu apart from earth while using this although the user can't make handseals to sustain this
-Dormant earth slide crumbles one turn after
user passes it(this is due to the user chakra timely depletion from the slide and also revents unneccesary narrow bridges formed
from the conveyance)
-can carry only one person who holds on to the user while he rides the mud


Analise, and if there is any question.

 

[Lucifer]

Wow, did not notice that until now. *wears my crucifix for protection*


kay my turn

Doton: Tenkyo Tsuchi waku - Earth Style: Moving Earth Slide
Rank: C
Type: Sup
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 15(+10 for each turn active)
Damage Point: N/A
Description: This is somewhat similar to Marvel Ice-Man's Ice Slide. The user focuses his/her doton chakra to the hands and legs and while constantly coating his legs in glossy molten mud, he also continously releases a stream of mud from one or both his/her hand which he/she extends a little bit forward so that a long Mud slide is formed conveying the user along as it extends. The mud he releases partially solidifies as soon as it is released in such a way that the upper half which will be in
contact with the user's legs is inform of a glossy mud while the lower half is solid. The user then while his legs is coated with molten mud creates a small rideable mud wave from
the top molten half of the mudslide. It appears that the user is riding a very narrow mud wave on an equally narrow solid earth sky-way. The user can ride this from his/her initial position(ground/Mid air) to any direction and can go high into mid air (not very high) and also has quick manouvreability. The user is prone to lightning when using this.
+note+
-can't use any jutsu apart from earth while using this although the user can't make handseals to sustain this
-Dormant earth slide crumbles one turn after
user passes it(this is due to the user chakra timely depletion from the slide and also revents unneccesary narrow bridges formed
from the conveyance)
-can carry only one person who holds on to the user while he rides the mud


Analise, and if there is any question.

*crucifix goes up in flames*

lol, no questions, handy technique.

and Indeed, yeah I got the idea from zetsu actually, since he's a cannibal and all. Some pretty sweet combos can be made with that. ^^
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next up, affects every movement made by the enemy, if you use this in combination with a taijutsu tech the effects can be devastating for the opponent, he can faint or go in a state of shock. Any questions ?

(Magen: Kūdaka Sekai) - Demonic Illusion: Shattered World
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This Genjutsu affects the opponent by attacking their sense of touch and sight, by causing unbearable pain. The user will perform three hand seals (Dragon → Horse → Tiger), and then channel their chakra into their opponent’s nervous system, taking control of their senses. This jutsu then traps the opponent in a world where literally everything is made out of glass, that breaks down in sharp glass spikes with the slightest move, even by breathing. So if the victim trapped in the genjutsu would breath, it would feel if glass was piercing their lungs over and over again, even if the victim would blink, it would feel like there are small pieces of glasses stuck within the victims eyes. If they would take a step, it would feel like their leg was pierced and so on. This jutsu has been known to be extremely painful, if the victim does not break out of this technique within one turn, then he or she will pass out due to the constant pain. [

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Note: This technique can only be taught by Lucifer.
Note: This technique can only be used once per battle.
Note: The user cannot perform any type of Genjutsu for the following two turns.[

 

[Priest]

Nice genjutsu since I love Taijutsu myself. I see this as very useful.

How excrutiating is the pain? Does it cause spasm, fear and stiffness in movement?
What if the victim wants to move his arms for a handseal, a swing of sword or a punch, does this pain reflexively cause them to flinch or drop what they are holding or unable to successfully complete handseals?
Well the breathing part is inevitable, I like it, its well written.

I have no other question.

 

[Lucifer]

Nice genjutsu since I love Taijutsu myself. I see this as very useful.

How excrutiating is the pain? Does it cause spasm, fear and stiffness in movement?
What if the victim wants to move his arms for a handseal, a swing of sword or a punch, does this pain reflexively cause them to flinch or drop what they are holding or unable to successfully complete handseals?
Well the breathing part is inevitable, I like it, its well written.

I have no other question.

don't forget blinking. And thanks ^^ yeah it is, it can be used with many techniques in combination, like a layered genjutsu attack or something lol, go crazy.

If your opponent has some kind of technique that makes him impervious to pain (like glass in your eye pain while he blinks, or his arms getting stabbed from every direction with glass if he moves it), well then he can move. The more you struggle the more pain you'll feel..So yes it's capable of restricting your movements. For example once you've expierenced the pain you'll be afraid to move again, and rightfully so. The Sense of touch is completely under your control, and realistically speaking your opponent wouldn't be able to move his arm if it was stabbed by glass from everywhere in RL, unless he is numb to pain.

 

[Priest]

Good.


Magen: Rosuto Sorrisu no Garathorne - Demonic Illusion: Lost Souls of Galathorne

Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra: 30
Damage: 60
Description: After making 6 handseals, the user casts a genjutsu upon an opponent while he immediately follows up with water manipulation. This is an advance genjutsu/water combination where the opponent immediately sees himself bound from behind(like pretta path holding sage-Naruto while sucking his chakra) by an earthy creature that looks like an elvish golem which becomes stiff immediately leaving the opponent bound and unable to move. At the same time he is bound, another elf would rise 5 meters infront of the opponent holding a katana. This Figure is fully erect split seconds after the oponent is bound, then it pushes forward stabbing the opponent with its earthy katana. The katana would pierce through the opponent and into the first earthy figure binding the opponent and it becomes stiff too leaving the katana hanging through the opponent. In real life as soon as the genjutsu is trigered, the user kneads his
suiton chakra underground, making an elvish humanoid golem made of water to rise from beneath/behind the opponent restricting him just like in the genjutsu. Everything in the genjutsu happens in real life but the only difference now is that both figures are made of water meaning the opponent takes the full damage the katana stab which in real life would be a katana made of water.
++No A-rank Genjutsu and water in the next
turn
++it takes the same time to perform this as it takes to perform 2 techniques and it counts as two techniques
++Useable only twice per match
++Does not require water source
++Must be taught by Priest


kay, Analysis and questions.

 

[Lucifer]

Love this one.

no questions

 

[Priest]

Kay, enjoy!