Love is a blind lie

izinagi54

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i am blinded by your beauty
that i never saw your cruelity
you have drained my life
with a knife

my love is a dying dove
shredded wings of death and dispair
yet you stare at with a hateful glare

life is a true lie
it was never created by a divine
my heart bleeds with the knife
on this dark and holow night

you red *****
you just want more and more
finally you have it forever more
now put me in the morque

i was blinded by lust and love
but i tear the dove that is light
and let my soul fil with the night.

for your sight inspires hate
for you can not relate or resasitate

I SHALL LET DEATH TAKE ME!
WERE I WILL MEET THE DARK INSIDE!
LET MY DEMON LOOSE!
so you can hang by the noose

oh criminal of love
burn in hell all above
you screams help
desolves into sheers of pain
like the night which was caused by your knife.

dark part
F%$^ YOU LOVE.
YOU HAVE KILLED MY DOVE
NOW SHUT UP MY HEARTS PAIN
O DEVIL ABOVE

-
CHRIS!
 

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im actually hurt right now

someone preaches to me they don't believe in love
but i preach to them not to give up
then they use me...... tell me would you feel hurt
 

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im actually hurt right now

someone preaches to me they don't believe in love
but i preach to them not to give up
then they use me...... tell me would you feel hurt

Nice poem dude..btw i cant tell u cuz i dnt believe in love
 

KyoshiroSenju

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I should be the one welcome you i have been here for a while lol
 

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Its so dark yet a really gud poem :eek:
 

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Yes, love is a very rare thing indeed and to find true love is one of the most complex things in life. I liked your poem as I could feel the meanings behind the words.

And I'm sorry for what you went through.
 
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