Love When You're Dead

[ikikouchiha9668]

Hey guys. Sorry, I haven't written a poem in forever! I just haven't been inspired/active. Feedback is always appreciated <3
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Head under water
I can't breath
No way can I make this out alive
I'll drown before you can even apologize

Rope around my neck
Screaming my lungs out
You're all frozen
Plastered grins on your face

When I'm gone
In between heaven and hell
Do not make a butterfly
Out of a caterpillar

 

[foxyladyland]

hello tehee .
I like rice krispy treats.
This poem was nice and neat.
:bouncy:

 

[ikikouchiha9668]

hello tehee .
I like rice krispy treats.
This poem was nice and neat.
:bouncy:

Thank you c:

 

[LitAquarius]

Loved it.

 

[ikikouchiha9668]

Loved it.

Thank you ^-^

 

[darkprince]

Nice poem .

 

[ikikouchiha9668]

Nice poem .

Thank you c:

 

[Kishi Uzumaki]

Hey don't die I'm coming to save you
and i can cut that rope
but I'm not a good swimmer
I will die with you

Great poem .

 

[ikikouchiha9668]

Hey don't die I'm coming to save you
and i can cut that rope
but I'm not a good swimmer
I will die with you

Great poem .

Wonderful.
Thank you very much c: